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8/3/2019 Whitney Sanders Response Journal 2
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Contemporary Realistic Fiction and Poetry
Author- Kevin Henkes
Title- Kittens First Full Moon
Publication- 2004
Genre- Contemporary Realistic Fiction
Format- Picture Book
Awards:
Caldecott Award- 2005
Reflection-
The story begins with Kitten who experiences a full moon for the first time. However, no one has even
explained to Kitten what a full moon is and she does not know what to think about it. She eventually
relates the full moon to a big round white bowl of milk. Because Kitten believes the moon is a bowl of
milk shes wants to get to it. The story follows her as she tries to reach the moon to get some milk.
After Kitten tries and tries again she goes home to find a nice big bowl of milk waiting for her. The story
has a great message for kids in that can try new things and go for anything they put their minds to. This is
a fun story to read to younger elementary students. It does not have a lot of educational aspects but can be
used for the message or with story elements.
When critiquing the story I began with the positive aspects. I believe the author did a good job with
allowing readers to draw personal conclusions from the evidence. This story allows for students to see
that Kitten is not making it to the moon and they can predict why they think she is not making it, as well
as, what Kitten thinks it is. This allows them to use their own intelligence and thinking. Secondly, a story
should satisfy childrens basic needs and provide them with insights into their own problems and
relationships. Using this critique, children can use this story to relate to their own lives in that they can
discuss things they have struggles with or any misconceptions they have had, just as Kitten did with
confusing the moon and milk.
The negative aspects of the story that did not fall in the critique criteria, is that the story should expose
personal and social values central to our culture and how those values may change. With this story
allowing children to think for themselves and make conclusions bringing in culture or social values wouldallow children to think further. This would have been a good opportunity for students.
When looking at the critique I believe this story falls in the realistic fiction category. It did a good job of
including most of the critique points.
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8/3/2019 Whitney Sanders Response Journal 2
2/10
Author- Kate DiCamillo
Title- Because of Winn- Dixie
Publication- 2000
Genre- Contemporary Realistic Fiction
Format- Chapter Book
Awards:
Newberry Honor Book- 2001
Parents' Choice Gold Award Winner- 2000
Reflection
The story is about a young girl named Opal and her father as they make a move to Florida. When Opal
goes into a Winn Dixie supermarket at the beginning of the story she comes out with a dog. Opal names
the dog Winn Dixie because of where she found him. Because of Winn-Dixie, her father tells Opal ten
things about her absent mother, one for each year Opal has been alive. Winn Dixie is great at making
friends. The story follows as Opal and Winn Dixie as they meet many people, a librarian, a blind woman,
and an ex-con. They spend their summer meeting and listening to the stories of all the new people they
have met. This allows Opal a chance to let go and allow for more friendship in her life and deal with the
fact that her mother is gone.
When looking at the critique I believe the story follows many of the attributes. One thing is that the story
exposes personal and social values that are central to our culture and showing how they can change. This
is a great story to discuss death with children. This is part of our society and unfortunately something that
our young children may have to deal with. This story shows how they can overcome the death of someone
and how their life will go on and they can use the memory of that person to further their own lives. The
story could be used educationally but I feel it would be best for a fun read or a dear time for students.
Another critique should satisfy the childrens basic needs and provide insight to their own problems and
relationships. Again, this falls into the fact that they can relate to Opal and the struggles she has in the
story.
When looking at the critique I do not feel there is one that this story does not fit into. With that being said
this is a great example of realistic friction and for upper elementary students. I know my student alwaysenjoy this story and I enjoyed reading it as well!
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8/3/2019 Whitney Sanders Response Journal 2
3/10
Author- Patricia Polacco
Title- Thank you, Mr. Faulkner
Publication-1998
Genre- Contemporary Realistic Fiction
Format- Childrens Picture Book
Awards-
Authors Hall of Fame
Reflection-
The main character of the story Trisha is eager to learn everything she needs to know. However, when she
looks at words and numbers they look like a jumbled mess. She begins to fall behind and struggles with
her classmates calling her names and thinking she is stupid. When Mr. Faulkner, a new fifth gradeteacher, comes into the story he begins to help Trisha. Mr. Faulkner begins to teach Trisha and she
blossoms and increases in her schooling, especially in her reading. This is a great story to read to children
of all ages promoting learning. Every year I have student who struggle and they get frustrated with at least
one concept each year. This story is great for them to see that they can work through it and in the end they
will master the skills they need to know.
