What have you learned from your audience feedback?

Trailer

• Needed voice over • Music needed to be more varied to indicate scenes

including a conflict • More variety of cuts; some shots were too long• needed to include more sounds to main soundtrack as

in parts the music sounded too empty/ slightly echoic making it appear unfinished.

• Sound effects- a particular scene in a trailer the sound effect we used to imitate the sound of water ending up sounding similar to a flying device.

Magazine

• Looked like a free insert out of a newspaper due to layout and colour scheme.

Poster

• At first the image of the dominant character in two different poses made appear as though they were twins instead if illustrating the transition of the “geek” becoming more “street”.