Post on 23-Dec-2015
Using Strong Verbs
Date:_____________
English
Using Strong Verbs• Purpose:
– To replace weak, overused verbs with verbs that transmit that clear, colorful images in your mind.
Using Strong VerbsBefore Examples
• The boy went across the room toward the tray of chocolates.
• Sheila goes to her grandmother’s house after school.
• Out starving girl-scout troop went to the cafeteria.
Revision Tips
1. Underline the verbs.
2. Brainstorm a mini-list of strong verbs that might be more effective.
3. Choose the verb that best expresses your ideas and creates a powerful mental image
Brainstorm Box• went:
• goes:
• told
Use a Thesaurus to help you find more exciting verbs.
Using Strong Verbs• After examples:
– The boy went across the room toward the tray of chocolates.
– The boy crept across the room toward the tray of chocolates.
– Sheila goes to her grandmother’s house after school.
– Sheila pedals her bike to her grandmother’s house after school.
– Out starving girl-scout troop went to the cafeteria.
– Our starving girl-scout troop charged into the cafeteria.