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    Prepared by:

    Amirrul

    Amir

    Roland

    James

    John

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    1. Design a writing project which incorporates

    the three approaches.

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    Model:

    I am Mr. Baroni. My first name is Robert. I am twenty-

    five years old. I am a students. I am in the classroom

    now. I am at my desk. Mr. peter is my teacher. He is in

    the classroom now. He is at the blackboard. He is busy

    now. The classroom is on the tenth floor. It is a small

    room. The classroom is in an old building. The building

    is near the river. It is in the busy city of Detroit.

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    Write one paragraph about yourself and your

    school. Follow the model but change all

    information that is not correct for you. For example: write down your information

    and take as many structures and words from

    the model as you can use in your own

    paragraph.

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    Different stages have their own different

    activities:

    1. Brain- storming stage- teacher elicits, students

    give ideas, teacher writes randomly on the

    board in mind-map or linear form.

    2. Planning stage- eliminate some poor ideas,

    choose the best, put in order, find example for

    each point.

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    3. Writing the first draft- learners start writing,

    may involve rearranging of points

    4. Editing- these questions may help

    Is there a thesis? Is the thesis clear?

    Is the introduction interesting for the reader?

    Are the developmental paragraphs relevant to thethesis?

    Are the ideas supported well? Are there enough

    examples?

    Are the transition chosen correctly?

    Does the conclusion have a summary?

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    5. Proof- reading- looking for (it is better to leave

    proof-reading to the last)

    Any sentence fragments and run-on sentences

    References without pronouns

    Redundancy of ideas

    Lack of parallelism

    Spelling mistakes

    Repetition of the same words

    Punctuation mistakes

    Wrong tense choice Misused modifiers

    Style inappropriate for the audience

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    6. The final product

    After the feedback on the spelling and grammar

    mistakes, writes the essay again

    This means, the same essay needs to be written

    at least three times (first draft, second draft after

    editing, final product after proof-reading) before

    a final product can be reached.

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    1. Samples of a specific genre are introduced

    2. Some distinctive characteristics of the given

    genre are pointed out so that studentsnotice specific configurations of that genre.

    3. Next, students attempt to produce the first

    draft through imitating the given genre.

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    1. Select a picture and design a series of

    writing activities using the one picture

    many techniques approach.

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    1. Description

    Prepare some key words to label the pictures. Eg: Bear,

    Tiger, Tarzan, Leopard, and Snake.

    Ask students to write down other words and phrases

    on strips and paste on the board. Eg: Next to, on the

    right, beside, behind and etc.

    Teacher takes away the picture and the strips and ask

    students to descript the picture based on their

    memory.

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    2. Description, comparison and contrast Divide the students into two groups, show the

    picture to one group only.

    Ask the members of the group to write the

    description of the picture. Ask the members of that particular group to read

    out the description and have another group todraw out the picture according to theirunderstanding.

    This activity can be repeated by using anotherpicture on the other group.

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    3. Controlled composition Show the picture to students

    Ask one student to pretend to be the Tarzan inthe picture.

    Ask the student to write a paragraph using theelement which we want to teach. Eg: I am Roland,and beside me is my best friend, black bear.

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    Construct simple and compound sentences(3-5 words) by looking at a picture

    Eg: This is a ball.

    It has many colours.

    It is round in shape andeight stripes.