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    Intellectual

    Writing

    By. Ma. Teresa Walang

    Preface

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    One of the co-curricular activities

    that Pines international Academy

    integrates to its writing course

    syllabus is the introduction of the

    basic concepts of campus journalism

    and its application. The main goal of

    the course is to come up with a class

    newsletter similar to that of a

    school. An end camp issue is found to

    be more productive in terms of

    students mastery of micro-language

    skills although it entails more time

    and effort. One doesnt need to be

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    1. Plot: What is going to happen?

    2. Setting: Where will the story take place? When will the story take place?

    3. Characterization: Who are the main characters? What do they look like?

    4. Structure: How will the story begin? What will be the problem? How is

    the problem going to be resolved?

    5. Theme: What is the theme / message the writer is attempting to write?

    The use of Language is also important take note of the following:

    1. Actionverbs: Action verbs provide interest to the writing.

    2. Written in the first person (I, we) or the third person (he, she, and they).

    3. Usually past tense.

    4. Connectives, linking words to do with time.

    5. Specific nouns and verbs: Strong nouns and verbs have more specific meanings.

    6. Active nouns: Make nouns actually do something, eg.It was raining.(could

    become) Rain splashed down.

    7. Careful use of adjectivesandadverbs: Writing needs careful use of adjectives

    and adverbs to bring it alive, qualify the action and provide description and

    information for the reader.

    8. Use of the senses: Where appropriate, the senses can be used to describe and

    develop the experiences, setting and character:

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    What does it smell like?

    What can be heard?

    What can be seen - details?

    What does it taste like?

    What does it feel like?

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    Variety in sentence beginnings, there are a several ways to do this.

    1. Participles: "Jumping with joy I ran home to tell mum

    my good news."

    2. Adverbs: "Silently the cat crept toward the bird"

    3. Adjectives: "Brilliant sunlight shone through the

    window"

    4. Nouns: "Thunder claps filled the air"

    5. Adverbial Phrases: "Along the street walked the girl as

    if she had not a care in the world."

    6. Conversations/Dialogue: these may be used as an

    opener. This may be done through a series of short or

    one-word sentences or as one long complex sentence.

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    Example by using:

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    Topic: Writing Fairy Tales

    Objective: To be able to develop a story using the elements in writing a fairy talestory.

    Detailed Content

    In the land of make believe anything can happen. Fairy Tales do make us believe just

    that. It also makes children use their imagination. Fairy Tales take us to many

    places that we wouldn't be able to visit just for fun. Kids love magical-mystical

    happenings.

    The Elements of a Fairy Tale

    There are several elements present in a fairy tale. Here are few that can guide a

    writer in developing his/her fairy tale story.

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    Special beginning and/or ending words Once upon a

    time...and they lived

    Happily ever after.

    Good character

    Evil character

    Royalty and/or a castle are usually present

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    Example

    Once upon a time

    there was a prince whowanted to marry a

    princess; but she would

    have to be a real

    princess. He travelled all

    over the world to find

    one, but nowhere

    could he get what he

    wanted. There were

    princesses enough, but

    it was difficult to

    find out whether

    they were real ones.

    There was always

    something about them

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    Princess and the Pea

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    that was not as it should be. So he came home again and was sad, for he would have

    liked very much to have a real princess.

    One evening a terrible storm came on; there was thunder and lightning, and

    the rain poured down in torrents. Suddenly a knocking was heard at the city gate,and the old king went to open it.

    It was a princess standing out there in front of the gate. But, good gracious!

    what a sight the rain and the wind had made her look. The water ran down from her

    hair and clothes; it ran down into the toes of her shoes and out again at the heels.

    And yet she said that she was a real princess.

    "Well, we'll soon find that out," thought the old queen. But she said nothing,went into the bed-room, took all the bedding off the bedstead, and laid a pea on the

    bottom; then she took twenty mattresses and laid them on the pea, and then twenty

    eider-down beds on top of the mattresses.

    On this the princess had to lie all night. In the morning she was asked how

    she had slept.

    "Oh, very badly!" said she. "I have scarcely closed my eyes all night. Heaven

    only knows what was in the bed, but I was lying on something hard, so that I am

    black and blue all over my body. It's horrible!"

    Now they knew that

    she was a real princess

    because she had felt the

    pea right through the

    twenty mattresses and the

    twenty eider-down beds.

