PSF Writing Program EFL/ESL Students
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Prof. Josadac FloresUVM Campus Guadalajara Norte
WRITING PROCESS SIMPLIFIED
Process
1. Brainstorming2. Outline3. Rough Draft4. Peer Reviewing5. Final draft
WRITING PROCESS
Brainstorming
BRAINSTORMING
Thesis statement:
Violence is a social problem and it causes a lot of damage in México.
Topic sentence 1:
Violence it’s one of the most important problems in México.
Topic sentence 2
The damages that violence causes are physical, psychological and emotional.
damage
Aggressive.
Problem.
Violence.
STUDENT´S SAMPLE
Purpose:
Focuses your ideas• Write the THESIS STATEMENT *• Write TOPIC SENTENCE 1• Write TOPIC SENTENCE 2
* The most focused and important sentence in your essay.
WRITING PROCESSESBRAINSTORMING
Outline
OUTLINE
Violence in Mexico.
Introduction.
1. Violence is an action when someone hurts another person intentionally, the majority of victims are women.
2. The domestic violence is the most common in our country.
3. More than 133 thousand women in Mexico were victims of violence last year.
4. Violence is a social problem and it cause a lot of damages. 5. In México we need new laws to try to prevent and eliminate violence.
Body Paragraph 1
1. Violence it’s one of the most important problems in México. 2. For example, “Violence can range from physical abuse within the family to revenge killings”.
Jose Luis Lacarriere (Dnonald, 2011). 3. I think that we need to improve the security in every place and try to make campaigns against
violence.
4. We should be more respectful with other people, try to control ourselves to prevent violence. 5. Violent people are like that because they want to feel more powerful than others hurting people.
Body Pargraph 2
1. The damages that violence cause are physical, psychological and emotional. 2. For example, “In Mexico, one in every seven families have been victim of violence or at least
one member of the family has been victim of a crime” (Pereyra & Luis, 205). 3. Any kind of violence it’s an abuse, and you have to tell the authorities about that, if every
person do that we can control this problem. 4. To eliminate this social problem we don’t have to tolerate any violence. 5. We have to be a united and strong country to fight against this big problem.
Conclusion
1. The violence is a social problem and it cause a lot of damages in México. 2. We need to be united to destroy the problem. 3. This problem almost always starts at home with the parents. 4. In México it’s more common because here the “machismo” is too strong. 5. Most of the women that are abuse don’t present charges because they’re afraid.
STUDENT´S SAMPLE
Purpose:
Structure and visuallyorganize your ideas.
Writing ProcessesOutline
Rough Draft
Violence in Mexico
Violence is an action when someone hurts another person intentionally, the majority of
victims are women. The domestic violence is the most common in our country. More than 133
thousand women in Mexico were victims of violence last year. The violence is a social problem and
it cause a lot of damages. In México we need new laws to try to prevent and eliminate violence.
Violence it’s one of the most important problems in México. For example, “Violence can
range from physical abuse within the family to revenge killings” (Dnonald, 2011). I think that we
need to improve the security in every place and try to make campaigns against violence. We should
be more respectful with other people, try to control ourselves to prevent violence. Violent people
are like that because they want to feel more powerful than others hurting people.
The damages that violence cause are physical, psychological and emotional. For example,
“In Mexico, one in every seven families have been victim of violence or at least one member of the
family has been victim of a crime” (Pereyra & Luis, 205). Any kind of violence it’s an abuse, and
you have to tell the authorities about that, if every person do that we can control this problem. To
eliminate this social problem we don’t have to tolerate any violence. We have to be a united and
strong country to fight against this big problem.
The violence is a social problem and it cause a lot of damages in México. We need to be
united to destroy the problem. This problem almost always starts at home with the parents. In
México it’s more common because here the “machismo” is too strong. Most of the women that are
abuse don’t present charges because they’re afraid.
STUDENT´S SAMPLE
Purpose:
Have a draft for revision in order to improve it.
Writing ProcessesDraft
Peer Reviewing
Share your workBe open to Criticism
Listen to what your readers have to say.
Writing ProcessesPeer Review
Violence in Mexico
Violence is an action when someone hurts another person intentionally, the majority of
victims are women. The domestic violence is the most common in our country. More than 133
thousand women in Mexico were victims of violence last year. The violence is a social problem and
it cause a lot of damages. In México we need new laws to try to prevent and eliminate violence.
Violence it’s one of the most important problems in México. For example, “Violence can
range from physical abuse within the family to revenge killings” (Dnonald, 2011). I think that we
need to improve the security in every place and try to make campaigns against violence. We should
be more respectful with other people, try to control ourselves to prevent violence. Violent people
are like that because they want to feel more powerful than others hurting people.
The damages that violence cause are physical, psychological and emotional. For example,
“In Mexico, one in every seven families have been victim of violence or at least one member of the
family has been victim of a crime” (Pereyra & Luis, 205). Any kind of violence it’s an abuse, and
you have to tell the authorities about that, if every person do that we can control this problem. To
eliminate this social problem we don’t have to tolerate any violence. We have to be a united and
strong country to fight against this big problem.
The violence is a social problem and it cause a lot of damages in México. We need to be
united to destroy the problem. This problem almost always starts at home with the parents. In
México it’s more common because here the “machismo” is too strong. Most of the women that are
abuse don’t present charges because they’re afraid.
Underline your Thesis statement
STUDENT´S SAMPLE
Purpose:
Receive feedback from classmates in order to improve your essay.
Writing ProcessesPeer Review
Final Draft
Violence in Mexico
Violence is an action when someone hurts another person intentionally, the majority of
victims are women. The domestic violence is the most common in our country. More than 133
thousand women in Mexico were victims of violence last year. The violence is a social problem and
it cause a lot of damages. In México we need new laws to try to prevent and eliminate violence.
Violence it’s one of the most important problems in México. For example, “Violence can
range from physical abuse within the family to revenge killings” (Dnonald, 2011). I think that we
need to improve the security in every place and try to make campaigns against violence. We should
be more respectful with other people, try to control ourselves to prevent violence. Violent people
are like that because they want to feel more powerful than others hurting people.
The damages that violence cause are physical, psychological and emotional. For example,
“In Mexico, one in every seven families have been victim of violence or at least one member of the
family has been victim of a crime” (Pereyra & Luis, 205). Any kind of violence it’s an abuse, and
you have to tell the authorities about that, if every person do that we can control this problem. To
eliminate this social problem we don’t have to tolerate any violence. We have to be a united and
strong country to fight against this big problem.
The violence is a social problem and it cause a lot of damages in México. We need to be
united to destroy the problem. This problem almost always starts at home with the parents. In
México it’s more common because here the “machismo” is too strong. Most of the women that are
abuse don’t present charges because they’re afraid.
Purpose:
Present the revised version of the Rough Draft.
Writing ProcessesFinal Draft
Process
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