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In Russia Stalin rose to power by taking advantage of a weakened government.

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Prior to Stalin in control the state of Russia was horrible.

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“By the end of 1916, Russia was in the grip of runaway inflation. With the casualties of war and the unraveling of the social fabric, it had become ungovernable. Relations between urban and rural populations , always precarious, became overtly hostile. The rural masses and the urban proletariat displayed deep, mutual resentment. Nevertheless, they were momentarily united in their opposition to the war. Protests and strikes were chronic, and met with brutal repression and the abolition of political and union-related freedoms. The signs of a crisis of authority were all too apparent. Troops were mutinying and refusing to fire on demonstrators, and the police was losing men. Everywhere there was talk of revolt, insurrection, and revolution” (Salomoni 34).

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● Russia was in a rapid inflation● Because of war the government was

uncontrollable● The police force was getting weak by

losing men● Talk of revolt● The people showed mutual resentment● Protests and strikes were recurring

events● After all of the bad things they were still

united in war

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“Russia was…to become ungovernable (Salomoni, 34)”

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The state of Russia before Joseph Stalin was unmanageable. The police force were losing men. There was everyday talk of rebellion and people showed mutual resentment. Protests and strikes were recurring events in communities. After all the horrible things going on they were still united in war.

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Russia was in a rapid inflation which caused “Russia… to become ungovernable” and uncontrollable (Salomoni 34). The Russian police force were losing men. There was everyday talk of rebellion and to make it worse the people did not like each other. Protests and strikes were recurring events in many communities. After all the horrendous things going on Russia was still united in war (Salomoni 34).

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In addition to Russia being uncontrollable, the weakened government was managed by a selfish Tsar.

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“They suffered low wages, poor housing and many accidents. Again, the government tried to help by passing factory acts to restrict the amount of hours one could work. However, their efforts were at too small a scale to have any real effect. As a result, there were many strikes and constant conflicts between the workers and the police. Lastly, the tsar of Russia was the cause of much disapproval.

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● Government tried to pass factory acts to restrict the amount of hours one could work

● Conflicts between police and workers● Tsar Nicholas II was the cause of much

disapproval● Tsar Nicholas was more interested in

family life, than matters of the state● Obsessed with trying to keep his power● People lose faith in him● People were ready to revolt

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the tsar of Russia

Tsar Nicholas II was much more interested in his family life, than matters of the state. He had an obsession with retaining all his privileges and the belief that he was chosen by God to rule. Also, he didn't understand the forces of industrialization and nationalism that were growing throughout Russia. His disregard for the struggles of the people led them to lose faith in him and the long-standing tradition of autocracy. The people were not content and were ready to revolt” (Fernholz 3).

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was the cause of much disapproval.

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The government was inadequate to meet the needs of its people,* Tsar Nicholas had his attention towards his personal life more than the state of Russia. He was madly obsessed with keeping his job, that it made people lose trust in him. The government tried to interfere with the people's work by proposing acts to limit how much an individual can work, which led to various conflicts between the police and the workers.

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The government was inadequate to meet the needs of its people,”the tsar of Russia was the cause of much disapproval”(Fernholz 3). Tsar Nicholas had his attention towards his personal life more than the state of Russia. He was madly obsessed with keeping his job, that it made people lose trust in him. The government tried to interfere with the people's work by proposing acts to limit how much an individual can work, which led to various conflicts between the police and the workers (Fernholz 3).

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How did Stalin move up through the ranks of the communist party?

Stalin moved up the ranks through taking advantage of Russia’s poor government.

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“Stalin moved to Saint Petersburg and created the ‘Pravda’ newspaper, the major Communist Party media organ. He eventually adopted the name ‘Stalin’ from the Russian word for ‘steel,’ which he used as a pseudonym in his published works. During this period Stalin, as per Lenin’s instructions, wrote the work ‘Marxism and National Issues,’ for which he received Lenin’s high acclaim. The article expressed his socialist views on the solution of national issues. From then on Lenin expressed great content with Stalin, calling him ‘a wonderful Georgian.’After the Revolution of March 1917, Stalin returned to Petrograd (now Saint Petersburg), where he resumed the editorship of Pravda.” (Russiapedia.com, 15)

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● Moved to Saint Petersburg and changed name to ‘Stalin’ and created the ‘Pravda’ newspaper

● Got Lenin’s attention in a good way●

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received Lenin’s high acclaim.