    Nobody but a realprincess could be as

    sensitive as that.

    So the prince took

    her for his wife, for now he

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    However, also note that some types of violence are still forbidden.

    The crime should be believable.

    While the details of the murder -- how, where, and why it's done, as well as how the

    crime is discovered -- are your main opportunities to introduce variety, make surethe crime is believable. Your reader will feel cheated if the crime is not something

    that could really happen.

    The detective should solve the case using only rational and scientific

    methods.

    The culprit must be capable of committing the crime.

    Your reader must believe your villain's motivation and the villain must be capable of

    the crime, both physically and emotionally.

    In mystery writing, don't try to fool your reader.

    The detective should not commit the crime. All clues should be revealed to the

    reader as the detective finds them.

    Example:

    Nancy Drew

    Nancy Drew moves to Los Angeles and in typical Drew fashion, immediately

    stumbles upon a mystery concerning a dead movie star and her inheritance.

    Nancy soon discovers that the rude needling from her new classmates is the

    least of her worries as she's almost run over by a car and nearly blown up

    diffusing a bomb. Nancy's luck runs out when the bad guys get the drop on her

    and put Chloroform over mouth! Nancy is taken by complete surprise and barely

    has time to fight before the anesthetic hits her nostrils and turns out her

    lights! They drug Nancy in broad daylight and make her go nightly night! The

    attack is so effective, so precise, people walk right past the vehicle with no

    idea there's a young girl inside, fully anesthetized, chloroformed out of her

    mind! Nancy has no idea what hit her as her abductors drive her to their

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    hideout. Nancy comes to drugged but quickly escapes her attackers. Nancy

    feels foolish for having had her nose and mouth shoved into a rag that knocked

    her out. But the resilient sleuth marches forward, solves the case, then

    watches the men who drugged her go down.

    Topic: Writing Science Fiction StoriesObjective: To be able to develop a story with the help of the given elements of a

    science fiction story.

    Detailed Content

    ELEMENTS OF SCIENCE FICTION

    1. EVIDENCE OF ADVANCED TECHNOLOGY

    The story should have a high and advance evidence of technology the characters

    may be alien or domestic who are capable of many things and with high intellect.

    2. FUTURE TIME SETTING

    The time setting may be alternate time of the past and present, but it would be best

    if the time setting is in the future where everything is advance.

    3. ALTERNATE LOCATION SETTING

    The location would exactly give the picture of the story it may be on another planet,

    may be under the oceans or may be in another dimension of existence.

    4. ALIENS

    One particular feature of a science fiction story is the existence of aliens that may

    be on earth or other place, or humans that may have changed or mutated, or humans

    may be on an alien planet

    5. STRANGE POWERS

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    Often aliens have strong mysterious powers; sometimes humans now have new

    powers or senses ex. ESP

    6. SCIENCE IS IMPORTANT IN THE STORY SOMEHOW

    It may refer to technology or understanding of the world7. PROTAGONIST (HERO)

    8. ANTAGONIST (VILLAIN)

    It may be a being or beings or may be a force, sometimes it is a societies rules.

    Or sometimes human sometimes not

    9. PROBLEM

    The problem must be overcome.

    10. RESOLUTION

    Usually the protagonist solves the problem.

    Example:

    Star Wars (summary)

    Luke Skywalker stays with his foster aunt and

    uncle on a farm on Tatooine. He is desperate to

    get off this planet and get to the Academy like

    his friends, but his uncle needs him for the next

    harvest. Meanwhile, an evil emperor has taken

    over the galaxy, and has constructed a

    formidable "Death Star" capable of destroying

    whole planets. Princess Leia, a leader in the

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    resistance movement, acquires plans of the

    Death Star, places them in R2D2, a droid, and

    sends him off to find Obi-Wan Kenobi. Before he

    finds him, R2D2 ends up on Skywalkers' farm

    with his friend C3PO. R2 then wanders into the

    desert, and when Luke follows, they eventually

    come across Obi-Wan.

    Topic: Writing Romance Stories

    Objective: To be able to write a story centered to a love story with an emotional

    satisfying happy ending

    Detailed Content

    When planning on writing a love story or romance, you will need to create the

    perfect characters, setting, and plot for your story. Here are some of the things to

    keep in mind while you are writing.

