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Evaluating PeerWork
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Name: Olivia ill
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Activity 1
Use the mark scheme below and work in pairs to grade the 4 exemplar pieces ofwork. You must try and place the work into the correct level. Wherever possible youshould use a best fit model this means that you take an overall view rather thanharshly penalising for one fault. Use the space provided to give specific examples
and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page. You are examining the!"#$%! &'(')$"!
NON STOP POP
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
!ramin" a s#ot$
incl%din" and
e&cl%din"
elements as
appropriate
2'( )ss%es wit#
!ramin"*
+%ttin" o,
arms and -ad
positionin" onma.ority o!
ima"es*%sin" a variety o!
s#ot distances as
appropriate
22( Mid s#ots
%sed mainly
wit# t#e %se o!
one close %p*
/sed in a way
in w#ic# it is
not e,ective*s#ootin" material
appropriate to t#e
tas0 set
2( P#otos are
clear #owever
not o! "ood%ality and loo0
very r%s#ed*
owever
appropriate
s#ootin"
material was
%sed*selectin" mise(en(
sc3ne incl%din"
colo%r$ 4"%re$
li"#tin"$ o-.ects
and settin"
25( Poor
li"#tin"$
especially on
t#e !ront cover*
+olo%rs do not
complement
eac# ot#er well
and loo0 very
messy* 6ery
-asic mise(en(
scene wit# no
o-.ects and
only one
settin"*manip%latin"
p#oto"rap#s as
appropriate to t#e
conte&t !or
27( +roppin"
%sed poorly
d%e to arms
-ein" c%t o,*
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presentation$
incl%din" croppin"
and resi8in"
Ot#er areas are
mostly si8e o0
and ima"es are
not stretc#ed*acc%rately %sin"
lan"%a"e and
re"ister
29( Re"ister is
appropriate -%t
t#ere are
"rammatical
errors
t#ro%"#o%t and
some lan"%a"e
is wron"*appropriately
inte"ratin"
ill%stration and
te&t
9'( #e te&t
layo%t is mainly
positioned well*
Some parts are
a -it messy*s#owin"
%nderstandin" o!
conventions o!
layo%t and pa"e
desi"n
9'( #e layo%t
is or"anised
and most o! t#e
te&t and
ima"es are
positioned
e,ectively*
Some areas are
sli"#tly messy*s#owin"
awareness o! t#e
need !or variety in
!onts and te&t si8e
2;( +lear !onts
are %sed
#owever t#e
variety is too"reat and
ma0es t#e
ma"a8ine loo0
messy*%sin" )+
appropriately !or
t#e tas0 set
95( P#otos#op
is %sed
e,ectively
s#owin" a "ood
%se o! )+ and a
"ood
%nderstandin"
o! t#e so!tware*
S%mmary +omment
#e ma"a8ine loo0s very overcrowded wit# a con!%sin" amo%nt o! !ont
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FLAW&
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
!ramin" a s#ot$
incl%din" and
e&cl%din"
elements as
appropriate
9'( Framin" o!
s#ots is
reasona-ly
"ood #owever
some elements
need to -e
e&cl%ded*%sin" a variety o!
s#ot distances as
appropriate
2=( Little
variety o! s#ot
distances*
Mainly mid
s#ots t#e some
close %ps %sed
#owever t#ey
are appropriate
!or t#e
ma"a8ine*s#ootin" material
appropriate to t#e
tas0 set
27( S#ootin"
material is
appropriate
#owever
sli"#tly -l%rry
ma0in" ima"es
loo0 %nclearand r%s#ed*
selectin" mise(en(
sc3ne incl%din"
colo%r$ 4"%re$
li"#tin"$ o-.ects
and settin"
2'( #e li"#tin"
is very dar0
and co%ld -e
improved*
+olo%rs are all
complementary
towards eac#
ot#er and stand
o%t well*
O-.ects are
appropriate !ort#e style o!
m%sic* Settin"
is speci4ed in
t#e ma"a8ine
w#ic# ma0es it
accepta-le
#owever loo0s
very messy and
r%s#ed*manip%latin"
p#oto"rap#s as
appropriate to t#econte&t !or
92( Most
pict%res
manip%latedwell wit# t#e
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presentation$
incl%din" croppin"
and resi8in"
e&ception o! a
co%ple o! t#e
!ront cover* All
ima"es cropped
e,ectively and
resi8ed
reasona-ly
well*acc%rately %sin"
lan"%a"e and
re"ister
7( Lan"%a"e is
appropriate !or
ma"a8ine and
t#e re"ister is
also accepta-le
and %sed well to
draw t#e
a%dience( Most te&t
and ima"es are
laid o%t well
wit# t#e
e&ception o! an
ima"e on t#e
do%-le pa"e
spread
overlappin"
some te&t*s#owin"
%nderstandin" o!