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Stalin relocated to Saint Petersburg which he changed his name to ‘Stalin’ and established a newspaper called ‘Pravda’. Pravda “received Lenin’s high acclaim”(Russiapedia.com 15). In the newspaper Stalin stressed out his feelings about society and the answer to national problems (Russiapedia.com 15).

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Stalin relocated to Saint Petersburg which he changed his name to ‘Stalin’ and established a newspaper called ‘Pravda’. Pravda “received Lenin’s high acclaim”(Russiapedia.com 15). In the newspaper Stalin stressed out his feelings about society and the answer to national problems (Russiapedia.com 15).

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After Stalin got recognized by Lenin from Pravda, he looked further on by becoming the supreme leader of Russia.

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“Stalin was a master of political trickery. He used his position as secretary to put his supporters on the Central Committee of the party. He even told Trotsky the wrong date for Lenin's funeral, so Trotsky turned up a day late. And so it was Stalin who became party leader in 1924. Trotsky was dismissed, then exiled and murdered in 1940” (History.com 2)

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● Master of political trickery● Liar● Became party leader in 1924● Put his supporters on the Central

Committee of the party

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Stalin's way to leadership was very well thought out. He managed to put his supporters on the Central Committee so that they would favor him over anyone else. Stalin lied to Trotsky about the funeral of Lenin and that lead to Trotsky being banished which ultimately lead to death. With all of what Stalin has done to get into power he was recongnized as a “master of political trickery” (History.com 2)

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Stalin's way to leadership was very well thought out. He managed to put his supporters on the Central Committee so that they would favor him over anyone else. Stalin lied to Trotsky about the funeral of

Lenin and that lead to Trotsky being banished which ultimately lead to death. With all of what Stalin has done to get into power he is recongnized as a “master of political trickery” (History.com 2)

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How did Stalin solidify power and ultimately become dictator?

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After Stalin progressed through the Russian government, Stalin sought out to be the ultimate leader.

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● Stalin had to remove anyone who tried to get in his way

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The death of Lenin propelled Stalin to try and take full control of Russia. By doing that Stalin had to eliminate all of his enemies. Removing Trotsky was easily done because Stalin persuaded Zinoviev and Kamenev to do it for him. His next target were the two men who helped take out Trotsky. Stalin did that by accusing them for siding with Trotsky. After all three rivals have been exiled “ Stalin now stood alone without opposition” (Barter 38).

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The death of Lenin propelled Stalin to try and take full control of Russia. By doing that Stalin had to eliminate all of his enemies. Removing Trotsky was easily done because Stalin persuaded Zinoviev and Kamenev to do it for him. His next target were the two men who helped take out Trotsky. Stalin did that by accusing them for siding with Trotsky. After all three rivals have been exiled “ Stalin now stood alone without opposition” (Barter 38).

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While Stalin is removing his obvious rivals, he also gets paranoid and tries to eliminate everyone who might not be on his side.

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“After Lenin's death, in 1924, Stalin set out to destroy the old party leadership and take total control. At first, he had people removed from power through bureaucratic shuffling and denunciations. Many were exiled abroad to Europe and the Americas, including presumed Lenin successor Leon Trotsky. However, further paranoia set in and Stalin soon conducted a vast reign of terror, having people arrested in the night and put before spectacular show trials. Potential rivals were accused of aligning with capitalist nations, convicted of being “enemies of the people” and summarily executed. The purges eventually extended beyond the party elite to local officials suspected of counterrevolutionary activities.”(Biography.com 9).

