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Birth of a Salesman CEP 818
Created by: Jean-Claude Aura December 2010 Page 1
The 13 Thinking Tools
Of the
World’s Most Creative People .
Objective: Students will describe a room in a way that should evoke all the senses in the reader.
1. Perceiving
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1. Observing & 2. Imaging
2. Patterning
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3. Identifying & 4. Forming
Patterns
3. Abstracting
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5. Abstracting &
6. Analogizing
4. Embodied
Thinking
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7. Body Thinking &
8. Empathizing
5. Modeling
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9. Dimensional Thinking
& 10. Modeling
6. Playing
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11. Playing &
12. Transforming
7. Synthesizing
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13. All the tools
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How do these 7 (or 13) thinking tools help improve students’ spatial description skills?
Before we start exploring these tools, let’s take a look at students’ traditional understanding
of spatial description. It’s very common for students (or anyone else for that matter) to go
about describing only the physical aspect of a room. In other words, students’ attention is
geared toward the appearance of the room and so they discard all other descriptive
features, such as sensation, atmosphere, pleasantness of the room (or otherwise), the key
elements in writing that awaken the reader’s senses and increase memory retention
through vivid imagery. These writing ingredients spice up a narration and bring it to life,
pretty much like a meal full of spices. Chicken is the same everywhere, but what sets one
chicken dish apart from the rest is that flavor, that smell, that pleasant sensation on the
tongue and mouth that make you drool. That’s right. If the description doesn’t entice the
reader, the impact will be insignificant, and the impression that has been formed in their
mind will soon wane.
So, how do all these thinking tools fit in? It’s pretty simple (you’ll agree with me later). Each
tool, dependent in a way on all the others, plays a key role in administering a healthy dose
of descriptive nutrients. When combined, these tools turn a dull description into a
masterpiece. If you’ve read The Cask of Amontillado by Edgar Allan Poe, you’ll catch the
hint. If you haven’t, then the example below should pave the way for the usefulness of
these tools.
Consider the 2 descriptions below of the same picture.
The first description is dry, void, and hardly appeals to the eye (and not at all to the other
senses). The second description, on the other hand, is multisensory; it is visual (white, neatly
laid, semi-glazed), kinesthetic (silky, handmade), and olfactory (oak). It’s easier to remember
the item in the second description because more than one sense is involved.
For students to start thinking in this multisensory direction, they need more than what
current school curricula have to offer. Not that schools have to change what they teach;
rather, they need to rethink how they teach what they teach. And that’s exactly what this
Description 1
There’s a white rug
under a brown
table.
Description 2
There’s a white silky
handmade rug neatly laid
under a semi-glazed solid
oak multi-purpose table.
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paper intends to do – make explicit the role of each of these thinking tools so vital to
students’ creative growth.
If students are to produce sensational descriptions, they need to go through several mental
stages. Below is a brief representation of their mental activity scheme.
Said differently, students need to understand their topic (perceive), simplify it to its core
elements (abstract), notice anything unusual about it or give it a specific form (pattern),
identify with the reader through empathy (embodied thinking), scale the topic up or down
for a better global perspective (model), try out different representations of the topic (play),
and finally combine all these skills to produce a coherent task (synthesize).
The first thing students need to do is to perceive, or understand, the nature of the room.
When students are presented with the room, they need to identify its function (living room,
bedroom …), its nature (antique, modern), its size (small, spacious), all that by looking for
specific clues. They also need to ‘flip’ the room in their mind to see it from different angles.
For example, the picture below represents a bedroom. But is it only a bedroom? Can’t it be
a study room as well?
It’s pretty much like affirming that a toothpick is for removing food particles lodged between the
teeth, but is this the case in the pictures below?
1. Perceiving
2. Abstracting
3. Patterning
4. Embodied Thinking
5. Modeling
6. Playing
7. Synthesizing
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The set on the right, on the other hand,
has no specific pattern and is hard to
remember.
