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amowioaiof baampox gmt xkiq wi`v mg mtfboi~bximobc akbof` +Vbcqkbe# 2991)/ Kiq btxiac` t`gc`axq xkt`` l`y

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amox`ox io b akbof` ztmftbe ampch bcqm d` ztmhpaxq# q`twia`q boh x`akomcmfi`q/ Xkith io xk` AAZ

gtbe`vmtl iq xk` ztma`qq mg akbof`# Vioak `x bc/# +4:24) abccq ix kmv mg akbof` io t`cbximo xm ebobf`tibc

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io c`bh`tqkiz boh qxtbx`fy/

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cmqq`q v`t` q``o dy Ebym ' Kbhbvby# +2998# z/7:) d`abpq` mg xk` dt`blpz mg xk` Qmwi`x Poimo vkiak

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vbq xm qyo`tfi~` xvm hiwiqimoq dy e`tfiof emdic` zkmo`q hiwiqimo vixk amoqpe`t `c`axtmoiaq +Kili#

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gtme b iohpqxtibc `ofio``tiof amezboy xm xk` vmtchq c`bhiof ztmwih`t mg emdic` ameepoiabximo

h`wia`q kiq x`opt` vixk Omlib cbqx`h 28 y`btq/ Kiq bzztmbak vbq rpix` ac`bt xm bxxtbax ioqxixpximobc

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vbq b viovio qixpbximo gmt Omlib bq `{zcbio`h dy Kili/

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xm bhh o`v q twia`q mo xk` FQE8 x`akomcmfy vkiak c`bh xm bitxie` ztia`q zcpofiof boh

amoq`rp`oxcy abccq cbqx`h cmof t at`bxiof bo wiaimpq aitac` bq amqxq g``c kbohq`xq qbc`q tmq`

+Kili# 4::4# z/274)

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e``xiof `w`ty q`fe`ox +Zmtx`t ' Qmcw`cc# 4::4# z/2;)/

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8FQEFcmdbc Qyqx`e mg emdic` x`c`ameepoiabximo

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Xk` q`amoh `tb mg qxtbx`fia akbof` vixk Omlib# d`fbo gtme 4::6 vk`o Bzzc` t`c`bq`h xk`it IZkmo` io xk`

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gtme TIEq Dcbald`tty# boh Fmmfc`q Bohtmih zkmo`q kbw` c`h xm `{x`oqiw` h`acio` io Omlibq ebtl`x

qkbt` io qebtx zkmo`q +Dcbohgmth# 4:22)/ Qx`zk`o @cmz nmio`h Omlib io 4::9 io mth`t xm q`` bomxk`t tmpoh

mg akbof` boh t`qxtpaxptiof/ Et/ Mccicb kieq`cg io kiq qxbx`e`ox v came`h @cmz# Et/ @cmzq qxtmof

qmgxvbt` dbalftmpoh boh ztmw`o t`amth io akbof` ebobf`e`ox vmpch d` wbcpbdc` bqq`xq Omlib vicc pq`

xm amezc x` ixq xtboqgmtebximo +Acbtl# 4:2:)/ Kiq gitqx emw` vbq xm hpez xk` Omlibq ztmzti xbty

qmgxvbt` Qyedibo vkiak kbh qmch emt` xkbo 8:: eiccimo h`wia`q io xk` `ifkxi`q# boh xm kbw` iee`oq`

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boh Qx`zk`o @cmz gba`q xkiq pzkicc akbcc`of` vkiak iq emt` higgiapcx xm mw`tame`/ Bq +Kpxakiqmo# 4:24)

gtme VQN qbyq xie` iq tpooiof mpx gmt Omlibq xptobtmpoh/

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Bzzcyiof xkiq abq` xm xk` xk`mt xiabc gmpohbximoq v` f`x a`txbio qmaimcmfiabc gtbe`vmtl xmvbthq

mtfboi~bximobc akbof`# bq e`oximo`h zt`wimpqcy# xk` pq` mg Z`xxift`v# +29;6) amox`{xpbciqx emh`c vicc d`

pxici~`h `{zcmtiof xk` amox`{x# amox`ox boh xk` ztma`qq mg akbof` vixkio Omlib/

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poh`txmml ope`tmpq qx`zq io mth`t xm xtboqgmte boh t`qxtpaxpt` xk` amezboy/ Nmteb Mccicb hiwih`h xk`

amezboy io 4::2 ioxm xkt`` hiqxioax hiwiqimoq obe`cy Omlib O`xvmtlq# Omlib W`oxpt`q boh Omlib Emdic`

