Yu ZhongyingHongda Senior High School

书面表达 伴随着“开心农场”的开通，“偷菜”成了风靡全国的网络游戏。假如你是一名高三学生，请你针对身边有些同学沉溺于“偷菜”的现状，给某英文报写一篇 120 词左右的英语短文，要求如下： 1 、描述身边学生沉溺于“偷菜”的现象； 2 、陈述你对此现象的观点； 3 、你的建议。注：开头已给出，你只需接着写。 With the start of Happy Farm,________

Process Writing Revising( 修正 ) & Polishing( 润

色 )

Revise and polish your article.

Editing ( 定稿 )Process Writing

2. Pay attention to your handwriting and the neatness of your article when you hand it in to your teacher or copy it onto the exam paper.

1. After revising and polishing your article, read your article to make sure it is what you expect.

3. Read the article again to guarantee it is exactly what you have written.

Process Writing 过程写作 1 、 Analyzing ( 审题 )2 、 Listing( 罗列关键词 / 词组 / 句型 )3 、 Drafting( 打草稿 )4 、 Revising( 修正 )& Polishing( 润色 )5 、 Editing ( 定稿 )

Summarizing

What have we learned today?

A. Where there is a will, there is a way.B. No pains, no gains.C. Action speaks louder than words.D. He laughs best who laughs last.

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Only by working hard can we harvest a lot.

Wish you a great success in your exam and all your life!

Homework

Polish your article.

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Analyzing

What’s the phenomenon?

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Listing and narrowing your ideas

1. What is your opinion about the phenomenon? (Group work)

2. Give your suggestions.

Process WritingDrafting---Making connection

How many parts would you divide the article into?

Par.1:Description of the phenomenon

Par.2:Your opinion

Par.3:Your suggestions

What are the main parts?

Thinking:How to deal with the given beginning?Drafting

Write down the article on the paper.

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attractive→The game is attractive.

be addicted to→A great number of students are addicted to the game.

Connecting and beautifying↓

The game of stealing vegetables is so attractive that a great number of students are addicted to it, ________ worries me a lot.

developing↓

The game of stealing vegetables is so attractive that a great number of students are addicted to it

How to make up sentences ?

which

Process Writing

Checking Time:＊ the punctuation( 标点 )＊ the capital letters( 大写字母 )＊ the correct form of each verb ( 动词形式 )＊ the correct form of each noun( 名词形式 )＊ the set phrases and sentence patterns( 固定短语和句型 )

＊ the completeness of each sentence( 句子成分完整 )＊ the clearness of the main idea (a topic sentence) for each paragraph( 段落大意清晰或每段有主题句 )◆If you can, polish your article by using advanced words( 高级

词汇 ) and complex sentences( 复杂句型 ).

Revising( 修正 ) & Polishing( 润色 )