Pitch Feedback

Edward Gough

“Could be a bit of an older audience, old people go to clubs too. Good name. I want your magazine, well worth the money.”

From this feedback I can tell that my magazine could possibly have a wider target market group than expected. This shows me that I could do more market research maybe aimed at an older audience to see who else may like my magazine. I can also tell that the name is good which could influence people to buy the magazine. From the feedback I can tell that my magazine will be desirable as they have said that they would buy the magazine themselves which is first person information.

“Cool name and I like your contents. I like that you give it out monthly because people at that age doesn’t buy it that often. Good ideas.”

From this I can tell again that my magazine name is good as they say that it is cool. They also say that they like what will be in the magazine such as the reviews and possible feature articles. They like that it is a monthly magazine as it is affordable for what it is. This is because the market research shows that people who would be interested in the magazine would be young and have little money. So keeping the magazine monthly and at a reasonable price, it will be more of a treat.

“Good name. More market research.”

From this feedback I can tell that the name is good as each person said that they liked the name and that it is suitable for the magazine. I can also see that I need to do more market research as suggested by someone else. With this I would look into an older market and who the best audience would be for the magazine.