Feedback from the Year 12 Snowflake

Student 1

Positives

- Well performed acting

- Lighting was very intriguing

- Script was interesting

Negatives:

- Dialogue was difficult to hear

- Non-diegetic sound of the door shutting was awful

- More dialogue would have been more better to explain the storyline better.

Student 2

Positives:

- Great actors

- Good camerawork

- Interesting opening scene

Negatives:

- Storyline is confusing

- Sound is bad

- Lightning was horrible

Student 3

Positives:

- Interesting storyline

- Good camerawork

- Interesting opening scene

Negatives:

- Storyline is confusing, would’ve been better if it was more clear

- Dialogue was too short

- Lightning was bad

Student 4

Positives:

- Good lighting

- Great acting

- Interesting location of the exam hall

Negatives:

- Explain the story a bit more

- Sound was poor

- Opening was confusing and irrelevant

Student 5

Positives:

- Good opening

- Great camerawork

- Interesting location of the exam hall

Negatives:

- Confusing storyline

- Dialogue was too little

- Slow paced