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● Had people removed from power● Paranoia set in and he soon tried to

put everyone who opposed him in jail● Obsessed

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Joseph Stalin was obsessed with trying to be the supreme leader of Russia and he was “set out to destroy” everyone who opposed him. (Biography.com 9). Stalin removed the people running against him by having them exiled and killed. Stalin’s next target was the people who he thought didn’t have the same views as him. They were either sent to jail or removed from Russia. (Biography.com 9)

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Joseph Stalin was obsessed with trying to be the supreme leader of Russia and he was “set out to destroy” everyone who opposed him. (Biography.com 9). Stalin removed the people running against him by having them exiled and killed. Stalin’s next target was the people who he thought didn’t have the same views as him. They were either sent to jail or removed from Russia (Biography.com 9).

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How did Stalin maintain control of the nation?

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While Stalin was removing people who opposed him, he also needed to focus on maintaining control of Russia.

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Stalin managed Russia by controlling the people's thoughts and making them believe that he is a great leader.

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“Repression was central to Stalin's leadership from the beginning. Throughout the period from 1929 to 1953 the regime employed tactics of terror, arresting people on false charges of conspiracy and espionage, then either executing them or sentencing them to labor camps, where they toiled in harsh, debilitating conditions. Chronic absenteeism at work or picking up grain husks from a harvested field could bring a ten-year sentence. According to one scholar, over twenty-eight million Soviet citizens passed through the forced labor camps and colonies between 1929 and 1953. Located all across the Soviet Union, in every time zone, the camps were filthy, brutal, and dehumanizing. Death rates were high, averaging about 6 percent per year.” (Mackinnon 5)

“Part of Stalin’s success was his use of propaganda to control people’s thoughts. Stalin cleverly crafted his public image as a solid and trustworthy leader by controlling newspaper stories, plays, books, movies, and paintings, all of which favorably depicted him. Those artists and intellectuals who refused to

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● Labor camps● Controlled the news● Arrested many people of false

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He set up concentration camps for the people who had different views. The people in the camps worked for hours and forced to do hard labor. Stalin was viewed as a trustworthy leader because he “crafted his public image” (Barter 77). He altered the newspaper and everything that came out to the public. Many artist who painted pictures of him did not favor him so they were exiled and their artwork was changed to make him look good.

comply with his form of propaganda and censorship, and there were many, found themselves on a train bound for a gulag” (Barter 77)

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In addition to Stalin controlling the minds of citizens, his reign of cruelty continued and got worse.

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“Behind Stalin's power lay a monstrous policy of terror. It reached its height between 1934 and 1939, when Stalin and his secret police carried out mass arrests, executions, and deportations. Stalin claimed that throughout the country traitors were masking as loyal citizens and Party cadres. Countless millions of innocent people perished or spent long years in forced labor camps. Victims included top Party and government elites, army officers, artists, writers, scientists, ordinary citizens, even children. From the Party's Central Committee, elected in 1934, 98 out of 139 members were shot. Of the 1,966 delegates to the 17th Party Congress in 1934, 1,108 were arrested. Stalin played a direct and commanding role in the ‘Great Terror.’ There is strong evidence that in 1934 Stalin arranged the murder of Sergei Kirov, the Party chief in Leningrad (formerly Petrograd), which he then used as the pretext for the first wave of mass arrests. Stalin himself ordered or approved many of the arrests, particularly those of higher level Party and state officials. On just one day, 12 December 1938, a Soviet historian has revealed that ‘Stalin and Molotov signed about 30 lists whose overall content was 3,182 people condemned to death.’

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● Secret police● Millions of people killed●

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Stalin and his secret police constructed a “monstrous policy of terror” with millions of innocent people being killed and even children (Baughman 15). His behavior towards keeping power in Russia led to the death of many individuals. He killed and imprisoned part of the Congress, high government positions, and many intellectual citizens.

In 1939, arrests and executions began declining in number. Terror did not end, but it did subside. Stalin was now absolute dictator of the Soviet Union. Below him lay a subdued population and a docile party-state apparatus manned by a new generation who owed their positions to Stalin and his blood purge.’” (Baughman 15)

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What were Stalin’s plans to help the economy?

