Post on 05-Aug-2015
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JORDAN KOHANIM
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Let’s review! FOR PROBLEM SOLVING
ESSAYS
C – D – W
WHAT DO THESE MEAN?
R. A. F. T. S. 3 - PRONGIDEA WEB
C – D – W
WHEN DO YOU USE THEM?
R. A. F. T. S. 3 - PRONGIDEA WEB
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HERE IS A NEW ONE FOR YOU
S.H.I.P.S.
SIGNIFICANT
HARM
IMPORTANCEPLAN
SOLVENCY
S.H.I.P.S.
SIGNIFICANT
HARM
IMPORTANT
PLAN
SOLVENCY
} There is a big bad thing happening right now
This is why it is important
Here is how I will fix it
This is why my plan works
WHERE DO I GET THIS INFORMATION?
?
LET THE TOPIC STEER YOU
Global warming is causing drought. This drought causes problems associated with poverty like starvation and disease. What are your solutions to these problems? Give three clear reasons why you feel this way.
Global warming is causing drought. This drought causes problems associated with poverty like starvation, and disease. What are your solutions to these problems? Give three clear reasons why you feel this way.
WHERE IS THE
SIGNIFICANT HARM?
Global warming is causing drought. This drought causes problems associated with poverty like starvation and disease. What are your solutions to these problems? Give three clear reasons why you feel this way.
Global warming is causing drought. This drought causes problems associated with poverty like starvation and disease. What are your solutions to these problems? Give three clear reasons why you feel this way.
WHY IS IT IMPORTANT?
Global warming is causing drought. This drought causes problems associated with poverty like starvation and disease. What are your solutions to these problems? Give three clear reasons why you feel this way.
SO WHAT IS YOUR
SOLUTION?
LET’S BRAINSTORM
S.H.I.P.S.
WRITE
THIS ON
YOUR
BRAIN-
STORMIN
G
S.H.I.P.S.
}Poor people are dying because of drought and global warming.
It is important because we should care about the loss of life. }
}}
The United States should_____ because
it will ______, ________, and_____. (WHY THIS SOLVES THE PROBLEMs)______.
S.H.I.P.S.
WATCH OUT FOR
THE TRAP OF
SYSTEMIC ISSUES!
AVOID THE TRAP OF ATTEMPTING TO SOLVE SYSTEMICPROBLEMS.
YOU CAN NOT SOLVE POVERTY.
IT’S A TRAP!
AVOID THE TRAP OF DEBATING WITH THETOPIC. YOU CAN NOT
SAY GLOBAL WARMING IS
FALSE.
Global warming is causing drought. This drought causes problems associated with poverty like starvation and disease. What are your solutions to these problems? Give three clear reasons why you feel this way.
IT’S A
TRAP!
SO WHAT CAN WE DO?
GO BACK TO THE ORIGINAL PROBLEMS
THEY GAVE US THREE
Global warming is causing drought. This drought causes problems associated with poverty like starvation and disease. What are your solutions to these problems? Give three clear reasons why you feel this way.
LET’S BRAINSTORM
HOW
DO W
E
GET
WAT
ER
TO 3
RD W
ORLD
COUNTR
IES?
HOW
DO WE
PREVENT
DROUGHTS?12
PICK ONLY ONE!
1 DONATE MONEY FOR THE DIGGING OF WELLS
1 CREATE A WATER SYSTEM USING RAIN WATER
1 USE NONPROFIT ORGANIZATIONS TO HELP
CHOOSE ONLY ONE PLAN!
OPTIONNUMBER 2:
HOW DO WE PREVENT
WATER SHORTAGESIN THE FIRST
PLACE?
2 ENCOURAGE WATER CONSERVATION
2 CREATE CONSUMPTIONLIMITS
2 DESALINATIONPROGRAMS
CHOOSE ONLY ONE PLAN!
CHOOSE ONLY ONE PLAN!
YWHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WH
YOU WILL SPEND THE REST OF YOUR ESSAY EXPLAINING HOW YOUR PLAN SOLVES THE
THREE ISSUES MENTIONED IN THE TOPIC
LET’S BRAINSTORM
12
S.H.I.P.S.
}Poor people are dying because of drought and global warming.
It is important because we should care about the loss of life. }
}}
The United States should organize well-digging becauseit will lower rates of starvation, aid in drought areas, and decrease disease
S.H.I.P.S.
}Poor people are dying because of drought and global warming.
It is important because we should care about the loss of life. }
}}
The United States should organize well-digging becauseit will lower rates of starvation, aid in drought areas, and decrease disease
HOW?
LET’S BRAINSTORM
12
This would lower rates of starvationAccess to clean water means people can use it for cooking, irrigation of crops, watering livestock.
This would aid in drought areasThese wells are sustainable. That means drought-stricken areas do not get temporary relief. They get relief that helps them become more independent.
This would help decrease diseaseClean water reduces disease for several reasons. One, dirty water leads to water-borne illnesses. Two, lack of hydration leads to health problems and secondary infections. Three, access to clean water helps doctors more easily treat villagers.
SO WHAT DOES IT LOOK LIKE PARAGRAPH WISE?
A: HOOK : 1 SENTENCEB: SIGNIFICANT HARM: 2 SENTENCESC: IMPORTANCE: 1 SENTENCED. PLAN TEXT & SOLVENCY: 1 SENTENCE (THESIS)
PARAGRAPH NUMBER ONE
A:WHO WILL DO IT?: 1 SENTENCEB:WHO WILL PAY FOR IT? 1 SENTENCEB:WHO WILL MONITER IT?: 1 SENTENCE
PARAGRAPH NUMBER TWO
A: CLAIM STATEMENT: 1 SENTENCEB: REASON 1: 2-3 SENTENCESC: REASON 2: 2-3 SENTENCESD: REASON 3: 2-3 SENTENCES
PARAGRAPH NUMBER THREE
A: SUMMARY: 1 SENTENCEB: COUNTERCLAIM: 1 SENTENCEC: REBUTTAL: 2-3 SENTENCESD: IMPACT: 1-2 SENTENCES
PARAGRAPH NUMBER FOUR
WHAT IS A COUNTERCLAIM?THINK OF THIS AS
THE PIRATE SHIP
COMING TO STEALYOUR
ARGUMENT
YOUR JOB IS TO DEFEND YOUR ARGUMENT
YOUR JOB IS TO DEFEND YOUR ARGUMENT
. .. .POW! POW!
FOR EXAMPLE: COUNTERCLAIM
. ..
CRITICS MIGHT ARGUE THAT THE DIGGING OF THESE WELLS IS TOO COSTLY.
POW!
REBUTTAL: AS AN EXAMPLE
. ..
HOWEVER, THE COSTOF LIFE IS FAR GREATER AND AS MORE PEOPLE ARE AFFECTED, THE COST OF TREATING THEM RISES.
POW!
IMPACTLEAVE THEM WITH A CALL TO ACTION.
FOR THE MORE ADVANCED OF YOU, I WILL DISCUSS AN IMPACT CALCULUS. FOR
EVERYONE ELSE, JUST TELL YOUR AUDIENCE DIRECTLY WHAT THEY SHOULD DO.
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JORDAN KOHANIM
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