conventions o!layo%t and pa"e
desi"n
'( A clear
%nderstandin"
o! layo%t andor"anisin" te&t
and ima"es on
pa"es* All laid
o%t in an
e,ective way*s#owin"
awareness o! t#e
need !or variety in
!onts and te&t si8e
7( ?ood
variety o! !onts
%sed* Doesn
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All colo%rs complement eac# ot#er and t#ere is a variety o! !ont and te&t si8es %sed
e,ectively to ma0e t#e ma"a8ine loo0 intri"%in"* Some iss%es wit# ima"es s%c# as li"#tin"
and manip%lation as well as t#e iss%e o! t#em loo0in" r%s#ed* #e layo%t is "ood and t#e
positionin" all wor0s well s#owin" a "ood %nderstandin" o! P#otos#op and )+ so!tware*
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STACK
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
!ramin" a s#ot$incl%din" and
e&cl%din"
elements as
appropriate
>( Framin" is"ood* +over
p#oto leaves
-ac0"ro%nd o%t
w#ic# is
e,ective*%sin" a variety o!
s#ot distances as
appropriate
9;( A variety o!
s#ots %sed*
+lose %p$ mid(
s#ot and lon"er
s#ots %sed*s#ootin" material
appropriate to t#etas0 set
95( S#ootin"
materialappropriate
#owever co%ld
-e o! sli"#tly
-etter %ality*selectin" mise(en(
sc3ne incl%din"
colo%r$ 4"%re$
li"#tin"$ o-.ects
and settin"
5( +olo%rs are
all very
complementary
towards eac#
ot#er* #e
li"#tin" is %ite
dar0 -%t
appropriate !or
t#e ma"a8ine*
#e 4"%res are
all placed
e,ectively in
t#e ma"a8ine
and wor0 well
to"et#er* #e
o-.ects and
settin" all apply
to t#e ma"a8ine
style*manip%latin"
p#oto"rap#s as
appropriate to t#e
conte&t !or
presentation$
incl%din" croppin"
and resi8in"
>( +over
ima"e c%t o%t
and cropped
e,ectively to
wor0 well !or
t#e style o! t#e
ma"a8ine*
Ot#er ima"es
#ave -een
manip%lated
well on t#e
pa"es*acc%rately %sin" 95( Relatively
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lan"%a"e and
re"ister
"ood lan"%a"e
wit# s%ita-le
re"ister*
owever a
"rammatical
error occ%rred
-%t more or less
well*appropriately
inte"ratin"
ill%stration and
te&t
=( e&t and
ima"es
positioned well
on pa"es and
are appropriate
!or t#e
ma"a8ines
style*s#owin"
%nderstandin" o!
conventions o!
layo%t and pa"e
desi"n
=( Layo%t was
well desi"ned
and applies to
t#e ma"a8ine
"enre*s#owin"
awareness o! t#e
need !or variety in
!onts and te&t si8e
9=( Little
variety o! !onts
-%t awareness
o! contin%ity
ma0es it wor0
well on t#e
ma"a8ine*%sin" )+
appropriately !ort#e tas0 set
7( )+ was
%sed well*P#otos#op %sed
appropriately to
crop and
manip%late
ima"es as well
as position te&t
and p#otos on
all pa"es*
S%mmary +omment
#e ma.ority o! elements o! t#is ma"a8ine are "ood and complementary* For e&le$ t#e
colo%rs all wor0 well as t#ey are all o! t#e same tone* #e red stands o%t and draws t#e
attention o! t#e a%dience* +roppin" and ima"e manip%lation is done e,ectively s#owin" a
clear %nderstandin" o! t#e %se o! P#otos#op and )+*
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DUBZONE
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
!ramin" a s#ot$incl%din" and
e&cl%din"
elements as
appropriate
9'( S#ots!ramed well
and e&cl%de all
-ac0"ro%nd
elements to
ma0e it loo0
clear and
e@cient*
owever s#ots
co%ld -e o!
