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I would spread the clothsunder your feet:

But I, being poor, haveonly my dreams;

I have spread my dreamsunder your feet;

Tread softly because you

tread on my dreams.- William Butler Yeats (1865-1939)

Friday, July 30, 2010

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Writers Workshop

W r i te r s Wo r k s ho p

1. Ed i t i n g & s ha r i n g

2. F i r s t d ra f t


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1. Editing & sharing

2. Compose your First Draft

Writers Workshop

W r i te r s Wo r k s ho p

1. Ed i t i n g & s ha r i n g

2. F i r s t d ra f t


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FYI- For Your Information

1. Please use the past tense .

2. Have an original title.3. Avoid repetition (words & ideas).

4. Do not quote yourself.

5. Support your ideas with examples .


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Dos & DontsGaller Walk!

Dos and DontsGallery Walk

Conjunctions Style Tone Cohesion Tense Examples References


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Thesis Bodyparagraphs

A good THESIS will help you write your BODY.


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E.g. The following paper will discuss how being adevoted family man , living a life of service , and livingin each moment are qualities that I would like to beremembered by fty years from now.


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Body Paragraph 1

Focus 1


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Body Paragraph 1

Focus 1

Body Paragraph 2

Focus 2


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Body Paragraph 1

Focus 1

Body Paragraph 2

Focus 2

Body Paragraph 3

Focus 3


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Body Paragraph 1

Focus 1

One day when I am gone, I

would like others toremember how I found

great peace and joy in being

a devoted family man.

TS 1 =

Sample TS 1


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Body Paragraph 1

Body Paragraph 2

Body Paragraph 3

Focus 1

Focus 2

Focus 3


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Body Paragraph 2

Focus 2

I remember promising myself that should I live, I would

prove myself deserving of life. (Terry Fox). Knowingthis, I would like to beremembered as a man who

sought a less self-centred lifeand focused more on servingothers.

TS 2 =

Sample TS 2


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First Draft due at your

consultation date:

Paper copy

Email

Homework


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