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PHOTO FEEDBACK

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PHOTO

FEEDBACK

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Olivia Ewin:

I really like the framing of the

shot as it includes a small

part of each prop. I also like

the contract between the edgy

& rough skull and the soft fu-

ry blanket.

Amelia Ward:

I think she looks a bit too elegant

for the album title and doesn’t re-

ally reflect a ‘fierce’ personality.

The photo would be better with a

more dominant pose, perhaps ly-

ing on her front instead of her

back.

Sandeep Chagger:

I think the eyes really

stand out well and help to

make her look quite intim-

idating. However, I think

it would look better if she

come across more feisty.

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Georgia Coppen:

I like the way you’ve edited

it to define her features

more, I also like the framing

as you can still see part of

her dress.

Josh Bastin:

I think it’s hard to work out

what she is holding as you

can’t really see the detail on

the skull and so it seems a bit

irrelevant. But the overall idea

is good.

Max Clarke:

I like the use of the

mosaic effect, it makes

the photo more inter-

esting and varied for

the album.

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Joe Hart:

I think the use of a skull was a

really good idea for your album,

it kind of suggests a desert feel,

keeping in with the wild theme.

This photo works well because of

the clear focus and detail.

Our thoughts:

Taking all this feedback into con-

sideration, we’ve looked back on

the photos and agree that some of

the photos do not successfully re-

flect the album title and the artists

character. However, although her

actual facial expression isn’t fierce,

we were looking to achieve a more

subtle undertone of ferocity com-

ing from the eyes which are the

main focus throughout our photos.