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    MIND-MAPPING

    WE HAVE A BETTER LIFE THAN OUR GRANDPARENTS

    INTRO F strategy (Factual Statement)

    Not necessarily better

    Maybe more comfortableWHY?

    It is differentHOW?

    BODY

    CONCLUSION

    GOOD----------------------------------------Each generation----------------------------------BAD

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    No valid comparison

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    Very relative

    PRO

    Better life style

    more leisure time

    use of computer and digitaltechnology

    advanced modes of transport

    more chances at highereducation / online degrees

    more individual liberty for

    women

    NO

    lost family ties / values

    no human touch incommunication

    uncaring society

    materialistic society

    apathy for the elderly

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    F Strategy-begins with anopinion

    Opinionrepeated

    Note the use ofidiomaticexpressions

    Logicalconnectorsused to relateideas

    SAMPLE ESSAY: WE HAVE A BETTER LIFETHAN OUR GRANDPARENTSI don't think we live a better life. We live a differentlife. We have more things. We have our cellphones and laptops, Twitter, and Facebook so thatwe can stay connected but yet we have nopersonnel connections. We have lost family values,sit down dinners, playing outside, and the list couldgo on and on. We don't talk to each other anymore.All we do is text. So no, I don't think life is better.The life led by our grandparents was just verydifferent from the life we lead now.Looking at the upside of life today it does seemoutwardly obvious that our generation is having abetter life. Work today is not as exhausting for mostas we do not toil all day in the fields, and manyhave leisure time that our grandparents could not

    have imagined. We now rely on electricalappliances and gadgets, switching on and off.No longer limited to the speed of horses, today'spersonal transportation makes miles pass inminutes. Many live ajet-set life. We have greateropportunities for higher education, and an ease ofaccess to information that brick-and-mortarlibraries could never have provided. Just look atthe number of colleges and universities that havemushroomed over the recent years. To top that, wecan even pursue online degrees from the comfortof our homes.

    We also have a growing awareness of andappreciation for individual liberty and rights. Few ofour grandmothers had a voice in the running ofaffairsoutside of their home. Most women wereproperty and not owners of property then. Theyand their children were the equivalent of livestock.Women today hold top posts in companies, evenleaders of a few countries. Most women these daysmake their own choices on working or nurturingtheir children, or balancing both.

    However, what they had that we do not have is thephysical closeness of generations of familymembers, a community of concerned and caringcitizens that, for the most part, worked together forthe betterment of all and stood together when thehardships of life assaulted their people. Instead offorging a caring society, we have mostly becomemindless money-hungry zombies. The care forthe elderly is mostly left to hired caretakers orworse, the aged are dumped in homes to linger tilldeath takes them to a better place. There is thisnewfound apathyfor caring, be it for our agedparents, neighbours we do not even say hello to, oreven towards our own children who are mostly left

    Points on theupside of life today

    Better life style

    More leisure

    Computer/digitaltechnology

    Advancedmodes oftransport

    More chances athigher education

    More individualliberty forwomen

    Why life is notbetter?

    Lost family ties

    No human touch

    Uncaring society

    Materialistic

    Apathy

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    to nannies and baby sitters.Every generation has its ups and downs, it's goodand bad. And I am just not sure you can actuallymake a valid comparison; it might be more likecomparing which are better fruits, apples ororanges, or whether we have a better life here thansomeone in the UK or Indonesia, for instance. It'sall relative. I think in some aspects we are better offtoday, whereas in other aspects we are in no waybetter or worse.

