Using Strong Verbs

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English

Using Strong Verbs• Purpose:

– To replace weak, overused verbs with verbs that transmit that clear, colorful images in your mind.

Using Strong VerbsBefore Examples

• The boy went across the room toward the tray of chocolates.

• Sheila goes to her grandmother’s house after school.

• Out starving girl-scout troop went to the cafeteria.

Revision Tips

1. Underline the verbs.

2. Brainstorm a mini-list of strong verbs that might be more effective.

3. Choose the verb that best expresses your ideas and creates a powerful mental image

Brainstorm Box• went:

• goes:

• told

Use a Thesaurus to help you find more exciting verbs.

Using Strong Verbs• After examples:

– The boy went across the room toward the tray of chocolates.

– The boy crept across the room toward the tray of chocolates.

– Sheila goes to her grandmother’s house after school.

– Sheila pedals her bike to her grandmother’s house after school.

– Out starving girl-scout troop went to the cafeteria.

– Our starving girl-scout troop charged into the cafeteria.