-etter %ality
and croppin"
%sed on t#e
cover is
ne"atively
done* er
#ead is not
incl%dedB*%sin" a variety o!
s#ot distances as
appropriate
9>( A sli"#t
variety o! s#ots
%sed* +lose %p
and mid s#ot
on do%-le pa"e
spread as well
as cover* A
lon"er s#ot is
%sed on t#e
contents pa"e*s#ootin" material
appropriate to t#e
tas0 set
29( S#ootin"
material is
appropriate
alt#o%"#
ima"es are
lac0in" in
%ality and loo0
r%s#ed*selectin" mise(en(
sc3ne incl%din"
colo%r$ 4"%re$
li"#tin"$ o-.ects
and settin"
2=( +olo%rs are
-ri"#t and
attractive !or
t#e a%dience*
Li"#tin" is
relatively dar0
and co%ld -e
improved*
O-.ects s%c# as
t#e "%itar are
appropriate !or
t#e "enre o!ma"a8ine* #e
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settin" is
%n0nown as t#e
w#ite
-ac0"ro%nd is
all t#at is
displayed*manip%latin"
p#oto"rap#s as
appropriate to t#e
conte&t !or
presentation$
incl%din" croppin"
and resi8in"
9>( Most
ima"es are
manip%lated
well and
resi8ed to 4t
into t#e layo%t*
#e !ront cover
ima"e does not
wor0 as well as
t#e top is c%t
o,* #ere!ore
t#ere are someiss%es wit#
croppin"*acc%rately %sin"
lan"%a"e and
re"ister
9( Relatively
appropriate
lan"%a"e
str%ct%re wit#
t#e correct
re"ister !or t#e
style o!
ma"a8ine*appropriately
inte"ratin"ill%stration and
te&t
2( Some
iss%es wit# te&tand ima"es on
do%-le pa"e
spread as t#e
te&t over laps
onto ima"es
and crosses
over -orders*
#is creates a
messy and
or"anised
e,ect* #e
ima"e on t#econtents pa"e
o-str%cts some
o! t#e te&t
-ein" read
w#ic# #as a
ne"ative
impact !or t#e
reader*s#owin"
%nderstandin" o!
conventions o!
layo%t and pa"e
desi"n
27(
/nderstandin"
o! layo%t can
-e noticed
alt#o%"# some
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iss%es wit# te&t
and ima"es
loo0in" messy*
#ere is an
e,ort to ma0e
pa"es loo0
or"anised and
orderly
#owever it
co%ld -e
cleaner*s#owin"
awareness o! t#e
need !or variety in
!onts and te&t si8e
2'( Little
variety o! !onts
%sed* 6ery
-asic !onts
alt#o%"# t#ey
do loo0 neat
and t#e%nderstandin"
o! contin%ity o!
!onts are
displayed*%sin" )+
appropriately !or
t#e tas0 set
)+ clearly %sed
and a -asic
%nderstandin"
o! P#otos#op is
s#own
t#ro%"#o%t*
S%mmary +omment
Attempt to ma0e t#e ma"a8ine loo0 str%ct%red and or"anised #owever t#e positionin" o! te&t
and ima"es loo0s %ite r%s#ed* Many areas o! t#e ma"a8ine loo0 messy wit# little variation in
!onts and te&t si8in"* #ere is only a very -asic %nderstandin" o! P#otos#op and )+*
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Task 2
"ow using the skills youve ac*uired in task + evaluate yo! o"# "o!k a#$ t%e#
t"o pieces of "o!k f!om classmates. Use the space provided to give specificexamplesand write a summary comment at the bottom of the page.
&a'a(i#e title) SO*O +Emily T!to#,
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
!ramin" a s#ot$
incl%din" and
e&cl%din"
elements as
appropriate
S#ots are
!ramed well and
centred
incl%din" only
appropriate
elements in t#e
-ac0"ro%nd*%sin" a variety o!
s#ot distances as
appropriate
+lose %p$ Mid
S#ot and a lon"
s#ot are %sed
well*s#ootin" material
appropriate to t#e
tas0 set
S#ootin"
material very
appropriate all
p#otos are clear
and well s#ot*selectin" mise(en(
sc3ne incl%din"
colo%r$ 4"%re$li"#tin"$ o-.ects
and settin"
+olo%rs are all
complementary
and li"#tin" isvery "ood* )t
e&cl%des and
incl%des t#e
write amo%nt o!