    Conclusion

    No validcomparison

    Very relative

    Reiterates theopinion given inthe intro

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    MIND-MAPPING

    HOMEWORK

    Part and parcel of learning process Mixed reactions from parents

    Hated by students Enforced by schools

    Work at school not sufficient

    Not enough time to consolidate skills learned

    Provides opportunities to better understanding

    Complements in-class discussions

    Indicates levels of understanding

    Teachers yardstick to measure student progress

    Occupies free time / no wastage on useless activities

    Practice makes perfect

    Helps develop and enhance skills

    Prepares students for exam

    Parents can keep track of childs progress

    - Checking on homework

    Keeps students out of mischief

    A necessity

    Vital element of learning

    Make attempts to enjoy & reap the benefits

    INTRODUCTION

    BODY

    CONCLUSION

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    MIND-MAPPING

    HOMEWORK

    Helps improve grades X diminishes interest in learning

    Curriculum requirement X takes up too much time

    Teaches self-discipline, responsibility X no time for play

    Instils good time-management

    Teaches life skills

    Gets parents involved

    Provides practice

    Instills good habits / attitudes

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    CONCLUSION

    Definition:

    Teacher-assigned tasks

    Completed outside school hours

    An expected status quo

    Part & parcel of school life

    Provides vital feedback on teaching effectiveness

    Consolidates & enriches knowledge

    Trains creativity & resourcefulness

    Develops intelligence

    Reinforces skills

    Provides continual learning outside school

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    Begin with adefinition

    Note use ofproverbTo createcounterargument

    Logicalconnector

    SAMPLE ESSAY: HOMEWORK

    Homework is defined as tasks assigned to students by

    school teachers that are meant to be carried out during non-

    school hours.Every school day brings something new, but

    there is one status quo most parents expect: homework.

    The old adagethat practice makes perfect seems to make

    sense when it comes to schoolwork. But, while hunkering

    downafter dinner amongst books and worksheets might

    seem like a natural part of childhood, there are more people

    now than ever suggesting that it shouldn't be so.

    Homework has been around for a very long time. Parents

    say that teachers require it; teachers say that parents

    demand more of it. Teachers assign homework to help

    some students improve their grade and pass the course for

    those of who do not do well on tests or standardized

    examinations. Schools require a certain amount of hours of

    homework to be assigned to each student. When students

    bring back work to be done at home, many controversies

    arise.

    Homework is all pain and no gain. Most students believe

    there is little reason to believe that homework is necessary

    in school. In fact, it may even diminish interest in learning

    and be directly responsible for total disinterest in learning.

    Most of my friends personally think that homework has

    occupied much of their leisure time, and leaves them hardly

    any extra time to enjoy life or other leisure pursuits.

    However, many would argue that life is filled with things we

    don't like to do, and that homework teaches self-discipline,

    time management and other nonacademic life skills.

    Homework can help students learn and can help parents be

    involved in their children's education. When parents show an

    interest in their child's schoolwork, they teach an important

    lesson--that learning is fun and worth the effort.

    Children who do more homework, on average, do better in

    Yes!

    Yes!

    NO!

    NO!

    NO!

    YES!

    YES!

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    school. And, as children move up through the grades,

    homework becomes even more important to school

    success. Teachers assign homework for many reasons. It

    can help children practice what they have learned in school;

    get ready for the next day's class; use resources, such as

    libraries and encyclopaedias; and learn things they don't

    have time to learn in school. Homework can also help

    children learn good habits and attitudes. It can teach

    children to work by themselves and encourage discipline

    and responsibility.

    In my opinion, homework is one of the important means of

    feedback for a teacher's teaching result. It can consolidate

    the knowledge that students have already studied, train

    students' creativity and resourcefulness, and develop

    students' intelligence. Taking time each night to do

    homework is a chance for students to catch up on missed

    class and further reinforces the day's lessons so it is

    permanently etched in the student's mind where the

    information is stored and used when called upon.

    YES!

    YES!

