Let’S Get Writing!!

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Let’s Get Writing!! Ready, Set, Write! Mrs. Denise Young

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This is a lesson based PowerPoint for sixth and seventh graders preparing for the state writing assessment. It is based on a five paragraphy essay structure.

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Let’s Get Writing!!Let’s Get Writing!!

Ready, Set, Write!

Mrs. Denise Young

Ready, Set, Write!

Mrs. Denise Young

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For Today’s Lesson

For Today’s Lesson

• You need:– Paper– Pen/Pencil– To Focus on the

Lesson!!

• Please take out your materials and

• Get Ready to Write!!

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Today’s LessonToday’s Lesson

• Defining Argumentative Writing

• Structure of the Essay– Focus– Organization– Support and Elaboration– Style– Conventions

• Form of the Essay• Scoring the Essay• Let’s Score!

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What is Argumentative

Writing?

What is Argumentative

Writing?• It focuses on evidence

that justifies the writer’s position on the issue.

• Types include: problem/solution and evaluation

• Strengthened by focus on purpose, audience and context.

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Structure of the Essay

Structure of the Essay

• Focus– Clearly establish a focus

in response to the prompt

• Organization– Progression,– Relatedness, and – Completeness of Ideas

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Structure of the Essay

Structure of the Essay

• Support and Elaboration– Support: Details must relate to

the focus of the response– Elaboration: Sufficient to

present the ideas clearly – Writer establishes a direct

relationship between the details, the elaboration and the focus.

– Writer needs to present his/her ideas with power and clarity

– Use concrete, specific details

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Structure of the Essay

Structure of the Essay

• Style– The control of language

that is appropriate to the purpose, audience and context

– Use appropriate words, phrases and descriptions that engage the audience

– Sentence Fluency – using a variety of sentence styles

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Structure of the Essay

Structure of the Essay

• Conventions– Correctness in

sentence:•Formation•Usage•Mechanics

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Form of the Essay

Form of the Essay

• Five paragraphs– Introduction: restates

prompt, states position, states 3 main reasons/ideas

– 3 Body Paragraphs: each paragraph focuses on one of the main reasons/ideas

– Conclusion: restates 3 main reasons/ideas and draws a conclusion based on those reasons/ideas

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Scoring RubricScoring Rubric

• Score NS, 1, 2, 3 or 4

• Same rubric for 4, 7 and 10th grades

• Separate from conventions – grammar scoring

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Score NSScore NS

• This code may be used for compositions that are entirely illegible or otherwise unscorable: – blank responses– responses written in a foreign

language– restatements of the prompt and – responses that are off-topic or

incoherent.

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Score 1Score 1• Topic/subject is unclear or confusing • May fail to establish focus on

topic/subject• Organizational structure may not

establish connection between and among ideas and/or events

• May consist of ideas and/or events that are presented in a random fashion and is incomplete or confusing

• Support and elaboration attempts to support the topic/subject but may be unrelated or confusing

• Consists of sparse details• Lacks use of vocabulary that is precise

and purposeful• May not demonstrate sentence

fluency

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Score 2Score 2• Topic/subject may be vague• May lose or may exhibit major lapses in focus

on topic/subject• Organizational structure may establish little

relationship between and among ideas and/or events

• May have major lapses in the logical progression of ideas and/or events and is minimally complete

• Support and elaboration may have major weaknesses in relatedness to and support of the topic/subject

• Consists of general and/or undeveloped details, which may be presented in a list-like fashion

• Exhibits minimal use of vocabulary that is precise and purposeful

• Demonstrates minimal use of sentence fluency

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Score 3Score 3• Topic/subject is generally clear, though it

may or may not be explicitly stated• May exhibit minor lapses in focus on

topic/subject• Organizational structure establishes

relationships between and among ideas and/or events, although minor lapses may be present

• Consists of a logical progression of ideas and/or events and is reasonably complete, although minor lapses may be present

• Support and elaboration may have minor weaknesses in relatedness to and support of the topic/subject

• Consists of some specific details• Exhibits reasonable use of vocabulary that is

precise and purposeful• Demonstrates reasonable use of sentence

fluency

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Score 4Score 4• Topic/subject is clear, though it may

or may not be explicitly stated · • Maintains focus on topic/subject

throughout the response· • Organizational structure establishes

relationships between and among ideas and/or events·

• Consists of a logical progression of ideas and/or events and is unified and complete

• Support and elaboration are related to and supportive of the topic/subject·

• Consists of specific, developed details·

• Exhibits skillful use of vocabulary that is precise and purposeful

• Demonstrates skillful use of sentence fluency

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Now Let’s Score!!

Now Let’s Score!!