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PRESS & CONFERENCESWon 1st place in Echelon 2013 Tokyo Satellite startup competition
Left: Charles (Top Admit) Right: Mohan Belani (Organizer)
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PRESS & CONFERENCES
Participated in Echelon Conference
Singapore in 2011 and 2013.
Featured article in Taiwan’s business
magazine in 2011.
Featured article in Taiwan’s major business
magazine in 2013.
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PRESS & CONFERENCES
Selected as one the the Top 6 Internet
Start-ups by Technode in 2011.
Featured article in Shanghai Morning
Post in 2009.
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SOLUTION
Admission
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BRANCH
Research
Provide editing services to researchers in universities and higher academic institutions so they can successfully publish their research in international SCI and SSCI English Journals.
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ABOUT USFounded in 2005, our mission is to help our clients gain
admission to the schools of their top choice by providing quick &
professional editing of their essays, personal statements,
statements of purpose, resumes, and recommendation letters.
Since then, we have helped almost 10,000 students obtain the
admissions to schools of their dreams.
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GLOBAL TEAMCharles Chin CEO & FounderHelped hundreds of students from China, Taiwan, and US get into elite graduate schools such as Harvard, MIT, Stanford, etc. Attended graduate school in Wisconsin-Madison and also GSB Stanford SI while working in the US.
Managing Editor Jack, M.P.P.
Harvard University
English EditorDavid, M.S.
Stanford University
English EditorAmanda
North Carolina
Stefan Schneider CTO
10 years exp. as Internet entrepreneurDigital director SaatchiGrew sales by 110% in 3 yrs to EUR 300M
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SUCCESS STORIES
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CLIENTS FROM 20 COUNTRIES…
Middle East Saudi Arabia, UAE, Kuwait
East Asia Japan, China, Taiwan, HK
South East Asia Australia, Thailand, Vietnam, Singapore,Bangladesh
North America US, Canada
EuropeAustria, Greece,UK, Switzerland
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Elements of the AdmissionsG.P.A.
Class Rank
Test Scores (TOEFL, GRE, LSAT)
Caliber of Education
Work Experience
Extra-Curricular Activities
Personal Statement
Personal Recommendations
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Elements of a Good EssayWell Organized
Good Transitions
Correct Grammar
Good “Flow”
Compelling Reasoning
Exciting & Interesting to Read
Makes you Unique
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Errors to AvoidWriting Errors
Jargon
General or Vague Statements
A Laundry List of Accomplishments or Activities
Poor English Grammar
Unprofessionalism
Writing that is Dull or is Boring
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Recommendations: Also Important!
Recommender Must Like you and be Positive
They must Appear to Know you Well
Must Give Specific Examples of Achievements
Must be Professionally Objective
Professional Format and Introduction Help
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Recommendations – Re-Writes
Weaker Statement: “Mr. X has excellent analytical and mathematical abilities.”
Stronger Statement: “Relative to other students in the astrophysics program, Mr. X has far superior analytical and mathematic abilities than his peers.”
Weaker Statement: “Mr. X had an impressive and outstanding conclusion for his research paper.”
Stronger Statement: “Unlike other students who simply focused on completing the assignment, Mr. X developed his own unique theory to explain the phenomena.”
Example 1
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Information About ResumesNeeds to be Concise
Utilize “Action” Words (Directed, Managed, Coordinated)
Most Important Information First
Have Appropriate Dates and Locations
Professional and Error Free
Standard Non-Flashy Format
Minimal Personal Information
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Colorful and vivid resume?!
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