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    The Hero

    The hero in your story should be strong, exciting and bold. He knows what he wants,

    and does what is necessary to get it. He has a purpose in life. He does not have to be

    rich, brilliant, political, or economically powerful. But he can be any of those, if youwish.

    Heroine

    The heroine in your story can be strong-willed or shy. She can have imperfections as

    long as they are not great. She can look anyway you want, as long as she is attractive

    to the hero. But one thing she must be is someone the hero is willing to do whatever

    it takes to have.

    Villain

    The antagonist is the best character to write. He can be as bad as you want, as evil

    as you need. He/She should be flexible and motivated. He knows what he wants and

    is willing to do ANYTHING to get it. But he has to have some good qualities. Every

    human on the planet, even the most evil, has something about them that is not evil.

    Secondary Characters

    The story is about your hero and heroine. Your secondary characters should never

    be more vivid then your main characters. They can be used to move the story

    forward, give information to the main characters, and provide support to them, but

    they should never take control of the story. Every part should have at least one of

    the main characters in it.

    Setting

    Where you set your story is very important. Your setting does not have to be out ofthe ordinary as long as you are able to convey it to your reader in such a way that

    they can become part of the setting.

    Story Basics

    The main characters should meet as soon as possible and find themselves in conflict

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    with each other right away. Their first meeting should be emotionally. It should

    make them be attracted, and hate, each other from the beginning.

    Example:

    Enchanted (summary)

    In an animated fairy tale world, a young girl meets and falls in love with

    the handsome prince of her dreams. News of this romance upsets the

    prince's mother, the evil queen, who uses her black magic to send the

    girl hurtling out of the animated world into the one place in the universe

    where there is no true love: modern day Manhattan. The now-real girl

    has to survive in New York City and find her way home again to her true

    love.

    Topic: Writing Historical Stories

    Objective: To be able to present the scene and characters, should be described in

    detail, and provided with sufficient historical evidence exists to back up the

    description.

    Detailed Content:

    I- Requirements in Writing a Historical Story

    Historical writing requires a combination of attention to structural (The use of verb

    tenses and the subject and verb agreement) considerations along with the finding

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    and assessing of facts. Therefore, it is not sufficient to write well grammatically

    and stylistically. The writer must also address the background of the event, and

    significant dates.

    II- Three Basic Processes

    In order to produce an historical work, the writer must master three basic

    processes: gathering data; criticism of that data; and the presentation of his or her

    facts, interpretations, and conclusions, based upon the data, in an accurate and

    readable form. Before beginning the writing process, the writer should have an

    understanding of: the data that has been gathered.

    Example:

    Robin Hood (summary)

    After escaping from a Dungeon after being captured

    by the Turks during the crusades, Robin, son of Lord

    Locksley and a warrior Moor named Azeem return to

    England only to

    find Robin's

    father has been

    murdered by the

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    corrupt Sheriff of Nottingham and has taken over his

    Father's lands. Unable to be helped by Maid Marian

    Dubois, sister of Robin's friend Peter who died trying

    to help Robin and Azeem escaped. Robin vows to

    avenge his father and flees to the Forest of Sherwood,

    home to a band of outlaws who have been banished

    from their villages by the Sheriff of Notingham.

    Combining the forces of the outlaws, Robin and his

    merry men set out on a crusade against the Sheriff of

    Nottingham and defeat the Sheriff of Nottingham and

    his henchmen who bids to take over the throne of

    England's rightful ruler King Richard and put a end to

    the corruption that has infested the English

    countryside.

    Topic: Writing Adventure Stories

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    Objective: To be able to compose a story encompassing characters in pursuit of a

    mission.

    Detailed Content:

    In an adventure story, one or more people set out on a quest. The path they take is

    seldom smooth and various parts tell us the characters travels. It has more

    structure, excitement is the key ingredient. Adventures can happen to ordinary

    people going about their daily chores.

    Adventure stories can encompass other story types, including escape, rescue,

    thriller, romance and more. Perhaps more than any other genre, though, the

    adventure embraces traditional plot elements, such as a journey, gaining symbolic

    artifacts and defeating a villain.

    Example:

    Indiana Jones (summary)

    Three years after he recovered The Ark of the Covenant. Jones recovered anartifact that he found as a kid, the Cross of Francisco De Coronado from

    treasure hunters. Now, Jones discovers the history of another biblical

    artifact called "The Holy Grail". He was also informed that his father, Henry

    Jones is missing. Jones has to find his father who is looking for the Grail.

