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B l u e p r i n t   | C h e c k l i s t | W o r k s h e e t

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C O N T E N T S

M A N D Y W A L L A C E . C O M

W r i t e a S t e l l a r C r i t i q u e

Blueprint of a Stellar Critique

Writing Critique Checklist

Writing Critique Worksheet

B L U E P R I N T   O F A S T E L L A R C R I T I Q U E

Basic Info : everything the writer needs to match your

feedback to the right project and to reach out with

questions.

What Worked : it's just as important that the writer

know what to keep doing as what to improve. So be

generous with praise and kudos here, and note

everything they did well.

What to Work On : share what didn't work, but make

sure you avoid critiquing anything that's based on your

personal reading preferences. Point out issues like

continuity errors, for example, but not the writer's

genre choice. See the critique checklist for what to

note and ignore in your critique.

Suggested Resources : if you know of any great

resources that might help the writer, share them. 

On-Page Notes : it's a good idea to highlight those

great turns of phrase, funny moments, or awkward

sentences in the story's pages.

what to include and what to leave out of your next writing critique

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B E S T T O I G N O R EB E S T T O N O T E

anything the writer

specifically asks for

feedback on

show, don't tell issues

character development

plot holes

continuity errors

factual errors

word choice errors

lazy prose

awkward phrasing

structural issues

lack of tension

scenes that fall flat

pace & timing

anything else that did or

didn't work in the story

anything the writer asks

you to overlook

genre choices

writing style

POV choices

1st, 2nd, 3rd person

narration choices

voice & tone

spelling 

grammar

sentence structure choices

theme choices

language choices (like

cursing or its lack)

political opinion

anything to do with your

personal preference

M A N D Y W A L L A C E . C O M

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TITLE OF WORK

M A N D Y W A L L A C E . C O M

AUTHOR DATE

CRITIQUER NAME CRITIQUER EMAIL

WHAT WORKED

WHAT TO WORK ON

NOTES/SUGGESTED RESOURCES