{VOICE

The third element of the 6 Writing Traits

How can you read VOICE?Voice is the author’s

fingerprint on the page.The writing sounds

just like the author.The reader knows the

feelings and opinions of the author.

Can I hear your voice?

When a paper is full of voice… it makes the reader feel something.

shocked, upset, excited, giggly, or scared sounds like the author enjoys writing. you feel like the author is talking to you. the author is not afraid to say what he/she feels. you want to read the piece to someone else.

Don’t be afraid to let your voice be heard!

Share your thoughts and opinionsWhen you write pretend

like you are talking to the reader Don’t hide your true selfHave fun when you write

Think about it…

Here is a description of

“Student A”

C average work

3 in conduct and effort

Comments on Term 2 report card

Missing work

Needs to be more attentive in class

Three people in a classroom write about “Student A”

“Student A” says “I work kinda hard and care about my grades, but I would rather talk to my friends. It’s not my responsibility to remember when things are due.”

Parent of “Student A” says “I don’t know what to do anymore or how to help my child! She doesn’t tell me about the work and doesn’t seem to care.”

Teacher of “Student A” says “maybe the work load is overwhelming for her. However, she is not taking responsibility and staying for extra help.”

How would you, your teacher or parent/guardian write about you as a student?

Think about it…

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