    Conclude

    withjustificationson whyhomework isnecessary

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    MIND-MAPPING

    PLASTIC BAGS SHOULD BE BANNED

    INTRO

    The use of baskets before the 1960s

    1960s onwardsPLASTIC BAGS

    BODY

    Realised the harmful potential

    Environmental not Full landfill sites

    Impact biodegradable

    Not reusable

    Cannot decompose

    Plastic litter

    Snagged on trees death trap disastrous

    Scattered on roads, parks to to

    wildlife endangered species

    a move / shift

    retailers charge for plastic bags recycle

    degradable bags paper bags/boxes/ wooden crates

    {________________________________________________________________________}

    CONCLUSION

    Reusable carrier bags baskets / cloth bags

    The best / only solution

    YES!!!! BAN PLASTIC BAGS

    WHY?cleaner

    hygienic

    waterproof

    light

    disposable

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    Begins with whywe started usingplastic bags

    Introduces the

    reasons forconcern

    Talks about thereality / urgencyof the problem

    Threat to wildlife

    SAMPLE ESSAY: PLASTIC BAGS SHOULD BEBANNED

    In the time of most of our great grandmothers, no-

    one ever used a plastic bag for carrying their

    shopping. People used baskets or cotton bags orpaper bags. The development of thin plastics in the

    1960s and 1970s led to our increasing dependence

    on putting everything in plastic, which seemed to

    offer several advantages. They were cleaner, more

    hygienic, waterproof, light and disposable.

    For years now, we have all taken plastic bags for

    granted and have thought very little about their

    environmental impact. But there are now signs that

    people are realising the harmful potential of plasticbags and they are becoming increasingly unpopular

    for several reasons, not least the environmental

    concerns over landfill sites. Older types of plastic

    bag are not biodegradableand they can persist in

    the environment for around 1000 years, which

    means that landfill sites become full and cannot be

    reused. Even some of the biodegradable bags take

    about 200 years to decompose. Choking our

    landscape with plastic is not a good way to take

    care of the planet for future generations.

    A short drive through any stretch of countryside anda quick glance at the trees and hedgerows willquickly draw your attention to the many torn plasticbags that litter our environment. Even a walkthrough parks or a stroll along the road will highlightthe urgent need to stop using plastic. Once you startto become aware of them, you start to realise howbad the problem is. The very thinnest, cheapestbags become easily dislodged from rubbish in binsand blow easily in the wind and snag on branches

    and twigs. This looks unsightly but can also bedangerous to wildlife.

    People dump rubbish by the shoreline and manyplastic bags are blown into the sea. Once afloat,every plastic bag becomes a death trapto marinewildlife. Plastic bags pose a danger to any marinemammal, but if the species is endangered, theresults of plastic pollution could be reallydisastrous. There are posters that pose thisquestion: What do you get when you cross a turtlewith a plastic bag? The answer is obviously a dead

    turtle!

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    The move / shiftaway fromplastic bags

    The best / onlysolution

    Very recently, there has been a move away fromusing plastic bags. Some retailers now charge forplastic bags, to discourage people from taking newones each time. Major supermarkets recycle plasticbags and there are now more bag manufacturersthat produce bags that degradevery quickly - somewithin only a few months. This may help but it wouldnot save the life of a whale.Supermarkets now often offer their own brandedreusable carrier bag, which is made to last and canbe reused many times. However, to end ourreliance on plastic bags completely, we must goback to the days of our great grandmothers. Butwould using baskets and cloth bags really be thatbad? The time seems right to move on and finallyban the plastic bag completely. It is the best andonly solution!

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    MIND-MAPPING

    LOVE

    "Love is the master key that opens the gates of happiness." (P Strategy)

    A difficult question to answer

    Is it

    Friendship? Luck? Truth?

    ties 2 or more people together builds trust /

    intimacy / interdependence

    enhances relationships focuses onthe good

    *patient *kind *generous *humble

    *rejoice *truth seeker *dreamy

    [________________________________________________________________________]

    Romantic love Religious love

    Familial love Patriotic love

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    Opens with apopular sayingP Strategy

    Qualities of love

    Categories oflove

    SAMPLE ESSAY: LOVE

    "Love is the master key that opens the gates of

    happiness." So goes a famous saying. What is love?

    It is one of the most difficult questions for the

    mankind. Centuries have passed by, relationships

    have bloomed and so has love. But no one can give

    the proper definition of love. To some love is

    friendship set on fire for others maybe love is like

    luck. You have to go all the way to find it. No matter

    how you define it or feel it, love is the eternal truth in

    the history of mankind.