s#adowin" !or
t#e "enre*
O-.ects s%c# as
t#e "%itar are
very
appropriate !or
t#e ma"a8ine
style* #e
settin" is 4ttin"
!or t#e "enre as
t#e o%tdoors
and st%dio type
settin"s reCect
t#e indie "enre*manip%latin"
p#oto"rap#s as
appropriate to t#e
conte&t !or
presentation$incl%din" croppin"
and resi8in"
All p#otos
manip%lated$
cropped and
resi8ed
accordin" to t#ema"a8ine
layo%t*
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acc%rately %sin"
lan"%a"e and
re"ister
Lan"%a"e
appropriate
wit# t#e odd
spellin" error*
Re"ister to t#e
correct level !or
t#e "enre*appropriately
inte"ratin"
ill%stration and
te&t
e&t and ima"es
all arran"ed to
complement
eac# ot#er and
are arran"ed
appropriately*s#owin"
%nderstandin" o!
conventions o!
layo%t and pa"e
desi"n
Layo%t is m%c#
or"anised and
clean loo0in"*
All very
appropriate or
"enre o!
ma"a8ine*s#owin"
awareness o! t#e
need !or variety in
!onts and te&t si8e
Small variety o!
!onts and si8es
%sed -%t ones
%sed wor0 well
to s#ow
contin%ity*%sin" )+
appropriately !or
t#e tas0 set
)+ is %sed
appropriately
and a clear
%nderstandin"o! P#otos#op is
s#own*
S%mmary +omment
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&a'a(i#e title) -NTE./A* +E$ie,
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
!ramin" a s#ot$incl%din" and
e&cl%din"
elements as
appropriate
S#ots all !ramedcentral and
well* 6ery
appropriate !or
t#e "enre
presented in
t#e ma"a8ine*%sin" a variety o!
s#ot distances as
appropriate
Similar s#ots
%sed -%t %sed
very well* More
variety needed*s#ootin" material
appropriate to t#etas0 set
S#ootin"
material is veryappropriate
wit# clear
ima"es and no
-l%rrin"*selectin" mise(en(
sc3ne incl%din"
colo%r$ 4"%re$
li"#tin"$ o-.ects
and settin"
Li"#tin" is all
e&cellent !or t#e
"enre and is
very
appropriate*
#e colo%rin" is
all very
complementary*
Only one
settin" %sed
and no o-.ect
-%t t#e
contin%ity
wor0s well*manip%latin"
p#oto"rap#s as
appropriate to t#e
conte&t !or
presentation$
incl%din" croppin"
and resi8in"
P#otos are all
manip%lated$
resi8ed and
cropped well*
All are very
appropriate !or
t#e conte&t -%t
co%ld -e varied*acc%rately %sin"
lan"%a"e and
re"ister
Lan"%a"e and
re"isters
appropriate -%t
some
"rammatical
errors*appropriately
inte"ratin"
ill%stration andte&t
e&t and
ill%strations all
positioned welland loo0
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appropriate !or
t#e "enre*s#owin"
%nderstandin" o!
conventions o!
layo%t and pa"e
desi"n
?ood layo%t
and pa"e
desi"n #owever
some col%mns
are di,erent
si8es* Mostly
or"anised
layo%t*s#owin"
awareness o! t#e
need !or variety in
!onts and te&t si8e
Di,erent si8es !
te&t %sed
s#owin" a clear
variety* Some
variety o! !onts
%sed #owever
%sed
appropriately
and 4t t#e
"enre well*%sin" )+
appropriately !or
t#e tas0 set
)+ %sed very
well and a clear
%nderstandin"
o! P#otos#op is
s#own*
S%mmary +omment
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&a'a(i#e title) AS0 +Elliot,
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
!ramin" a s#ot$
incl%din" ande&cl%din"
elements as
appropriate
S#ots !ramed
well and allcentral*
lements all
e&cl%ded to loo0
appropriate or
t#e "enre*%sin" a variety o!
s#ot distances as
appropriate
Little variety o!
s#ots %sed -%t
p#otos is all
ta0en well*s#ootin" material
appropriate to t#e
tas0 set
S#ootin"
material is very
appropriate asp#otos are very
clear loo0in"*selectin" mise(en(
sc3ne incl%din"
colo%r$ 4"%re$
li"#tin"$ o-.ects
and settin"
Li"#tin" is all
very "ood and
4ts t#e "enre*
+olo%rin" is all
appropriate and
complementary*
All %nneeded
o-.ects are
e&cl%ded*
owever co%ld
-e a variation o!