    However, Jones will become involved in the search of the Holy Grail along with

    his father, as well as fighting the Nazis to reach it.

    Topic: Writing Fables Stories

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    Objective: To be able to convey a good moral, teaching the readers ethics of life

    through writing a fable story.

    Detailed Content:

    I- Choose a moral

    All fables have a moral. What is the lesson that you want to teach? You can use a

    well known saying or come up with your own.

    II- Invent characters

    Who will be in your fable? Many fables have animal characters. Your characters canbe animals, people, objects, or anything you like. If you choose animals or objects,

    you should use good personification (when you make a thing, idea, or an animal

    dosomething only humans can do.)to make your characters more believable.

    III- Find a setting

    A fable can take place anywhere or anytime. It can be a in a real place or an

    imaginary one.

    IV- Create a plot

    All stories need a plot. What will happen to your characters? What will be the

    conflict? How will they learn their lesson?

    1) Introduce the characters and setting

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    Pre-writing: Planning

    Writing Proper: Getting it down on

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    Objective: To write an original creation of myth making sure to include all the

    elements of a myth:

    Detailed Content:

    Myth explains how things came into being. It composes of the elements like;

    1) characters 2) setting, 3) conflict, 4) plot, and 5) resolution.

    During the pre-writing

    Choose something you've wondered about, something that interests you, or

    something that you think

    It would be enjoyable to write about to use as the basis for your own creation myth.

    For example, you might want to write about:

    how cats got their tails

    how the sun came into being

    why the moon disappears once a month

    why giraffes have long necks

    why there is dew on the grass in the summer

    why dogs bark instead of chirp why wheels are round

    why penguins can't fly

    why trees grow vertically instead of horizontally

    why people have language and animals do not

    Create a setting, choose characters, and identify the problem. Remember the way in

    which the problem in your story is resolved should somehow influence the creation

    idea you are describing.

    Plan your myth using a story map

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    Drafting

    Using the information you wrote in your story map write the draft of your myth.

    Example:

    Creation of the world (summary)

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    In the begining there was Chaos. From Chaos the first gods

    were born -- Uranus and Gaea, the sky and the earth. They

    had plenty of children, but Uranos shut them all in Tartarus

    because he couldn't stand their ugliness. Desperate Gaia told

    one of her sons into revenge. Cronus cut his father's secret

    parts off with a sword. And Cronus' reign began and the king

    of gods married his sister, Rhea. Afraid of his father's

    prophecy, which said that he will be killed by his son, the god

    ate all his children just after they were born. Rhea couldn't

    stand it any longer and when she gave birth to Zeus, she

    gave her husband a stone in diapers. Cronus swallowed him,

    suspecting nothing. The baby was raised on Crete by

    mountain nymphs and the goat Amalthea. When Zeus has

    grown up, he killed his father and gave freedom to his

    brothers and sisters who were living bowels. The powered

    was distributed between gods, who have moved to Mount

    Olympus and lived their lives joyfully, arguing and loving

    each other and watching people. Zeus also had many

    children, not only with his wife Hera but also with other

    goddesses and even women.

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    Topic: Writing Life /Personal Stories

    Objective: To be able to write down personal life experiences following the given

    suggestions in writing a personal essay.

    Detailed Content:

    Some Suggestions for Writing a Personal Experience Essay

    1. When you see the topic, quickly choose oneexperience from your life that

    relates to the topic.

    2. Write down some quick notes about the experience on a separate piece of

    paper.

    3. Don't waste time on a formal introduction; jump right into the experience

    or story. Save general statements for the conclusion.

    4. For most personal experience essays, use simple past or past continuous

    tense. If something happened previous to the personal experience, use past

    perfect.

    5. Include details to make your essay interesting (but don't get off the topic.)

    6.

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    Remember:

    Also:

    see, hear, smell, feel, taste.

    emotions, thought, actions.

    (What were you thinking, feeling and doing?)

    Conclude by telling what you learned from the experience.

    7. Don't worry about grammar. Take five minutes at the end to proofread your

    essay. (Reading aloud helps you catch your mistakes.)

