Story board for film - Draft one

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Slug line – INT – Day - Its set in an attic full of miscellaneous objects, cluttered and dis organised. Whilst at the end of the attic an old rocking chair is sat on its own. Shot description –Zoom in on rocking chair as it moves slightly. Shot duration – Camera movement –Zoom on chair. Figure movement – No figure movement Editing instruction – 5 sec Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – No speech or non diegetic. The sound of something falling from a shelf for the diegetic.

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Unfortunetly some of the shots were missing for this draft to be complete so I plan on doing a reshoot

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Slug line – INT – Day - Its set in an attic full of miscellaneous objects, cluttered and dis organised. Whilst at the end of the attic an old rocking chair is sat on its own.Shot description –Zoom in on rocking chair as it moves slightly.Shot duration –Camera movement –Zoom on chair.Figure movement – No figure movementEditing instruction – 5 secThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – No speech or non diegetic. The sound of something falling from a shelf for the diegetic.

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Slug line – INT. Hallway in a regular family home, late afternoon day timeShot description – An object is thrown down some lowered stairs (forgotten to be replaced back up) from the attic. Shot duration – 4 secCamera movement – Tracks and zooms on object.Figure movement – noneEditing instruction – cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) -

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0 Slug line – INT. Hallway in a regular family home, late afternoon day time0 Shot description – The ghost Grace who is pale and messy with tangled hair and dark

circles under her eyes is now stood halfway down the steps.0 Shot duration –1 sec0 Camera movement – Long shot, no movement.0 Figure movement – No movement from Grace.0 Editing instruction –cuts0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) -

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0 Slug line – INT. slightly messy Hallway of family home with drawers and cupboards, late afternoon time. 0 Shot description – The character grace is now shown moving down the stairs into the house from the attic.0 Shot duration – 2 sec0 Camera movement – Tracking shot0 Figure movement – Walking down the steps, slowly while limping.0 Editing instruction –Cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – diegetic sound is the radio playing red stars by

birthday massacre quietly in the background, the sound of her footsteps are over emphasised. No speech.11

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0 Slug line – INT. large bedroom with a double bed and most surfaces covered in books or other common items. A large stereo is turned on in the corner which is shown by the lighting being turned on.

0 Shot description – Close up on the radio which shows the bars moving on the screen.0 Shot duration –3 sec0 Camera movement – close up on radio0 Figure movement – no figure movement0 Editing instruction – cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Diegetic sound is the song red stars by birthday

massacre playing from the radio.

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0 Slug line – INT. large bedroom with a double bed and most surfaces covered in books or other common items. A large stereo is turned on in the corner which is shown by the lighting being turned on.

0 Shot description – Curled up on the edge of a bed is a black haired, attractive young adult, Sammie. Wearing black jeans, t-shirt and hoodie.

0 Shot duration – 4 sec0 Camera movement – long shot of Sammie0 Figure movement – Sammie is asleep on the bed whilst Russell is asleep on the floor with his back propped up

against the bed0 Editing instruction – Fades0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - diegetic sound is Red stars by birthday massacre

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0 Slug line – The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double bed.

0 Shot description – The bedroom door is shown close up0 Shot duration – 2 sec0 Camera movement – close up0 Figure movement –0 Editing instruction – cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Slow paced eerie childlike humming is heard

over the radio playing

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0 Slug line – The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double bed.

0 Shot description – Close up of Grace’s Face (the ghost girl)0 Shot duration –2 sec0 Camera movement – Close up0 Figure movement – face of Grace is the only figure shown0 Editing instruction – cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Slow paced eerie childlike humming is heard

over the radio playing

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0 Slug line – INT. The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double bed.

0 Shot description – Grace is shown standing in the doorway with hand on the door frame leaning slightly0 Shot duration – 2 sec0 Camera movement – long shot0 Figure movement – Grace is shown leaning slightly on the doorframe0 Editing instruction –cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Slow paced eerie childlike humming is heard over

the radio playing

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0 Slug line – Slug line – INT. The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double bed.

0 Shot description – close up on hand on doorframe0 Shot duration –3 sec0 Camera movement – close up on hand0 Figure movement – slight tightening of hand on doorframe0 Editing instruction –cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Slow paced eerie

childlike humming is heard over the radio playing

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0 Slug line – Slug line – INT. The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double bed.