settin" %sed*manip%latin"
p#oto"rap#s as
appropriate to t#e
conte&t !or
presentation$
incl%din" croppin"
and resi8in"
All p#oto"rap#s
are
manip%lated$
resi8ed and
cropped o%t* All
ima"es are c%t
o%t well and 4t
t#e "enre
appropriately*acc%rately %sin"
lan"%a"e and
re"ister
Lan"%a"e is all
appropriate and
re"ister 4ts t#e
"enre* More
words t#at 4t
t#e "enre co%ld
-e an
improvement*appropriately
inte"ratin"
ill%stration and
te&t
e&t and
ima"es are
inte"rated well*
+o%ld -epositioned
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closer to"et#er*s#owin"
%nderstandin" o!
conventions o!
layo%t and pa"e
desi"n
Ma"a8ine loo0s
or"anised -%t
lots o! -lan0
space t#at
wo%ld -e an
improvement )
4lled*s#owin"
awareness o! t#e
need !or variety in
!onts and te&t si8e
Lar"e variety o!
te&t si8es %sed
#owever little
variety o! !onts
%sed*%sin" )+
appropriately !or
t#e tas0 set
)+ %sed very
appropriately
!or t#e "enre
and a clear
%nderstandin"
o! P#otos#op
s#own*
S%mmary +omment
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'ask 3 'arget setting
/se t#e !eed-ac0 !rom yo%r classmates to set tar"ets to improve yo%r wor0*/se t#e "rid -elow to !oc%s yo%r areas !or improvement* ry to -e as speci4c
as possi-le and w#ere possi-le create one tar"et !or eac# area o! t#e mar0sc#eme* Remem-er to -e realistic$ t#at means ma0in" s%re yo%r tar"ets areac#ieva-le and realistic !or yo%r a-ility*
&a'a(i#e title) CO.D
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
!ramin" a s#ot$
incl%din" and
e&cl%din"elements as
appropriate
Some elements
e&cl%ded t#at
need to -eincl%ded t#e
!eet on t#e
!ront coverB*
Most s#ots
!ramed central
and #ave a
clear
-ac0"ro%nd
t#at 4ts t#e
"enre*%sin" a variety o!
s#ot distances asappropriate
A ran"e o!
s#ots anddistances %sed
-%t co%ld -e
more varied*s#ootin" material
appropriate to t#e
tas0 set
S#ootin"
material
appropriate and
ima"es are
clear*selectin" mise(en(
sc3ne incl%din"
colo%r$ 4"%re$
li"#tin"$ o-.ectsand settin"
Li"#tin" is o!
"ood %ality
wit# a correct
settin" o! aw#ite
-ac0"ro%nd*
+olo%rs are not
stri0in"
e&cl%din"
printed
versionB*
)mprove -y
addin" -ri"#ter
colo%rs to
attract t#e
a%dience
7/24/2019 Coursework Anaylsis
20/20
YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
#owever
colo%rs do
complement
eac# ot#er*manip%latin"
p#oto"rap#s as
appropriate to t#e
conte&t !or
presentation$
incl%din" croppin"
and resi8in"
P#otos are
cropped and
resi8ed mainly
appropriately
#owever !eet
are e&cl%ded on
t#e main ima"e
and need to -e
incl%ded !or a
-etter loo0in"
ima"e*acc%rately %sin"
lan"%a"e and
re"ister
Lan"%a"e
re"ister
appropriate
wit# t#e odd
"rammatical
error*appropriately
inte"ratin"
ill%stration and
te&t
e&t and ima"es
all arran"ed
appropriately
and loo0
or"anised* Lots
o! ima"es and
te&t incl%ded*s#owin"
%nderstandin" o!conventions o!
layo%t and pa"e
desi"n
Layo%t is
or"ani8ed wit#t#e e&ception o!
some te&t in t#e
wron" place*s#owin"
awareness o! t#e
need !or variety in
!onts and te&t si8e
Little variety o!
te&t si8es and
!onts %sed to
loo0 a,ective*
owever t#e
contin%ity o!
te&t wor0s well*%sin" )+
appropriately !ort#e tas0 set
)+ %sed
appropriatelywit# an
%nderstandin"
o! P#otos#op*