Now that students have identified the type of room to describe, they should weed out the
superfluous details to reduce the room to its core elements. This strategy, called
abstracting, is particularly helpful in underlying the main function and appearance of the
room, a very useful point at the beginning of the narration. At this point, students need not
dwell on details. What matters is the overall aspect of the room. It really doesn’t matter at
this point what color the TV is, or whether the plant is a fern or a fountain plant.
After students have visualized the room and identified its main components, they need to find out if
the room presents any particular patterns. Patterns are appealing because they’re easy to
remember. Consider the 2 card arrangements below. Which would you remember more easily?
These 2 sets of cards on the left have a
pattern and can be easily remembered.
Real room Abstraction of room
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Just as important as card arrangement is for a card player, describing a room according to a specific
pattern helps the reader retain as much of the description as possible. Students can also compose a
poem that reflects the arrangement of the furniture. Compare the room with its patterned poem.
The poem describes the room both verbally and visually. With the verses positioned to reflect the
furniture arrangement, the poem informs the reader of the visual aspect of the room. This, in turn,
supports memory retention.
Now that students have formed a mental image of the room and associated a certain easy-
to-remember pattern to it, it’s time to move from the physical to the emotional. This can be
achieved through embodied thinking, a technique in which students put themselves in their
readers’ shoes and experience the room from their perspective. It’s time to spice up the
description with those hidden, yet very much alive, pleasure-inducing words that give the
room a new dimension. It’s pretty much like personifying the room, giving it animate
attributes. A white sofa is less alive than a white leather sofa, which in turn is less vibrant
than a sturdy white leather sofa. Each descriptive word adds to the sensation that the sofa
provides. To achieve such a creative breadth, students can’t rely simply on visual input. They
must make use of kinesthesia and other sense mediators to create a sense of being in the
room.
While visualizing, abstracting, patterning and embodying are all great tools, they’re not quite
sufficient to build that innovative description. What’s still missing is modeling, a technique in
which students either scale up or scale down the object of study to place it in one visible
spot. In this case, students will have to come up with a reduced model of the room to see
how each part blends with the other and how each piece of furniture fits in with the rest.
Describing the living room and dining separately is one thing, and explaining how the two
sections interact to create a multi-purpose room is another.
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The real room below could be scaled down and modeled to get a better overall picture.
The stage before last is playing. Deep play, as opposed to leisurely or superficial play, yields
totally unpredictable results and ranks at the top of the creativity process. Students explore
the different ways in which the furniture can be arranged, thus creating a variety of designs
that in turn give birth to a number of interesting patterns. Students have at their disposal a
set of ready-made clay furniture as well as unmolded clay to design further pieces of
furniture to their liking.
Intermingling the 2 sections of the room creates
a feeling of wholeness, making the room more
spacious and multi-purpose. This is possible only
through scaling down the room to fit it all in one
visible spot.
coffee table dining room plant
real room modeled room
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This can be compared to a card player trying out different starts to inspect his opponent’s
reaction. If all players played by the rules and conformed to standards, their moves would
be predictable and playing would turn into a boring activity. Winners rarely abide by
standards. They are almost always innovating new moves to surprise their opponent. In the
same way, giving students the chance to fiddle with the different pieces of furniture to
come up with designs of their own adds fun and the element of surprise to the activity.
So, what’s next? Well, what’s left is to use all these techniques simultaneously to create a
coherent task. This last mental stage is called synthesizing. It’s the act of putting together all
these tools to achieve the intended task, writing a descriptive essay of a room. Put in
another way, students have to visualize the room and flip it around in their mind, abstract it
to get its main features, find a particular pattern to make it easy to remember, embody it to
get a feel of it, model it to blend the different parts, play around for surprising results, and
finally undertake the writing task.
If you look closely at all the world’s inventors, you’ll notice that all of them enjoyed these
powerful thinking tools. Somewhere along the line, schools stifled this natural human
phenomenon and traded it with a more rigorous, scholarly approach. As a result, learning
has become less interdisciplinary and more modular. It’s time we restored those good old
habits. Besides, You won’t know how effective these tools are until you’ve tried them out.
As the old saying goes, ‘The proof of the pudding is in the eating’. It’s your turn to unleash
the long-buried creative spirit in your students. After all, they deserve this chance.
sofas speaker TV unit