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12 February 2021
Senior Teaching and Learning Consultant: Natalie Derry
Teaching Grammar in KS2 What are you going to do during half term?
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• To understand what the National curriculum
grammar requirements are and why teaching
grammar is important.
• To explore how grammar is assessed at the end of
KS2
• To consider the most effective ways to teach
grammar
• To explore some examples of teaching grammar in
context and using engaging grammar games
Spelling: Questions?
What are the National curriculum grammar requirements and why is
teaching grammar important?
In 2014, the revised National Curriculum raised the profile of grammar teaching in
primary schools.
The 2014 English National Curriculum states: ‘Explicit knowledge of grammar is very
important, as it gives us more conscious control and choice in our language.’
So, Why do you think it is important to explicitly teach grammar in primary school?
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Grammar is the business of taking a
language to pieces to see how it works.
Professor David Crystal
The grammar of our first language is learnt naturally and implicitly through
interactions with other speakers and from reading. Explicit knowledge of
grammar is, however, very important, as it gives us more conscious control
and choice in our language.
National Curriculum 2014
It is important that young readers and writers know
about how language is organised to make
meaning.
David Reedy and Eve Bearne
Language study is a vitally important aspect of learning in
English, and grammar is an important strand of language
study, for its own intrinsic interest and for its contribution to
communication and the making of meaning.
UKLA
• What are your recollections of
being taught grammar at primary
school?
• How confident are you of the
grammar expectations by the end
of KS2 and beyond?
Word
Level
Sentence
Level
Text
Level
Punctuation
Terminology
for Pupils
Statutory Requirements outline for Year 1 to Year 6
Choosing the right word for the jobWord level grammar covers verbs and tenses, nouns, adverbs etc. This focuses on the
parts of speech that make a sentence.
Example: adjective, noun, adverb
Constructing and manipulating sentences to create different effects
Sentence level grammar covers explores the different sentence types and what
constitutes a sentence.
Example: phrases, clauses, reported speech
Tying texts together so that writing is linked and flows
Text level relates to the structuring of a text as a whole.
Example: Paragraphs, tense, headings
Punctuation creates sense, clarity and stress in sentences. The variety of
punctuation marks are taught ranging from full stops to dashes.
Example: Question Mark, semi-colon, brackets
Pupils learn to recognise and use the terminology through discussion and
practice. All terms in bold should be understood with the meanings set out in
the Glossary
What are the main
grammar learning points
in KS2?
Handout
The old man jumped quickly over the rusty fence.
He jumped over it.
Where are the nouns?
Where are the adjectives?
Where is the verb?
Where is the adverb?
Where are the pronouns?
Where is the preposition?
And ‘the’ is a ….. ?
Word
Level
The old man jumped quickly over the rusty fence.
He jumped over it.
Nouns-Name the things we talk about
Adjectives-Describe the nouns
Verb-Say what the action is
Adverb- Describe the verb
Pronouns-Stand in the place of a noun
Preposition-Tell you the position of the action
And ‘the’ is a determiner which pin down the
noun precisely.
Word
Level
A. Modal Verbs B. Subjunctive C. Passive VoiceD. Expanded
Noun Phrase
E. Fronted
Adverbial
Confident to
explain to a
peerNot heard of it
I think I
understand it
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Modal Verb Subjunctive Passive Voice Expanded
Noun Phrase
Fronted Adverbial
Definition A modal verb is a special
type of verb which
changes or affects other
verbs in a sentence.
Modal verbs are used to
show the level of
possibility, indicate ability,
show obligation or give
permission.
The subjunctive is
a verb form used
to express things
that could or
should happen,
for example: If
I were to go... / I
demand that
he answer!
A sentence is written
in passive voice when
the subject of the
sentence has
something done to it
by someone or
something. For
example: "The mouse
was being chased by
the cat."
An expanded
noun phrase is a
descriptive clause
normally made up
of a noun as well
as one or more
adjectives.
Fronted adverbials are
words or phrases at the
beginning of a sentence,
used like adverbs to
describe the action that
follows.
Teaching
Strategy
Conscience Alley
Practice making
speeches
Read examples and
agree on level of
possibility
Role play the
Queens English
Most likely to
read examples in
classic/historical
literature
Hot-seating/interview
Not revealing the
identify
Create suspense
Likely to read
examples in non-
fiction
Identify examples
from texts and
focus on the
appropriateness of
the adjectives:
What do they
add?
Challenge to spot them
and add to writing
Check misconceptions
(i.e. always ends in ly)
Show examples without
and how it can not be
coherent
Most
common
Text Type
Explanation Text
Persuasive Text
Instructions
Formal
letters
Explanation Text
Newspaper
Non-
Chronological
Report
Narrative
Non-
chronological
report
Biography
Diary
Recount
Narrative
Handout
How do we assess grammar in primary education?
• In year 6, pupils are tested on their knowledge about grammar,
punctuation and spelling.
• The tests are structured so that they can be easily marked online
so the questions require simply identifying particular grammatical
features.
• In order to perform well in the test, children need to be familiar with
the terminology and able to apply their understanding of
grammatical terms in an unfamiliar and artificial context.
• Since these were introduced, they have been optional at KS1.
It is worth remembering, even if they are successful at this paper,
it tells us nothing about their writing ability nor their ability to
reflect on how authors make grammatical choices for effects.
Remember why grammar is an important skill in life not just for a
test.
• We have moved away from the culture of ‘tick lists’ where children attempted to
‘shoe-horn’ all types of grammar into a piece of writing, where writing ‘ticked all
the boxes’ but did not necessarily flow.
