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27.02.2015

A Writing Workshop for... Music Theatre

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Overview

What is an academic essay?

The writing process

Understanding essay questions

Paragraph planning

Writing introductions & conclusions

StyleReferencing

Proof reading

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Bloom’s TaxonomyBloom’s Taxonomy

  understanding

knowledge

evaluation

  synthesis

analysis 

application

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knowledge

understanding

application

analysis

synthesis

evaluation

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evaluation

knowledge

understanding

application

analysis

synthesis

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The Writing Process 

Identify your audience

Define your purpose

ollect ideas & data

Select rele!ant material

Structure your ideas

Write"

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Audience & Purpose

Who is your audience?

 Target message to

address the tutor’s needsDefne your purpose

Get to grips with the

essay uestionWor! out what research

you need to do

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Learning Outcomes

Demonstrate !now"edge o# a critica"and conte$tua" "anguage genera" tocu"tura" e%ents and specifc toper#ormance

&pp"y an open and enuiring mind tothe in%estigation o# a range o# artspractices

'uccess#u""y initiate and underta!eindependent research

&ppreciate the !ey #actors in thesuccess#u" written dissemination o#ideas and fndings

# What I$m here to

tell you a%out today

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Analysing the question

• Topic

• (nstruction

)ocus

'plore the use of te't

in a num%er of

contemporary piecesfor !oice and music(

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The 5 step plan

Identify the su%)ect

Identify the instruction

Identify the *ey aspects

+oo* for significant

words

 ,s* questions

*+,

-D/(/

D+-*/ -D/(/ 

(/

&+T&T/

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Apply the 5 step plan

/$p"ore the use o# te$t in a num3er o#

contemporary pieces #or %oice and music.

 4ou may draw upon wor!s that ha%e 3eenstudied in the seminars or e$p"ore wor!so#

your choice.

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The 5 step plan

Identify the su%)ect

Identify the instruction

Identify the *ey aspects

+oo* for significant

words

 ,s* questions

*+,

-D/(/

D+-*/ -D/(/ 

(/

&+T&T/

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Apply the 5 step plan

/$p"ore the use o# te$t in a num3er o#

contemporary pieces #or %oice and music.

 4ou may draw upon wor!s that ha%e 3eenstudied in the seminars or e$p"ore wor!so#

your choice.

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Apply the 5 step plan

/$p"ore the use o# te$t in a num3er o#

contemporary pieces #or %oice and music.

 4ou may draw upon wor!s that ha%e 3eenstudied in the seminars or e$p"ore wor!so#

your choice.

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Apply the 5 step plan

/$p"ore the use o# te$t in a num3er o#

contemporary pieces #or %oice and music.

 4ou may draw upon wor!s that ha%e 3eenstudied in the seminars or e$p"ore wor!so#

your choice.

 

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Apply the 5 step plan

/$p"ore the use o# te$t in a num3er o#

contemporary pieces #or %oice and music.

 4ou may draw upon wor!s that ha%e 3eenstudied in the seminars or e$p"ore wor!so#

your choice.

 

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Paragraph Planning

INTRO

BODY 

ON!"#ION

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The $o%y& %e'eloping anargu(ent

A sequence ofparagraphs

What #orm shou"dan argument ta!e?

A clear line of

thought

What is anargument?

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 What are the #unctions o# the 6mas!’ intheatre and music theatre? (n what waydoes the mas! o3ecti#y the character onstage? What other imp"ications are there inusing mas!s? The wor!s considered can 3eta!en #rom 3oth theatre and musictheatre8musica"s.

(ntroduction to topic 9 3ac!ground in#ormation

)unctions o# the mas!

: e$amp"es

;ow the mas! ser%es to o3ecti#y the character on

stage: e$amp"es

+ther imp"ications o# the mas!: e$amp"es

'ummarise !ey points

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Paragraphs

ac!ed c"ear paragraph structureo "in!s 3etween paragraphs

What is a paragraph?Why do we need paragraphs?

What goes into a paragraph?

What is a topic sentence?

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1. Write a topic sentence to e$press the

<&( (D/& o# the paragraph

2. larify ) e*pan% the topic sentence

=. >ro%ide e%idence to support the main idea

. omment on the e%idence

5. onc"ude 3y mentioning conseuences or

imp"ications and then "in! to the ne$t

paragraph

;ow to write a paragraph

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 The career image o# the hospita"ity industryis poor.  (t appears that the industry is

percei%ed as ha%ing "ow rates o# pay andsecond"y@ "ow status.  & report 3y the ;ote"and atering training ompany A200=B #oundthat o3s in the industry are common"y rated3y students as ha%ing "ower status than

other o3s reuiring simi"ar s!i""s andua"ifcations in other industries.  This meansthat the industry is at a disad%antage inattracting and retaining good staC.-n#ortunate"y the industry seems to 3e doing"itt"e to com3at this perception. The sur%ey

a"so showed that careers in#ormationa%ai"a3"e to students and young peop"ema!ing decision a3out their #uture wasinadeuate and o# poor ua"ity.

'amp"e >aragraph Topic

sentence

larify

and

e'pand

Pro!ide

e!idence

omment on

the e!idence

onsequences-

implications

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Writing an Introduction

W./?

0rientate your reader to your essay - assignment(

Show the reader you are answering the question(

W.,T & .0W?

Define words - content of the title(

Pro!ide a %it of %ac*ground('plain the purpose of your essay - assignment

.int at conclusion?

0utline your plan(

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Writing a Conclusion

W./?

Draw together your argument(

Show the reader that you ha!e answered the

essay question & achie!ed the +0s(

W.,T & .0W?

Remind reader of the introduction-+0s(

Summarise main points

Show connections %etween them

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Academic Style Don’t …

use slang - colloquialisms - metaphors

use contractions 4don$t5 hasn$t5 isn$t etc(6

write in the first person

start a sentence with certain con)unctions 47and$ or

7%ut$ for e'ample

use too many long5 direct quotes

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Academic Style

Do…

Write impersonally

hoose connectors appropriately8

howe!er-although-

ne!ertheless-on the other hand5 whereas

Include references5 in the correct format

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Referencing

There are different methods of referencing

/ou should use the .ar!ard system

9 ways to ma*e a reference 4IT,TI0168

Direct quotation

Paraphrase

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Direct quotation

:T3 reflects the dum%ing down of modern society;

4<rown5 9==>896( 

n!sentence quotation

<rown 49==>896 complains of a trend he calls5:the dum%ing down of modern society;(

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Paraphrase

"ame the author #ut use your own words

<rown 49==>6 points out that there is a

tendency in modern T3 society to o!ersimplifyissues(

or re$er to the author at the end o$ the

sentence%&&

Some critics %elie!e modern society suffers from a

tendency to o!ersimplify issues 4<rown59==>6(

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<i%liographies2ollow the con!entions

Deer5 @( and 3era5 R( D( 49==A6( Acting in Musical

Theatre; A Comprehensive Course. United

Bingdom8 Routledge(

In the essay itself the reference would loo* li*e this5

4Deer and 3era5 9==A6(

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Proo$!reading

>st ProofCread the structure of the argument

9nd ProofCread for grammar-spelling-punctuation

rd

hec* all references carefully & ma*e surethey correspond to the %i%liography

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Summary

Plan your essay first

Beep hold of all references

Include references e!erywhere

Eet the <i%liography right

ProofCread

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