    Love is patient, love is kind. It has no envy, nor it

    boasts itself and it is never proud. It rejoices over the

    evil and is the truth seeker. Love protects; preserves

    and hopes for the positive aspect of life. Always stand

    steadfast in love, not fall into it. It is like the dream of

    your matter of affection coming true.

    Love can occur between two or more individuals. Itbonds them and connects them in a unified link of

    trust, intimacy and interdependence. It enhances the

    relationship and comforts the soul. Love should be

    experienced and not just felt. The depth of love

    cannot be measured. Look at the relationship

    between a mother and a child. The mother loves the

    child unconditionally and it cannot be measured at all.

    Love can be created. You just need to focus on the

    goodness of the other person. If this can be done

    easily, then you can also love easily. And remember

    we all have some positive aspect in us, no matter how

    bad our deeds may be.

    Depending on context, love can be of different

    varieties. Romantic love is a deep, intense and

    unending. It shared on a very intimate and

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    Strengths oflove

    interpersonal relationship. Familial love and religious

    love are also matter of great affection. It is more of

    desire, preference and feelings. The meaning of love

    will change with each different relationship. But at

    times the very existence of love is questioned. Some

    say it is false and meaningless. It says that it never

    exist, because there has been many instances of

    hatred and brutality in relationships. The history of our

    world has witnessed many such events. There has

    been hatred between brothers, parents and children,

    sibling rivalry and spouses have failed each other.

    Friends have betrayed each other; the son has killed

    his parents for the money, the count is endless. But

    loveis not responsible for that. It is us, the people,

    who have forgotten the meaning of love.

    Be together, share your joy and sorrow, understand

    each other, provide space to each other, but always

    be there for each others needs. And surely love will

    blossom to strengthen your relationship with your

    matter of affection. Without love, we would live an

    empty life, a life without joy and the comfort of

    security and that would be very sad indeed.

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    MIND-MAPPING

    RAINFOREST

    ECOSYSTEM

    Biological diversity Life resources for herbs

    & forest products

    Animal/plant species Indigenous cultures

    WHAT IS A RAINFOREST?

    ITS IN DANGER!

    Life destroyed HOW? Depletion

    Extinction Felling of trees

    Destruction of Habitat Deforestation

    Less rainfall soil erosion

    SOLUTION

    T

    S

    Teach Support

    R

    Restore Establish

    Encourage

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    F Strategy

    SAMPLE ESSAY: FORESTS

    Rainforests are one of the most important

    ecosystemsin the world, and their importance to thewell being of our planet is an established scientific fact.

    Extraordinary in terms of their biological diversity,

    tropical rainforests are a major resource for medicinal

    plants and thousands of forest products. They are home

    to countless species and many unique indigenous

    cultures, and play a key role in the global ecosystem in

    regulating weather and producing significant amounts of

    the world's oxygen.

    The rainforest is a thick forest that is found in the

    tropical regions of the world such as Malaysia,

    Indonesia, South Africa, South America and many

    tropical regions in the world. This thick forest grows in

    hot and wet climatic conditions where it rains almost

    daily. Tropical rain forests have a characteristic structure

    that is made up of a number of vertical layers that reach

    up from the forest floor to the very tops of the tallest

    trees.The top is called the canopy. It comprises tall,

    huge trees of 120 feet and more. They block the

    sunshine and rain, thus forming a dark, damp area at the

    bottom. Below the canopy are a few layers of luxuriant

    growththat forms the dense jungle.

    The rainforest is an attraction to many people because

    it homes hundreds of different kinds of plants and

    animals. It is estimated that over 50 % of all life on earth

    is found in the rainforests. The number of species is

    staggering and may go as high as 50 million.In the

    Malaysian tropical rainforest itself more than 300

    varieties of animals and plants are found. The Amazon

    rainforest is the biggest with most of the forest

    unexplored due to its density.