    8. Remember: Specific is Terrific! To do this take a look at your transitions

    Example:

    Helen Kellers Biography (summary)

    Helen Keller was born June 27, 1880 in Tuscumbia, Alabama. An

    unidentified illness took her hearing and sight when she was only 19 months old.

    After losing both, she became wild and uncontrollable due to her inability to

    communicate and learn.

    Almost as well known as Helen Keller is the work of Anne Sullivan, who

    became her teacher in 1887, working in a role that today is known as an

    intervener. Helen finally learned that things have names when Sullivan had the

    famous "water" breakthrough, finger spelling "water" into Helen's hand and

    pumping water for Helen to feel.

    After that breakthrough, there was no stopping Helen Keller. She went

    on to attend a school for the blind and other schools, learned how to talk,

    learned how to lip read with her fingers, and graduated from Radcliffe College.

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    Helen Keller never lived independently (unlike today where many deaf

    blind people live independently). She always lived with either Anne Sullivan (and

    for a few years, Anne Sullivan's husband too), or Polly Thompson who joined the

    household in the 1930s and stayed on after Sullivan passed away in 1936.Among the many things that Helen Keller was famous for saying was her

    statement that deafness was a "greater affliction" than blindness. Helen Keller

    passed away on June 1, 1968.

    Helen has been the subject of several books, particularly children's

    books. The image of a little girl discovering language through the spelling of the

    word "w-a-t-e-r" into her hand is fascinating for children.

    Week 2: NEWS WRITING

    Topic: Hard News Writing

    Objective: To produce and polish a hard news item thru writing following the set

    rules in journalism.

    Detailed Content

    Tell What, Why, When, How, Where and Who.

    As a general rule, every news story must answer the questions, What, Why, When,

    How, Where, and Who. Dont assume (guess) that your reader is already familiar

    with the context (background) of the story or basic background information. Be

    brief (short), but be sure to include all essential (important,

    relevant) information.

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    Use the active voiceActive voice: Subject of sentence does the action.

    Passive voice: Subject receives the action.

    Active voice Passive voice

    The Principal believesthat teachers

    must placemore effort on less active

    students.

    It is believedby the Principal that

    more effort must be placedon less

    active students.

    Researchers earlier showedthat high

    stress can causechildren to give up

    their studies.

    It wasearlier demonstrateddropping

    students can be causedby high stress.

    The teacher hitthe student. The student was hitby the teacher.

    Hard News and Soft News

    A news story can be hard, recording as concisely (in few words) as possible who,

    what, where, when, why and how of an event. Or it can be soft, standing back to

    examine the people, places and things that shape the world, nation or community.

    Feature stories are often written on these soft news events.

    There is no firm line between a news story and a feature

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    Topic: Writing Features

    Objective: To write something on which the students interest him or her the most.

    Detailed Content

    Features are not meant to deliver the news firsthand. They do contain elements of

    news, but their main function is to humanize, to add color, to educate, to entertain,

    to illuminate. They often recap major news that was reported in a previous news

    cycle.

    Features often:1. Profile people who make the news

    2. Explain events that move or shape the news

    3. Analyze what is happening in the world, nation or community

    4. Teach an audience how to do something

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    5. Suggest better ways to live

    6. Examine trends

    7. Entertain

    Personality profiles:

    A personality profile is written to bring an audience closer to a person in or out

    of the news. Interviews and observations, as well as creative writing, are used

    to paint a vivid picture of the person

    Human interest stories:

    A human interest story is written to show a subjects peculiarity (uniqueness) or

    its practical, emotional, or entertainment value.

    Trend stories:

    A trend story examines people, things or organizations that are having an

    impact on society. Trend stories are popular because people are excited to read

    or hear about the latest fads.

    In-depth stories:

    Through extensive research and interviews, in-depth stories provide a detailed

    account well beyond a basic news story or feature.

    Backgrounders:

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    A backgrounder--also called an analysis piece--adds meaning to current issues in

    the news by explaining them further. These articles bring an audience up-to-

    date, explaining how this country, this organization, this person happens to be

    where it is now.Writing and Organizing Feature Stories

    Feature writers seldom use the inverted-pyramid form. Instead, they may write a

    chronology that builds to a climax at the end, a narrative, a first-person article

    about one of their own experiences or a combination of these.

    Steps in Feature Writing:

    1. Choose the theme. The paper provides unity and coherence to the piece.

    It should not be too broad or too narrow.

