Review of Unit 1What is the “Call to Adventure”?How is the writer’s journey similar to the hero’s journey?Can you remember at least three tips for succeeding in this online writing class?What are the four key factors in writing that we discussed last week?What is unique about you, your experiences, your perspective, your interests, etc. that you could draw upon for writing topics?

Right now, Prof. Lou is wondering who watched the

videos, completed The Kaplan Guide to Successful Writing readings, and took

notes.

Joseph Campbell’s Monomyth: The Hero’s Journey

Dietz, K. A Storied Career. Retrieved 16 Jan. 2011 from http://astoriedcareer.com/karen_dietz_qa.html

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Standard English and Formal Writing

What is Standard English and why do we need to use Standard English in our writing?

Formal and Informal Writing– What is the difference? How can we make our writing more formal?

Webster’s dictionary defines ‘amulet’ as…

vs.

Joseph Campbell in his book, The Hero with a Thousand Faces, defines ‘amulet’ as…

What is concise writing?Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should

contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell.

— William Strunk Jr.in Elements of Style

Make all your words work!

Ways to do thisGetting rid of redundancy in writing---Instead of “12 midnight”, use “midnight”Instead of “end result” use “result”Instead of “cooperate together” use

“cooperate.”

Trimming sentences further

Reducing Clauses to Phrases, Phrases to Single Words– Example:

Citizens who knew what was going on voted him out of office.

Knowledgeable citizens voted him out of office.

Phrases you can omitAs far as I'm concerned, there is no need for

further protection of woodlands. Write instead:

Further protection of woodlands is not needed.

Omit phrases like “at the present time,” “ as a matter of fact.”

Try This OneEarly in the morning, in the dead of winter

Tweety understood why it was that all of his friends had made a trip south in the fall.

Practice in Concise WritingPlease take turns to post a piece of writing

you think is wordy and we can offer you suggestions on how to make it more concise.

Who would like to post first?

Any remaining questions and concerns?Please voice any questions or concerns you

may have about concise writing or anything else this week.

Are you all clear about this week’s work?

Have a wonderful week!

--Mike