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GOOD:BETTER:
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BEST:
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To make the reader feel (shock
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/ empathy / pity /
anger/ etc)
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To add to the sense
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of (isolation /
confusion /
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sorrow / joy / etc) in the
text.
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To draw the
reader’s
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attention to (the
contrast
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between two things / the beauty
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of an object / the
size of
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something / etc)
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To emphasise
the
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importance of (an idea / a specific
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theme / a character trait / a
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viewpoint / etc)
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Then explain why the writer might want the
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reader to feel this way.
Then link to other
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moments that build on this
effect.
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Then explore why the writer might want to
draw the
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reader’s attention to
this.
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Then explore why the writer might want to
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emphasise this.