Feedback from the year 12
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Feedback from the Year 12 Snowflake Student 1 Positives - Well performed acting - Lighting was very intriguing - Script was interesting Negatives: - Dialogue was difficult to hear - Non-diegetic sound of the door shutting was awful - More dialogue would have been more better to explain the storyline better. Student 2 Positives: - Great actors - Good camerawork - Interesting opening scene Negatives: - Storyline is confusing - Sound is bad - Lightning was horrible Student 3 Positives: - Interesting storyline - Good camerawork - Interesting opening scene
Transcript of Feedback from the year 12
Feedback from the Year 12 Snowflake
Student 1
Positives
- Well performed acting
- Lighting was very intriguing
- Script was interesting
Negatives:
- Dialogue was difficult to hear
- Non-diegetic sound of the door shutting was awful
- More dialogue would have been more better to explain the storyline better.
Student 2
Positives:
- Great actors
- Good camerawork
- Interesting opening scene
Negatives:
- Storyline is confusing
- Sound is bad
- Lightning was horrible
Student 3
Positives:
- Interesting storyline
- Good camerawork
- Interesting opening scene
Negatives:
- Storyline is confusing, would’ve been better if it was more clear
- Dialogue was too short
- Lightning was bad
Student 4
Positives:
- Good lighting
- Great acting
- Interesting location of the exam hall
Negatives:
- Explain the story a bit more
- Sound was poor
- Opening was confusing and irrelevant
Student 5
Positives:
- Good opening
- Great camerawork
- Interesting location of the exam hall
Negatives:
- Confusing storyline
- Dialogue was too little
- Slow paced