0 Shot description –close up on Grace’s eyes0 Shot duration –1 sec0 Camera movement – close up0 Editing instruction –cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Slow

paced eerie childlike humming is heard over the radio playing

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – Radio shows on the screen it is no longer playing by the bars no longer moving0 Shot duration – 3 sec0 Camera movement –Close up on the radio0 Figure movement –0 Editing instruction – Cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Childlike humming is heard still but the

radio no longer plays.

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – 0 Grace begins to move towards Russell as he moves slightly in his sleep.0 Shot duration –2sec0 Camera movement – Long shot0 Figure movement – Grace moving towards Russell whilst he sleeps.0 Editing instruction – Cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – The humming continues but no other sound

is heard.

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – Russell is shown still sleeping through a close up0 Shot duration – 4 sec0 Camera movement – Close up0 Figure movement – slight movement in sleep as if he might wake up at any moment.0 Editing instruction – Cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Humming continues

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – Grace’s feet (ghost girl) are shown walking across the carpet0 Shot duration – 4 sec0 Camera movement – Tracking shot of her feet0 Figure movement –Grace’s Slow paced walking0 Editing instruction –Cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Humming is still heard.

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – Scissors are shown being lifted high in the air0 Shot duration – 5 sec0 Camera movement – Tracking shot of the scissors being raised in the air0 Figure movement – Hands are shown lifting the scissors0 Editing instruction – cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Humming is still heard through diegetic noise but

non diegetic sound is introduced with the sound of string instruments becoming a higher pitch as the scissors are raised.

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – Sammie is shown waking up and quickly sitting up.0 Shot duration –2 sec0 Camera movement – Zoom out from a mid-shot of Sammie0 Figure movement – Sammie wakes up and quickly sits up0 Editing instruction – Cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) –Sammie breathing heavily is heard

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – The room is shown to be clear of anyone but Sammie and Russell0 Shot duration – 8 sec0 Camera movement – Pans around room from Sammies POV0 Figure movement – No movement0 Editing instruction – Cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) –Sammie breathing heavily is heard.

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – Bedroom door is shown slamming shut0 Shot duration –1 sec0 Camera movement –close up of door0 Figure movement –None0 Editing instruction – Cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Looking glass by The Birthday

Massacre is heard on the radio and the sound of the door slamming is heard.

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – Mid shot of Sammie scrambling towards Russell obviously scared0 Shot duration – 2 sec0 Camera movement – Tracking shot of Sammie moving towards Russell0 Figure movement – Sammie quickly gets up and moves towards Russell0 Editing instruction – Cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Looking Glass by The Birthday

Massacre is still playing on the radio.

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – Sammie tries to wake Russell up0 Shot duration –2 sec0 Camera movement – over the shoulder shot of Sammie and Russell0 Figure movement – Sammie tries to wake Russell up whilst grabbing him whilst Russell continues

being asleep0 Editing instruction – Cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Quiet but panicked Sammie tells Russel to

wake up, the radio continues to play.

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – Sammie carries on shaking Russell until he wakes up0 Shot duration – 5 sec0 Camera movement –over the shoulder shot of Sammie looking at Russell0 Figure movement – Sammie is shown shaking Russell quite violently until he wakes up0 Editing instruction – cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Panicked Sammie tells Russel to wake

up again, the radio continues to play.

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – Close up of Russell waking up fully0 Shot duration –2 sec0 Camera movement – Close up of Russell’s face0 Figure movement – Russell’s facial reactions show him as groggy still0 Editing instruction – cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Looking Glass is still being played on the

radio.

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – Two shot of them both jumping when Loud banging is heard from the attic0 Shot duration – 2 sec0 Camera movement –Two shot of Sammie and Russell0 Figure movement – Both jump when the banging begins 0 Editing instruction – cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Looking glass is still playing from the radio.

Russell yells ‘What the hell is that?!’

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0 Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday0 Shot description – close up of the bedroom door0 Shot duration – 7 sec0 Camera movement –close up of the door0 Figure movement – no figure movement0 Editing instruction – cut0 Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Banging continues as the song finishes on

the radio.

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Side note – some of the shots are missing so the shoot is going to be redone