    Animals that live in the rainforest are wild and are

    protected from human disturbance. Some of the

    Note use of

    vocab. particularto environmentalissues

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    occupants of the rainforest are gorillas, chimpanzees,

    orangutans, exotic birds such as parrots, toucans,

    hornbills and reptilians, amphibians and insects.

    However, in the name of development many rainforest

    trees have been felled thus leaving these animals

    homeless. There is no doubt that the tropical rainforests

    of the world are in danger. Every hour approximately six

    species of life in our tropical rainforests are destroyed.

    Experts agree that the number one cause of extinction

    in the tropical rainforest is due to the destruction of the

    tropical rainforest environment.

    Environmentalists, scientists, botanists, zoologists and

    the gatekeepers of natureare very concerned over the

    depletionof the rainforest. The felling of trees not only

    destroys the natural habitat for animals but it also results

    in us losing the valuable plants which are sources of

    medicine and food for us human. Deforestationalso

    affects the pattern of rainfall as lesser trees mean there

    is less rainfall for us. It also leaves the earth exposed to

    rain and wind, thus taking away the soil to the rivers. The

    slit in the river causes flood and flash floods. The roots

    of the plants and trees in the rainforest trap water,

    forming water catchment areasfor people.

    If there are problems in the world and with our

    environment, then there has to be solutions. The

    enormous benefit of rainforest must be advocated to

    people if we want to save the rainforest. More and more

    rainforest are being cleared because these rainforest arein the under-developed countries which are going

    through rapid economic development. This involves

    felling of trees. Therefore it is important to raise

    awareness among the people on the importance of

    rainforest if we want our future generations to enjoy the

    benefits of the forest.

    TREESis a concept that was originally developed for

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    use in elementary school education but is an excellent

    slogan in the fight to save rain forests, and endangered

    ecosystems in general. Teach others about the

    importance of the environment and how they can help

    save rainforests. Restore damaged ecosystems by

    planting trees on land where forests have been cut

    down. Encourage people to live in a way that doesn't

    hurt the environment. Establish parks to protect

    rainforests and wildlife. Support companies that operate

    in ways that minimize damage to the environment.

    D StrategyStarts with adialogue

    SAMPLE ESSAY: A TRIP I ENJOYED

    Hey baby girl, how would you feel about a trip to

    India after your SPM examinations? asked my father.

    Imagine my excitement and joy. I could not sit still and

    neither could I sleep without dreams of meeting a

    Bollywood hero, doing a Jai Ho dance number, and

    flying off into the air kicking a crook or villain down.

    Thus, I eagerly passed each day of the exam, waitingfor the day. This would be my first overseas trip.

    Father had booked us on a package tour of North

    India. Our flight landed in Delhi where our tour guide

    met us. He booked us into a hotel and said we would

    be joining the other 10 people on a package tour. He

    told us to be ready by 5.00 a.m. as our journey to Agra

    would be three hours. So the next morning, we woke in

    the wee hours of the morning and got ready. On thetour, we met people of other nationalities. The bus

    then set off to Agra. What is in Agra? I asked my

    father, Theres a monument, he said. I didnt ask him

    further as I was rather sleepy and fell asleep minutes

    later. Suddenly I felt my mother nudging me Wake up,

    we are almost there.

    Where? I mumbled, half asleep. Agra. It was

    around 8.30 a.m. and I could see the locals, already

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    starting their day. The bus drove into Agra. Buildings of

    sandy pink and forts of crimson pink surrounded the

    city. This is the pink city, the tour guide announced.

    These buildings were built three hundred years ago.

    After half an hour the bus pulled side near a village

    which looked like a squatter area.

    What could be here? I thought to myself.

    The tour guide then told us that we were about to

    see one of the wonders of the world. As he let us into

    the heavily guarded gate, I stood in awe looking at the

    white monument of Taj Mahal. It was as if I was

    looking at a picture on a screen or a photograph but

    no, I was standing on the ground of the monuments

    itself as it stood tall and mighty. My eyes were glued to

    the Taj Mahal, and my jaw dropped in sheer wonder.