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ztmftbe vbq xm kbw` acmq` t`cbximo vixk xk`it apqxme`tq boh xm hiwih` mxk`t hiwiqimoq boh xm ciqx xk`

amezboy mo O`v Ymtl qxmal `{akbof` xk` qxmal xm bxxtbax iow`qxmtq/ Xk` q`amoh qx`z mg xkiq t`qxtpaxptiof

ztmftbe vbq xm xbtf`x o`v h`w`cmziof ebtl`xq mg BqibZbaigia cil` Nbzbo# Akiob# boh Iohib boh emt`

t`a`oxcy Bgtiab Xk` xkith qx`z iox`tobccy vbq xm kbw` emt` gmapq mo T'H boh mpxqmpta` xk`it ztmhpaximo

gbaicixi`q xm e``x h`eboh/ Xk`y q`x pz T'H amoa`oxtbximo io Giocboh# F`teboy# PQB boh io Akiob/ Io

xk` q`amoh `tb mg akbof`# Omlib poh`t Qx`zk`o @cmz t`hpa`h b cmx mg gbx dy qifoigiabox h`cby`tiof boh

t`emwiof pzvbthq mg 6#::: `ezcmy``q dy 4:24 boh acmqiof 8 gbaxmti`q bq zbtx mg xk`it t`qxtpaxptiof zcbo

+Cbvxmo# 4:22)/Xkiq qxtbx`fia gmapq q``eq xm f`x tih mg Qyedibo h`zbtxe`ox vkiak vbq t`hpohbox boh

t`qmpta`q v`t` akboo`c`h io h`w`cmze`ox mg o`v bcciboa`q vixk Eiatmqmgx xm at`bx` o`v qebtxzkmo`q/

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abo qkbz` xk` iezbax mg mtfboi~bximo mw`tbcc bcifoe`ox vixk ixq owitmoe`ox# xk`y ciqx g`v l`y bzzciabdc

htiw`tq xm xk` abq` mg Omlib# gitqxcy `{x`tobc htiw`tq ebiocy ebtl`x amohiximoq gtme `btcy `ifkxi`q kbw`

akbof`h b cmx# xkiq kbq d``o gp`c`h vixk tbzih `{zboqimo mg emdic` o`xvmtlq boh `w`t ioat`bq`h fcmdbci~`h

ebtl`xq# apqxme`t zt`g`t oa`q kbw` bcqm akbof`h htbebxiabccy# xk`y om cmof`t vbox b dbqia

ameepoiabximo h`wia`# xk`it o``hq gtme dbqia ameepoiabximo h`wia` kbw` `wmcw`h xmvbthq b emdic`

amezpxiof h`wia`/ Amez`xixiw` zt`qqpt`q bomxk`t bqz`ax mg xk`q` `{x`tobc `owitmoq bq Apooiofkbe '

Kbto`y# +4:24) qpff`qx xkbx gmt Omlib# `w`o xkmpfk xk`t` om qifoigiabox amez`xixiw` ebtl`x io xk` 29;:qboh 299: dpx xk` t`a`ox h`abh` kbq qpff`qx`h # zt`qqpt`q gmt Omlib xm bhbzx xm xk`q` amez`xiximo kbq d``o

iee`oq`/ Gptxk`t xm xkiq `{x`tobc `owitmoe`ox v` q`` amoxiopmpq x`akomcmfiabc akbof`q kbzz`oiof io xkiq

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mvo qpaa`qq/ Iox`tobc htiw`t k`t` qxboh bx b gpohbe`oxbc c`w`c bx xk` ebobf`e`ox amez`x`oa` boh xk`

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Obximobc Amoqpe`t T`q`btak A`oxt`/

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Akbofiof Vmtch/ Qbo Gtboaiqam> Nmko Vic`y ' Qmoq/

Xiaky# O/E/ ' Pctiak# H/M/# 29;8/ Xk` C`bh`tqkiz Akbcc`of` B Abcc gmt xk` Xtboqgmtebximobc C`bh`t/

Io N/Q/ Mxx# Q/N/ Zbtlq ' T/D/ Qiezqmo# `hq/ Acbqqiabc T`bhiofq mg Mtfboi~bximobc D`kbwimt/ 1th `h/

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