    2. Write a lead that invites an readers into the story. A summary may not

    be the best lead for a feature.

    3. The body provides vital information while it educates, entertains, and

    emotionally ties a reader to the subject.

    4. Write clear, concise sentences. Sprinkle direct quotations, observations

    and additional background throughout the story. Paragraphs can be

    written chronologically or in order of importance.

    5. Use transition. Connect paragraphs with transitional words, paraphrases,

    and direct quotations.

    6. Use dialogue when possible. Feature writers, like fiction writers, often

    use dialogue to keep a story moving. Of course, feature writers cannotmake up dialogue; they listen for it during the reporting process. Good

    dialogue is like good observation in a story; it gives readers strong

    mental images and keeps them attached to the writing and to the storys

    key players.

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    7. Establish a voice. Another key element that holds a feature together is

    voice, the "signature" or personal style of each writer. Voice is the

    personality of the writer and can be used to inject color.

    8. Conclude with a quotation or another part of the line. A feature can trailoff like a news story or it can be concluded with a climax.

    Topic: Writing Editorial

    Objective: To make stand on given issues. In this students are asked to criticize the

    issue and, give suggestions for a change.

    Detailed Content

    An editorial is an article that presents the newspaper's opinion on an issue. Editorial

    writers build on an argument and try to persuade readers to think the same waythey do. Editorials are meant to influence public opinion, promote critical thinking,

    and sometimes cause people to take action on an issue. In essence, an editorial is an

    opinionated news story.

    Editorials have the following:

    1. Introduction, body and conclusion like other news stories

    2. An objective explanation of the issue, especially complex issues3. A timely news angle

    4. Opinions from the opposing view

    5. The opinions of the writer delivered in a professional manner. Good

    editorials engage issues, not personalities and refrain from name-calling

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    or other insignificant strategy of persuasion.

    6. Alternative solutions to the problem or issue being criticized. A good

    editorial should take a pro-active approach to making the situation

    better by using constructive criticism and giving solutions.7. A solid and concise conclusion that powerfully summarizes the writer's

    opinion.

    1. Explain or interpret: Editors often use these editorials to explain the way

    the newspaper covered a sensitive or controversial subject. School newspapers

    may explain new school rules or a particular student-body effort like a food

    drive.

    2. Criticize: These editorials constructively criticize actions, decisions or

    situations while providing solutions to the problem identified. Immediate purpose

    is to get readers to see the problem, not the solution.

    3. Persuade: Editorials of persuasion aim to immediately see the solution, not

    the problem. From the first paragraph, readers will be encouraged to take a

    specific, positive action. Political endorsements are good examples of editorials

    of persuasion.

    4. Praise: These editorials commend people and organizations for somethingdone well. They are not as common as the other three.

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    Topic: Writing Campus Celebrities

    Objective: To appropriate a profile for a certain campus celebrity.

    Detailed Content

    How to write about your favorite celebrity?

    Step 1

    Gain access to an interview with the celebrity you want to write about. Personal

    interviews are a key factor in securing factual information about a person you want

    to write about.

    Step 2

    Research biographical information about your celebrity personalitys life,

    information obtained from authorized biographies is more likely to be accurate than

    that from unauthorized.

    Step 3

    Determine what angle you are going to use for your article. Like feature articles,

    celebrity pieces need to have a narrow focus.

    Step 4

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    Use the notes you have gathered to form an outline for your article. Outlining a

    large task helps make it seem smaller and easier to handle.

    Step 5

    Write out a rough draft of your article, knowing that you can edit it later. Concernyourself with getting the facts down on paper.

    Topic: Writing Columns

    Objective: To express a certain view to inform, to entertain, and to educate the

    readers on some events concerning the academy.

    Detailed Content

    What is a column? A column is not a news article, but it is news. It generally answers

    why and how. It often is personal, using the first and second person (I and you). A

    column often states an opinion. It is said to be like writing an open letter. A column

    also has a standard head, called a title, and a by-line (name) at the top. These

    identify you and your column for the reader (Debrah Jefferson)

    Column suggestions

    When writing a column, do

    Give the reader timely, helpful information.

    Develop a structure and keep it.

    Write simple and short sentences and paragraphs.

    In personal columns, use local names and places.

    Learn the difference between a column and a news story.