    The magnificent white marble mausoleum was about a

    kilometre away from where I stood. The long pathway

    was graced with fountains, flowers, statues and plants.

    People seemed to be trailing mesmerized towards the

    building.

    The moment I reached the magnificent monument, I

    gently touched the cold marble pillar, feeling it with my

    bare fingers. The tour guide was rattling the details of

    the buildings. According to the tour guide, the

    monument was built by Shah Jahan for his beloved

    wife Mumtaz. We then admired the intricate

    architecture, the artistic carvings on the marble wall,

    the fabulous designs and motifs that adorned thewalls. The mirrors that were embedded in the walls

    reflected and enlarged the designs, thus accentuating

    the tiny works of art that the naked eye could not see. I

    searched for my camera but realised that it was taken

    by the guards as a precautionary measure. So I could

    only record the magnificent building in my memory.

    We went on to visit many other wondrous monuments

    and palaces in North India which now mainly serve as

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    museums and even governmental offices. Mom and I

    enjoyed the shopping at the road side bazaars where

    we got to buy exquisite sari materials, shawls and

    handloom bed linen. In Mumbai we got a guided tour

    of the Filmistan Studio, where I took some

    photographs with a few heart throbs like Vivek Oberoi,

    Ranbir Kapoor and my hero, Imran Khan. My father

    had a gala time taking pictures with the female film

    stars, much to the discomfort of my mother. Looking at

    the pictures, you can see a permanent scowl on her

    face whereas father is beaming like a beacon.

    The trip was truly awesome and I enjoyed every

    minute of it. However, it was the trip to the Taj Mahal

    that proved most memorable. Whether it truly is a

    symbol of love or more of a kings vanity, it is a

    magnificent monument to human ingenuity and

    imagination.

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    SAMPLE ESSAY: MY FAVOURITE BOOK

    It was times like these when I thought my father, whohated guns and had never been to any wars, was thebravest man who ever lived.These lines are from my all time favourite book To Kill

    a Mockingbird written by Harper Lee. As a girl myself, Ihave come to share Scouts growing respect for herfather. I share a similar bond with my father. My fatherremains the bravest soul I have ever known. In fact itwas my father who gave me this book as a birthday giftwhen I was twelve and I reread this book every year asa tribute to my father who tragically passed away aweek before my fifteenth birthday.The novel revolves around a young girl named JeanLouise Finch who goes by the nicknamed "Scout".Scout experiences different events in her life thatdramatically change her life. Scout and her brother Jem

    are raised by their father, a lawyer named Atticus. Thechildren become fascinated with a man named "Boo"Radley, a man who has not been seen outside of hishome in years, mainly because of his suppressedupbringing. They have an impression of Mr. Radley asbeing this large ugly and evil man. Scout's fatherbecomes a defense attorney for a black man, TomRobinson, who is falsely accused of a crime against awhite woman. During this trial she gets teased byfriends because her father was helping this black man.Scout starts to see the racism that exists. Even thoughMr. Robinson's innocence was clear even in the eyes ofkids, Mr. Robinson was still found guilty. Later in anattempt to escape, Mr. Robinson is shot dead. Scout isextremely disappointed at the verdict and even more atthe death of Mr. Robinson.With all the negative points that can be found in thestory in respect to prejudice, there was a bright spotwhen it came to the prejudice issue. This ray of lightcame in the form of Scout's father Atticus. Atticusrepresented hope. Hope that good people still exist.Even in a society filled with hate. Atticus representedthe hope that one day things can change, Change we

    can believe in. I suppose that hope has come true, atleast in America where a black man is president of thenation. My father would have jumped in joy. Father wasvery much like Atticus. He always told me never tochoose friends based on colour, race, creed or status.At his funeral people from all walks of life paid tribute toa man I sadly got to know better after he was gone.

    I did watch the movie version with my father. The actorwho played Atticus, Gregory Peck was my fathersfavourite movie star. I believe we watched the movie atleast four times. It was a VCD and although it cannot be

    played now, I still keep it beside the book, a shrine tothe best values a father could instil in his daughter.

