Pitch feedback

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Pitch Feedback Francesca Emmingham

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Pitch Feedback

Francesca Emmingham

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From my positive feedback received from giving my pitch I can see that the audience liked my name for the magazine (Amplify), when I did the pitch I had two options from names but this was the preferred choice so I now will be using this name for my issue. The link between the double page spread and the main image on the front cover I felt was a good idea and I am glad that this positive feedback agrees with this.

The negative feedback I received shows that I need to link more to my research collected through my questionnaire. I have now done this by looking at my target audience age range and through deciding on my image to writing ratio through the issue.

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From looking at my negative feedback from this person I have changed the time period that the magazine will be released to every two weeks as I think that this will please my target audience more and they will not have to wait so long for each issue to come out. Also as this is a genre that is growing popular there will be lots of stories to include. The price of the issue still remains at £2.50 as I believe that I need to be different from other magazines and want to appeal to students that may not want to spend much on a magazine.

My positive feedback does not include much from this person but I can be confident that I know what I’m doing from this persons assurance.