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    When writing a column, don't

    Use technical or complex words.

    Talk in slang or unfamiliar terms.

    Talk about one topic constantly. Include too much detail or material. You should be stimulating interest, not

    exhausting a subject.

    Refer to yourself as a third person (this author, your reporter) or quote yourself

    (Jimmy Jones said). Instead use mine.

    Topic: Writing a Report (based on an interview)

    Objective: To write a report based on an interview to the source of information.

    Detailed Content:

    Selecting and Contacting your Interviewee

    Your interviewee can be involved in any aspect of professional writing. Select

    someone who works in your area(s) of interest.

    Ideally, you should arrange to conduct the interview in person. Face-to-face,

    real-time interaction will help to build rapport and give you the opportunity to ask

    follow-up questions as your interviewee responds. The best method for initiating

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    contact is to call your interviewee.

    1. introduce yourself and explain the purpose of the interview.

    2. give a clear sense of the time frame in which you need to schedule an appointment.

    3. forecast the amount of time you will need (45 minutes-1 hour) for the interview

    itself.

    4. if you want to tape the interview, ask for permission in advance.

    5. give him or her an effective way to get in touch with you if they have any

    questions or concerns.

    If your potential interviewee is not in when you call, be certain to leave a

    detailed message explaining who you are and why you are contacting him or her.

    Invite him or her to call you back, but also leave yourself an opening. State a

    particular day and time when you will call back.

    Consider the following as you draft your interview questions.

    As you plan your interview, think about not only the individual questions but also the

    shape of the interview as a whole. Order the questions so that they flow logically and

    productively build on each other.

    Have at least 6 well-developed questions, but don't let these questions stifle the

    natural flow of conversation.

    Listen carefully to the responses and ask follow-up questions based upon the

    interviewee's interests and concerns.

    Avoid questions that can be answered with a simple yes or no.

    Avoid asking questions that are too broad or too narrow.

    Avoid asking leading questions that assume particular answers and discourage the

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    interviewee from voicing alternative interests/concerns.

    Topic: Science and Technology

    Objective: To report an update regarding Science and technology thru writing.

    Detailed Content

    Writing strategies in science and technology classes improve students' ability to

    summarize information and make connections between new information and

    experiences.

    1. Summary Exercises

    Writing a summarize information provides concluding thoughts. Paragraphs or essays

    can be assigned to evaluate a scientific article.

    2. Exploratory Exercises

    Though not as precise as summative exercises, exploratory writing has an important

    place in science and technology writing exercises are less formal and encourage

    students to make connections between known concepts or explore a new idea byusing what they already know.

    PREPARING FOR SCIENCE WRITING

    How can one prepare for freelance science writing?

    1. Learn about recent developments and new inventions.

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    2. Identify experts who are cited on particular subjects.

    3. Discover concepts for illustrations for articles.

    4. Identify print and electronic sources of additional information for the topic.

    5.

    Discern developing areas of interest.

    Topic: Preparing the Dummy Sheet

    Objective: Students will learn about newspaper design and the steps to making a

    well-designed page using a dummy sheet. They will be able to recreate already

    printed newspaper pages, and also create their own designs for newspaper pages.

    Detailed Content

    The dummy page is just a smaller, mock-up version of the actual printed newspaper

    page a sheet with a grid on it and is used to draw publication layouts.

    1.

    Draw a Plan- Draw a detailed plan of two facing pages following the desired

    design of the school. The design should be full size, with margins, measure all

    sides where you wish to drop your article. The

    more detailed it is the better and easier it will

    take to do the design.

    2. Number the Proofs- Place a number where you

    wish to drop the article, the numbering must

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    follow a certain order so it would also serve as the guide to where do you

    want an article be.

    3. Arrange the Proofs of Illustrations- Arrange the illustrations in order they

    will appear. Cut sheets of pictures or plain paper just to create an exactpicture of the real Layout soon after.

    4. Trim the Dummy- Trim the boxes where youll place the articlele. Use

    adhesive tape to stick your articles to their respective area of content.

    5. Continue the Process- Continue placing all the articles until you finish placing

    all the articles from the front page to the last. Adjust if necessary; use a

    ruler to measure all adjustments. Facing units should be balanced.

    6. Revise-Revise the dummy to fit in all things nearly. A form is usually a

    multiple of eight or sixteen pages.

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