MARIA FASHAKIN 12.P

Assignment 2: Blog analysis

LUARA’S PIRES BLOG:

• What I thought went well, was Luara documented each and every draft well.

• Luara then added a little description, explaining what it is, this would of made it

easier for the examiner.

• Luara also started her blog from September, so she has more presentations and

work that is done and completed

• However I don’t think she used enough imagery, just video files the blog does not

seem fluent its mainly videos, schedules timing and small descriptions after another .

EVIDENCE FROM LUARA'S BLOG

Luara has

documented each

task well.

Added

descriptions for

the examiner.

Luara

started her

blog in

September.

MARIA YOUNES BLOG:

• Maria had great use of presentation explaining when it came to the desired topic.

She also had images of proof of her work and filming which is essential.

• Maria also managed to include graphs and storyboards and each one of her video

drafts were done well, Maria used a great deal of information to support her

coursework.

• Although Maria has not completed all her work which would cause her to loose

marks.

• Further more both blogs have good use of presentations, they just need to have

completed all the work.

EVIDENCE FROM MARIA’S YOUNES BLOG

Maria had

great use of

presentation.

Not all work is

completed and is

completely minimal.