When critiquing the story based on the aspect of the story, there are several that apply to this story. A
story should expose personal and social values to a culture. This definitely falls in this category because it
is teaching our children that learning will occur if you try hard. These are the values that we try to teach
our own children and our classroom children. Secondly, the author should realize that our young readers
are in the process of growing towards adults. Not only did the author create this with the way she wrotethe story but with the message and main idea behind the story. She is promoting reading growth, which
our children need, especially if they are struggling. Thirdly, the author should write in a hopeful tone, this
she did. She was very hopeful in that Trish would learn to do better in school and learn to read.
In looking at the theme of contemporary realistic fiction, this story falls in line with it. The plot,
characters, and setting together are closely related to the needs of modern children. This story was truly
based on the needs of children in todays society. With all of these things I believe this is a perfect
example of contemporary realistic fiction.
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8/3/2019 Whitney Sanders Response Journal 2
4/10
Author-Cynthia Rylant
Title-The Relatives Came
Publication-1993
Genre- Contemporary Realistic Fiction
Format- Childrens Picture Book
Awards-
Caldecott Honor Award- 1986
Reflection-
This is a great story to read around the holidays when children would experience and be able to relate to
relatives coming. I read this to my class first grade class starting off with discussing what relatives are
because they were not 100 percent sure what they were. The story told about a family who had relativescoming to visit. The relatives came and stayed for an extended period of time. They hugged, slept, ate,
and talked the entire time they were there. I read this story to my students as we discussed predications
and asking questions when you read. After reading the story I was a little confused as to, what was the
point of the story?
I did not love the story, however looked at it following the critiques. One aspect the story followed was
that it should provide children with enjoyment. My students liked the story, they were eager to see what
was going to happen and what the relatives were going to do while they were there. Another criterion the
story followed was that it satisfied the basic need and provided them with insight to their own
relationships. After reading we discussed and compared the book to our own lives. My students had fun
talking about their own lives and hearing about everyone elses. I enjoyed hearing what they did withtheir relatives and seeing how everyone differed.
Looking at the characters of the story they did fall in line with realistic fiction in that the author relies on
relevant subject. These are people students may have come in contact with and they may have relatives
just like them. Looking at the setting of the story, the story took place in a house with a lot of family
member. Students experience this when they have relatives visit. They may not be able to sleep in their
own bed or may have to share, just as the characters in the story did.
When looking at the criteria in the book, this story does meet most of the criteria. With this being said the
book is a good example for realistic fiction. However, I was not a fan of the story for my classroom.
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8/3/2019 Whitney Sanders Response Journal 2
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Author- Louis Sachar
Title- Sideways Stories from Wayside School
Publication- 1989
Genre- Contemporary Realistic Fiction
Format- Chapter Book
Awards-
IRA/CBC Children's Choice wards
Reflection-
I have always loved the books by Louis Sachar and can remember reading them when I was young. This
humorous story is about a school that was built incorrectly. It was supposed to be built with 30
classrooms side by side but instead 30 classrooms were built on top of each other, making this school 30stories. The story takes place on the 30thfloor in Mrs. Jewels class. At the beginning of the year the class
has a substitute teacher who turns the bad children into apples. If you do something wrong or give an
incorrect answer the substitute teacher wiggles her ears and sticks out her tongue and they turn into an
apple. Soon all the students were apples and they planned an apple attack. She turns them back and their
teacher returns. Each chapter talks about a different student in her class. This is the part that I really liked
about the book. Each student gets their own story because everyone is different, which is a good point to
show students.