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    Every word in this book is a gentle whisper of myfathers voice. When I hold the aged book onto my face,I still get whiffs of my fathers Old Spice aftershave.Therefore, rereading it every year is in honour of hislegacy. As my father firmly believed, I too advocate thisbook as compulsory reading for all fathers anddaughters. If only people saw this world with the eyes ofa child who is accepting of all diversities anddifferences that make us people of the world, we wouldbe better off.

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    MIND MAPPING

    WHY I LOVE MY COUNTRY

    To know Malaysia is to love Malaysia.

    huge variety

    affordableFood

    roads / highwaysworld-class banking

    low cost of livingInfrastructure

    harmony

    tolerance

    festivals

    holidays

    unity in diversity

    Culture

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    SAMPLE ESSAY: WHY I LOVE MY COUNTRYTo know Malaysia is to love Malaysia.

    This is the first line of a song made popular by a

    Malaysian icon, Sudirman Haji Arshad. What is there that

    is not to love about my country Malaysia? Having been to

    a few other countries on holiday trips with my family, I can

    pride myself on being Malaysia. This country is the best

    place to live in. This is a country where people from

    varied walks of life get together paying no heed to

    ethnicity or religion when it comes to cheering for the

    national football team, or supporting a charity drive.

    First of all is the food. Tell me, which Malaysian doesn't

    crave for food all the time? Malaysia offers a huge variety

    of food, from our local cuisine to Western cuisine. We

    have it all. I like going to my favourite mamak stall after

    school with my friends, hanging out there eating a plate of

    fried noodles and sipping a glass of teh tarik. Every year

    without fail, my family and I will make our way to Penang

    to enjoy food. We always frequent the cendol stall on

    Penang Road. On Sunday mornings, my father would

    usually buy nasi lemak or yamcake from our nearby

    market. Heaven I tell you, heaven. Malaysian cuisine is

    simply delicious yet so affordable, burning no holes into

    your pockets.

    Besides that, I also love travelling around Malaysia. I

    have been on road trips to places like Sekinchan and Ulu

    Yam and also to other states like Penang, Perak, Kedah,

    Pahang and Terengganu. I also have been to Sabah

    twice. Although all we see is plenty of oil palm and rubber

    plantations during road trips, I do enjoy them. I feel very

    lucky compared to other people who haven't been to such

    places.

    The roads and highways are wonderful. The world-class

    banking system offers all sorts of perks and services

    internet banking, cash deposit machines, debit cards,

    Islamicfinancing, among a few. The ports are efficient

    it only takes 2 to 3 days to clear a container in Port Klang.

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    True, theres still some red tape in Malaysian government

    offices, but the Immigration Department can issue a

    passport within just an hour. Hows that for efficiency?

    Despite a few grouses or two, things still get done most of

    the time in Malaysiayet the cost of living remains

    relatively low. Singapore, for instance, may have a

    superior public transport system, but I wince at the cost of

    living there. Everything works like Swiss clockwork in

    Europe but its too expensive. Thus, for me, Malaysia is

    the place to live in, invest in and do business in.

    Malaysia has cultural and religious harmony.Yes, it

    sounds so trite by now, after reading and hearing about it

    all the time. But its not justhype. Its the reality. Three

    cultures, Malay, Chinese, and Indian live and co-exist

    under one nationality: Malaysian. The result is a more

    tolerant society. All types of glorious food from the

    Malay nasi lemakto the Indian roti canaito the Chinese

    char kway teow. National holidays cover everything from

    Chinese New Year to Eid ul Fitr to Thaipusam to

    Christmas Day. Chinese customers maintain Islamic bank

    accounts, a Malay nasyidgroup performs an Islamic song

    in Mandarin, Indian and Chinese ladies wearing baju

    kurungto the office. Its amazing. Its refreshing. Its

    something that most Malaysians may have taken for

    granted but that is why I just adore this nation I call home.