- 1. Surveys and Peer Feedback for IdeaGender MaleHow old are
you? 18How could the idea be improved? As of present, I think this
is a very solid idea. Aslong as it sticks to the lyrical narrative
it will be ahighly successful video, my only concern is thenumber
of shots required to communicate themessage.What elements of the
idea did you like/dislike? I particularly enjoy the relatable
content of theidea and its narrative.As an idea, does it appeal to
you as the targetaudience?Most certainly.Do you think it would fit
in the current scene ofmusic videos?Without a doubt.Do you have any
further comments? Other than that I feel this is a very strong
ideaand concept, I look forward to viewing the finalproduct.Gender
MaleHow old are you? 18How could the idea be improved? Have the
video black and white until he puts hisshoes on.What elements of
the idea did you like/dislike? I like the idea that he has a good
day after he hashis new shoes on because it relates to the song.As
an idea, does it appeal to you as the targetaudience?Yes this would
appeal to me, and could work asan advert for shoes also.Do you
think it would fit in the current scene ofmusic videos?Yes
definitely. You get some strange musicvideos but this one would fit
in with the song.Do you have any further comments? It sounds
great!Gender FemaleHow old are you? 18How could the idea be
improved? Try and make sure the sun is shining when he ishappy and
when he is sad make sure it is coldand cloudy.What elements of the
idea did you like/dislike? I liked the idea its well thought
through, I thinkit will work well.As an idea, does it appeal to you
as the targetaudience?Yes as I am a teenager and we all go through
thestages of feeling rubbish and sometime whenour mums take us
shopping it cheers us up, so Ican relate when he buys new shoes and
he feelson top of the world.Do you think it would fit in the
current scene ofmusic videos?Yes I do, everyone now a days every
young teenhas problems with self-image, and teens willtake a real
interest in this video as they canrelate to their idol.
2. Do you have any further comments? Make sure the shoes are
enhanced, when editingthe video. As this seems to be the key part
of themusic video. Well done I hope you do well andenjoy making the
video and can learn somethingfrom having new shoes.Gender MaleHow
old are you? 18How could the idea be improved? When first viewing
the shoes, they could glow toemphasize the specialty of them.What
elements of the idea did you like/dislike? I like the idea that his
new shoes help his dayand self-confidence pick up.As an idea, does
it appeal to you as the targetaudience?Definitely, fashion and
self-image is massive inteen culture and this video will reflect
that fact.Do you think it would fit in the current scene ofmusic
videos?It sounds like a video that will perfectly fit in withother
summer songs and videos.Do you have any further comments? Try and
use lots of different and costumes, justto keep the audiences
attention and self-imagetheme.After carrying out this survey for my
final idea, I was given back lots of constructive ideas
andcriticism. Lots of these are ideas I hadnt considered myself but
will work perfectly with the moodand style of my idea. I was also
pleased to find out that the idea itself was appealing and
intriguingfor members of my target audience, if it wasnt so
appealing people may not have been as inclinedto leave some of the
constructive and development comments/answers.An idea that was
mentioned a few times was the use of the shoes glowing or having a
colourenhancement to really demonstrate the message of the video.
Another great idea that wasmentioned was the use of black and white
footage prior to the shoes being worn. This would be agreat effect
and one that I had not initially thought of. I would work in a
similar style to the originalWizard of Oz film, the way that life
seems more dull and gloomy to begin with but then the suddenuse of
colour will portray a happy and uplifting feeling for the
audience.