When looking are the critique criteria I believe the story provides enjoyment to students. It keeps theirattention and they want to know what will happen next. As an adult I felt the same way! The story should
allow students to draw personal conclusions. Students can do this although they may not be able to relate
to being turned into an apple, they can relate to the things the student go through in each chapter of the
story. The language and syntax should reveal the background and the nature of characters and situations,
the story does this. The language of the students is on their level and goes along with each character. The
story satisfies childrens basic needs and provides them with insights into their own problems and
relationships. This story is very relatable between students and the students in the story. They can relate to
things they are going through weather have go through it themselves or they know someone else who has
gone through it. I believe this story encompasses the characteristics of being a good realistic fiction story
and is a great book to read in every upper elementary classroom.
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8/3/2019 Whitney Sanders Response Journal 2
6/10
Author- John Mackey Shaw
Title- "The Broken-Legg'd Man"
Publication- not listed
Genre- Poetry
Format- Narrative
Awards-
None found
Reflection-
This poem was about a man that had a missing leg and used a crutch. The story teller saw the man at a
store and asked where his leg was. He asked him several questions such as, did someone cut off your leg
or did you cut your own leg off? He replied that he did not do any of those things. He began to explainthat he was hit by a car and when he woke up at the hospital it was gone.
The poem was a narrative poem in telling the experience of two people. However, it was a weird poem. I
found the poem because it was said to be for kids however, I am not sure I would use this with my young
elementary students.
When critiquing this poem I looked at several things keeping in mind the narrative aspect. To begin with I
do not think this is a lively exciting poem. I think it tried to be with the wording but the meaning behind
the poem was not lively or appeal to young students. This poem did emphasize word play in that it
repeated a phrase and tone within the phrase. With the most effective poems allowing children to put
themselves in the poem and encourage comparisons, this did not fall in that critique. The poem couldhave used more vivid wording to create the images in the childrens minds. It could also have gone into
more detail about what happened, where the characters were, and what they looked like. This was
definitely not a poem I would encourage someone to stand up and retell or repeat. I was not impressed
with the words used or the meaning and message behind it.
I would say that overall this poem does not fit in the evaluation criteria for being a well-developed poem.
It does meet a few of the criteria however not enough to be proficient.
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8/3/2019 Whitney Sanders Response Journal 2
7/10
Author- Avis Harley
Title- No title given
Publication- 2000
Format- Book
Genre- Poetry- Limerick
Awards-
None found
Reflection-
This poem was about a frog. It was a very short poem that discussed characteristics of a frog/toad. It told
how the toad lived in a marsh and would come up from his home. When he emerged it was spring and
that was when he could sing. He compared himself to a balloon that exploded when he croaked.
This was a very cute poem! I really liked it and think it would be great to use with my young students
when we talk about animals. I really liked it because it was full of information but was told in a fun way.
Looking at critiquing the poem it is a limerick in that it is a 5 line poem, the 1st,
2nd
, and 5th
lines rhythm
and have 3 beats. The first critique I looked at was asking if the poem was lively and had exciting
rhythms that appealed to young children. I believe this does, like I stated before I compared it to my
young students and asked myself if they would like it. Secondly, this poem can be retold by others and it
would entertain young students. This would be an easier poem for students to memorize or recopy to use
for creative activities. The subject of frogs is of interest and delight for children, especially boys. We
know boys are fascinated with frogs and this would capture their attention, they would learn more
information, and spark an interest to want to know more. Lastly, I looked at the evaluation of an effectivepoem allowing children to put themselves in the poem and if it encourages them to extend their finding. I
do not feel this poems allow children to visual, based on details, put themselves in the poem, however
they can also extend their findings. This can be used for starting a discussion on frogs, what spring is, as
well as, vocabulary work.
I feel this poem embodies all of the criteria elements of a good poem. It is always helpful for students and
teachers when we have one activity, reading or content that can reach several learning areas, just as this
poem did. I will definitely be using this poem with my students as we wrap up our unit on seasons to
further their knowledge.
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8/3/2019 Whitney Sanders Response Journal 2
8/10
Author- Jack Prelutsky
Title- If Not for the Cat
Publication- 2004
Genre- Book
Format-Poetry- Haiku
Awards-
None Found
Reflection-
The Haiku I chose came from a book that was made up of several different Haikus. Each one was
illustrated with the topic of the Haiku. Haikus are three short lines with the middle line being a little bit
longer. The syllables are arranged in a 5-7-7 syllable pattern. This Haiku was about a jellyfish. The basisof the poem was just to inform the reader of what a jellyfish was and basically gave describing words. I
was not impressed with this particular Haiku, however it could have been because I am not a fan of Haiku
poetry. I feel they are too short and there is not enough information for the reader.
