The fish story
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Transcript of The fish story
Based onThe Fish Story,
a story with Indian originsfrom Presentation Zen, the book.
I want to open afish store.
Vijay, a young indian
we sell fresh fish here
we sell fresh fish here
“we” is not really needed
the Father
fresh fish sold here
fresh fish sold here
“here” is superfluos
the Brother
fresh fish sold
fresh fish sold
it’s clear thatthe fish is sold.
the Sister
fresh fish
fresh fish
the Neighbor
everyone can see thatthe fish is fresh.
fish
fish
Vijay himself
everyone can identify the fish by the smell.
and Me
I still think freshshould be stated.
fresh
Omit needless words.
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