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With Stalin maintaining his control of Russia, Stalin had more plans, and those were for the economy. He planned to turn Russia into a more industrialized nation.

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“Stalin abolished the NEP and nationalized all industry and trade. He instituted central planning, designed to rationalize production, but demanded growth rates that were impossibly high. As justification, he proclaimed that Russia had only a limited time to prepare itself for outside attack. The country joined in a frenzied but enthusiastic campaign to build new factories, cities, canals, and mines. Stalin exhorted them to produce more and more raw materials and engage in "socialist competition" to raise output” (Baughman 13)

“Starting in the late 1920s, Joseph Stalin launched a series of five-year plans intended to transform the Soviet Union from a peasant society into an industrial superpower. His development plan was centered on government control of the economy and included the forced collectivization of Soviet agriculture, in which the government took control of farms. Millions of farmers refused to cooperate with Stalin’s orders and were shot or exiled as punishment. The forced collectivization also led to widespread famine across the Soviet Union that killed millions.”(The History Channel 6)

“The first Five Year Plan introduced in 1928, concentrated

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● Got rid of Lenin’s economic policy● Forceful campaign to build factories

mines and cities● Industrialized● Series of 5 year plans●

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.Stalin plans “to transform a peasant society into an industrial superpower” by proposing a string of five-year plans (The History Channel 6). The first of three Five Year plan focused on “the development of iron and steel” and electricity (Simkin 2). Stalin wanted to see the agricultural production increase rapidly at a near impossible rate (Simkin 2). The second Five Year Plan resulted in Russia becoming a “major world economic power” because of its raw materials output (Cambridge 3-5). The last and final Five Year Plan was mainly about WWII and how Russia planned on how to move its soldiers and defend themselves (Cambridge 3-5).

on the development of iron and steel, machine-tools, electric power and transport. Joseph Stalin set the workers high targets. He demanded a 110% increase in coal production, 200% increase in iron production and 335% increase in electric power. He justified these demands by claiming that if rapid industrialization did not take place, the Soviet Union would not be able to defend itself against an invasion from capitalist countries in the west” (Simkin 2).

The second five year plan created in 1932 aimed to triple coal, iron and steel output. The success of the second five year plan put an end to food rationing and the USSR became a major world economic power. There was a minor increase in the availability of consumer goods although due to increased output and minor problems in the collectivization the quality remained poor.The third five year plan (1938-1941) focused on the USSR and its role in World War Two; due to the problems in mobilizing troops in World War One a special effort was made to ensure that Russia's transportation systems was running and efficient. Railways were extended and the output of army equipment was increased. The plan allowed the USSR to hold their ground during the Nazi invasion and be self sufficient after the war, however in order to increase production, quotas were increased as well causing more purges and disillusionment with the government.Although successful at times the five year plans were largely unsuccessful because of the extreme militaristic tactics used to increase production.(Cambridge 3-5)

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Even though Stalin’s Five Year plan may have seemed like a great thing for the state of Russia, it was not, many people starved and died because of it.

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"Some people argued that Duranty had been involved in a cover-up concerning the impact of the economic changes that were taking place in the Soviet Union. An official at the British Embassy reported on the 21st June 1932: "A record of over-staffing, overplanning and complete incompetence at the centre; of human misery, starvation, death and disease among the peasantry... the only creatures who have any life at all in the districts visited are boars, pigs and other swine. Men, women, and children, horses and other workers are left to die in order that the Five Year Plan shall at least succeed on paper." (Simkin 8)

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● Starvation● Death●

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The series of Five Year Plans that Stalin propose caused “human misery” (Simkin 8). It was the leading cause of death to people and and children (Simkin 8).

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Joseph stalin’s involvement with WWII

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With WWII going on during Stalin’s leadership, his involvement with WWII changes from whom he first allied with to whom he ended WWII with.

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In the beginning of WWII Stalin was allied with Germany who was led by Adolf Hitler.