When critiquing this poem I began with if the poem was lively and exciting, it was not. It was very dull
and boring and used words that my students would not understand or would not even understand if we
looked them up and discussed them.
Secondly, I looked at if the poem emphasized the sound of language. Again, it did not emphasis the
sound. It did emphasis vocabulary with higher level words most children do not hear. It did not emphasize
the sound of words with two of them being the same.
Thirdly, the images should be fresh and allow children to expand their imagination. This I can say was a
great part of the poem. The images of the jellyfish were great! A lot of young students have not seen a
jellyfish before. This would be a great visual image to use when discussing the poems and the theme. The
colors were vivid and very realistic.
Forth, the poem should tell a simple story. This poem does not, it listed describing words of the jellyfish.
Children can take these words and the picture and use it for story writing or retelling. However, the poem
itself does not have enough information for storytelling.
Lastly, I looked at if the poem would be good for repeated reading. This would be great because it is so
short however, it would take practice to begin with in the vocabulary it uses.
I do not feel this poem meets enough criteria to be considered an appropriate example of poetry.
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8/3/2019 Whitney Sanders Response Journal 2
9/10
Author- Avis Harley
Title- Connections
Publication- 2000
Format- Book
Genre- Poetry-Metaphor
Awards-
None found
Reflection
This poem was a metaphor poem. I have heard of these kinds of poems but never really looked at or used
them. Metaphor poems compare two things by saying one thing is like another. I always like teaching
upper elementary students about similes and metaphors because students can be so creative with theircomparisons, so I was eager to read this poem. This poem was about connecting life with a seashell and
what you hear in the shell. It began comparing it to a cell phone and asking how their family was. It then
told of how you can hear beach sounds in the shell when you listen to it, ending with being in a small
home and connecting the outside world with the shell.
To begin the critique I looked at if the poem could be repeated and retold. This could definitely be
repeated and could be used with upper elementary students for retelling possibly in small groups of
students.
Next, would this subject be delightful for children or encourage them to explore? Yes, this poem would
definitely do that. A lot of children have been to the beach and they can use this experience to exploretheir experience more with sharing with other students and reading more about characteristics of the
beach or shells.
I critiqued the poem based on if the poem told a simple story and introduced action. This poem did tell a
simple story and it was not full of action. I feel it would fall in this critique because it tells a story of how
a shell travels and what a shell can do.
This poem is a good example of a poem because it uses most of the evaluation criteria. I would enjoy
using this poem and I know children would as well.
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8/3/2019 Whitney Sanders Response Journal 2
10/10
Author- Woody Guthrie
Title- This Land is your Land
Publication- 1956
Format- Book
Genre- Poetry- Lyric
Awards-
None found
Reflection-
This poem is an example of a lyric poetry. I have never heard of this type of poetry. A lyric poem is brief
and emphasizes sound and imagery more than narration or drama. I took this poem as a journey. It was
talking about a journey someone took and comparing it to things ahead of them and behind them.
In critiquing the poem I tried to only look at it from the evaluation stand point and not the point that I did
not like the poem. It was neat to see it as a poem and not hear it in a song like I have before. I began with
asking if the pome would be good for repeated readings. It would be but I feel it is better in song form
which could also be considered as retelling.
This poem would not delight children in my opinion. This criteria listed several aspects such as: delight
them, make them laugh, encourage them to explore, and enhance their egos. This poem does not fall in
any of these categories. This does not meet these criteria.
This poem should have been written down to childrens supposed level. I feel part of the poem was but
the words used would not apply to all children. This would be better suited for middle grade students.
With this, I would say that it does meet the criteria even though it does not meet for all children.
Lastly, I looked at if the poem told a story and introduced a scene. This poem does tell a story of a
journey and what the person is seeing and experiencing. I can picture what the writer is saying and can
create an image in my head.
With all of these things and more I feel this is a good example of a poem based on the criteria. I do feel it
is much better in song form and could be use d with more children that way.