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Do Now: Do Now: • When a teacher asks When a teacher asks you to you to “revise” “revise” your your work, what do you work, what do you think that means? think that means? What do you know What do you know about revision? about revision? • Use one of our Use one of our invention invention strategies strategies to explore this to explore this question. question.
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Do Now:. When a teacher asks you to “revise” your work, what do you think that means? What do you know about revision? Use one of our invention strategies to explore this question. Aim: How can global revisions improve your draft?. Aim: How can global revisions improve your draft?. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation
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Do Now: Do Now: • When a teacher asks you When a teacher asks you
to to “revise” “revise” your work, your work, what do you think that what do you think that means? What do you means? What do you know about revision? know about revision?
• Use one of our Use one of our invention invention strategiesstrategies to explore this to explore this question. question.
Aim: How can Aim: How can global revisionsglobal revisions improve your improve your draft?draft?
Aim: How can Aim: How can global revisionsglobal revisions improve improve your draft?your draft?
Aim: How can Aim: How can global revisionsglobal revisions improve your improve your draft?draft?
Aim: How can Aim: How can global revisionsglobal revisions improve your improve your draft?draft?
1.1. Allow Allow timetime between drafting and revision. between drafting and revision.2.2. ReadRead your draft your draft aloudaloud..3.3. Ask a Ask a friendfriend to to readread it it aloudaloud..4.4. Seek the opinions of Seek the opinions of classmatesclassmates..5.5. Look for consistent Look for consistent problem areasproblem areas..
Peer ReviewPeer Review
Aim: How can Aim: How can global revisionsglobal revisions improve your improve your draft?draft?
See yourself as coach, not judge.
Be specific!
Ask questions and tell the writer where you’d like to hear more.
Aim: How can Aim: How can global revisionsglobal revisions improve your improve your draft?draft?
Don’t take it Don’t take it personallypersonally!!
Weigh Weigh feedback carefully.feedback carefully.
Pay attentionPay attention to ideas that to ideas that contradict your own.contradict your own.
Homework #6:Homework #6:Complete Complete Peer Mark Peer Mark assignment by assignment by finishing reviews.finishing reviews.
You will be able to You will be able to view your feedbackview your feedback after the assignment closes.after the assignment closes.