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“World War II. By the late 1930's, Adolf Hitler was ready to conquer Europe. Soviet leaders bargained unsuccessfully with the French and the British for a defense agreement against Germany. Then, on Aug. 23, 1939, the U.S.S.R. and Germany suddenly signed a treaty agreeing not to go to war against each other. In a secret part of the treaty, Stalin and Hitler also planned to divide Poland between themselves” (Marrin 37).

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● Russia failed to bargain with French and British

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Stalin failed to agree with British and French for protection against Germany because “HItler was ready to conquer” (Marrin 37). Ironically Germany and Russia came to an agreement to not go to war against each other (Marrin 37).

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Although Stalin signed a treaty with Hitler, he did not trust him.

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“Stalin's obsession with internal enemies did not keep him from attending to foreign affairs. He became increasingly concerned about Adolf Hitler's rise to power in Germany during the 1930s. Stalin did not trust Western "capitalist" nations and feared that Britain, France, and Germany would unite against the Soviet regime. After negotiations with Britain and France failed, he signed a nonaggression treaty with Hitler in 1939. However, on 22 June 1941, Hitler betrayed Stalin and invaded the Soviet Union. Initial Soviet losses were devastating because Stalin ignored all warnings that an attack was pending” (Baughman 16)

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● Concerned with hitler● Hitler betrayed stalin● Russia Loses to an attack from hitler

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Stalin had become paranoid that the Germany and the two nations that opposed him would get together and attack Russia. He was partially correct “Hitler betrayed Stalin and invaded” Russia, to makes things worse Stalin ignored the warnings of an attack (Baughman 16).

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How was Stalin involved with the allied powers in WWII?

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Following Germany’s attack on Russia, Stalin partnered up with the allied powers to put an end to Hitler’s leadership.

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As the war progressed, Stalin participated in the major Allied conferences, including those in Tehran (1943) and Yalta (1945). His iron will and deft political skills enabled him to play the loyal ally while never abandoning his vision of an expanded postwar Soviet empire. (History.com 12)

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WWII advanced and Stalin teamed up with the Allied powers as he “played the loyal ally” using his determination and skillful speaking (History.com 12). Stalin never forgot his true goal which was to make Russia an empire after WWII was over (History.com 12)

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As a result of Russia joining the Allied powers, Stalin became the victor over Hitler.

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He also launched an invasion of Finland. Then, in June 1941, Germany broke the Nazi-Soviet pact and invaded the USSR, making significant early inroads. (Stalin had ignored warnings from the Americans and the British, as well as his own intelligence agents, about a potential invasion, and the Soviets were not prepared for war.) As German troops approached the Soviet capital of Moscow, Stalin remained there and directed a scorched earth defensive policy, destroying any supplies or infrastructure that might benefit the enemy. The tide turned for the Soviets with the Battle of Stalingrad, from August 1942 to February 1943, during which the Red Army defeated the Germans and eventually drove them from Russia.(History.com 11)

“Exhausted from fighting for years far from home, and still fighting the Japanese, neither churchill nor Roosevelt had the resources to oppose Stalin. To deny Stalin the territory he wanted might trigger a war that neither leader welcomed. Besides, Stalin’s armies that were pushing toward Germany already occupied eight nations. So, Roosevelt and Churchill agreed to allow Stalin’s troops to remain in the nations but insisted on vague wording in a treaty that would allow

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each country to have some form of elections at the end of the war. (Barter 64-65)

“Stalin matured into an effective strategist. He kept in touch with all fronts and made many day-to-day decisions. In 1945, when Soviet armies reached Berlin, Stalin stood at the height of his power and fully shared in the glory of the victory over Nazi Germany. His generals awarded him the title Generalissimus, meaning "the very best general." During the war, he had insisted on conducting diplomacy himself. At the wartime conferences (Tehran, Yalta, and Potsdam), he won the respect of the Allied leaders Roosevelt and Churchill and secured the status of the Soviet Union as a major world power” (Baughman 16).

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Stalin developed into an “effective strategist” by making good decisions on the spot (Baughman 16). He got respect from the Allied leaders. He was also awarded as being the very best war general. Joseph Stalin fulfilled his goal as making Russia a world power(Baughman 16).