• What we are seeing more and more is pupils being supported to make choices
and select appropriate grammar for specific writing.
• This way writing feels less forced and is more coherent.
The pupil can:
• write effectively for a range of purposes and audiences, selecting language that
shows good awareness of the reader (e.g. the use of the first person in a diary;
direct address in instructions and persuasive writing)
• in narratives, describe settings, characters and atmosphere
• integrate dialogue in narratives to convey character and advance the action
• select vocabulary and grammatical structures that reflect what the writing
requires, doing this mostly appropriately (e.g. using contracted forms in
dialogues in narrative; using passive verbs to affect how information is
presented; using modal verbs to suggest degrees of possibility)
• use a range of devices to build cohesion (e.g. conjunctions, adverbials of time
and place, pronouns, synonyms) within and across paragraphs
• use verb tenses consistently and correctly throughout their writing
• use the range of punctuation taught at key stage 2 mostly correctly^ (e.g.
inverted commas and other punctuation to indicate direct speech)
• spell correctly most words from the year 5 / year 6 spelling list,* and use a
dictionary to check the spelling of uncommon or more ambitious vocabulary
• maintain legibility in joined handwriting when writing at speed.
KS2: Working at Expected Standard
What is the most effective way to teach grammar?
The key to effective use of grammar is to
open children’s eyes to the infinite
repertoire of choices which are available
to them as writers. Used in this way,
grammar helps children understand how
language works and how to express
themselves with greater craft and
creativity
• Research from Safford, Messer, McLachlan and Walker
(2015) looked at the impact that the statutory test has had on
teachers and the teaching of grammar.
• It is no surprise that it concludes that learning has
become ‘routine, explicit and formalised’ and significant time
is spent in preparation for the test.
• Research by Hillocks (1986) and Andrews et al. (2006),
concluded that no evidence exists that the formulaic teaching of
grammar by labelling and identifying items of language use has
any beneficial effect on language production.
• However, there is powerful research evidence, including a large-
scale study from Exeter University (Myhill et al., 2013) that
demonstrates the benefits of relevant grammar when taught
explicitly and in context.
• Teachers who contextualised the study of grammar within the
reading of literature and discussed real life texts reported a
positive impact on pupils’ writing and a deeper knowledge and
understanding of language.
When planning a unit of work for a specific text-
type we as teachers must very clear on the
R.A.F.T of writing, who the writing is for, why we
are writing, what tone it should be written in and
what grammatical features should be
and should not be included. With this in mind,
we can then select the appropriate grammar to
teach.
Reason- Why are they writing? What is the purpose?
Audience- Who are they writing to/for?
Features- What grammatical features should we/should we not
see within this text-type?
Tone-What language and tone should be used?
Plan ahead for the opportunities to teach grammar in context
Text Type Language/grammatical feature
1. Newspaper Report a. Headings and Sub-headings
2. Persuasive Leaflet b. Expanded Noun Phrases
3. Character Description c. Passive Voice
4. Non-Chronological Report d. Subjunctive
5. Formal Letter e. Modal Verbs
Text Type Language/grammatical
feature
Why?
Newspaper Report Passive Voice You can make the relevant information the focus of information, by
placing it at the beginning of the sentence and keep it impersonal
Persuasive Leaflet Modal Verbs Help to express an opinion and indicate priorities
Character
Description
Expanded Noun Phrases Creates a clearer picture in the mind of the reader.
Non-Chronological
Report
Headings and Sub-headings Guide the reader to locate the main points and
information of interest
Formal Letter Subjunctive The use of subjunctive is considered formal and
polite.
Grammar should be taught within English lessons and support the children’s
learning of a specific text-type. The evidence is clear – the isolated teaching of
grammar has very little, if any, impact on children’s writing content and ability.
Grammar and Genre handout
• Hearing and speaking
examples
• Seeing examples in
authentic texts
• Working on texts and
hearing the terminology
used in context
• Experimenting with
techniques
• Using the knowledge to
make choices when
writing
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit Teaching
Discussion and
experimentation
Making controlled
choices
REDM Sequence- The process of teaching grammar in context: Myhill, Reedy
and Bearne
leads to
more
successful
learning
rather than
simply
rehearsing
definitions
• Decide which features you want to focus on and devise games that
help the pupils see how it functions within meaningful text.
• Build the grammar features you are focusing on into the model text to
increase understanding of, and confidence in using these features
Bringing out the Grammar in a text
The goal is to make direct and explicit links between being
a reader and a writer. When we read texts we read like a
reader but we also explore the author’s craft. When we
write, we write like a writer, but also need to imagine the
reader of our writing.’
Myhill, D. (2012) Wordplay: Rethinking Grammar and
Writing
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r_kgmkU8q0M What could you draw attention
to in this book?
Conjunctions, Proper nouns, expanded noun phrases, range of sentence types, proper nouns, adjectives,
nouns, verbs, range of punctuation, relative clause, direct speech, Adverbs and adverbials of time to
structure, Structuring topic sentences to open paragraphs or sections, Converting verbs using prefixes and
suffixes
What type of word is
underlined?
What is the role within
the sentence?
What do you notice
about the authors
choice?
BANG!
THREE JUGGLERSTumbled onto the stage to the pounding beat
Of a drum. Skittles flew, fast and furious,
BACK AND FORTH, UP AND OVER.
Tambourines rattled, loud and louder;
Skittles spun, high and higher; the jugglers
Twisted, fast and faster. THEN BANG
THE SKITTLES WENT UP…
But they didn’t come down!
EVERYBODY CHEERED AND CLAPPED.
The jugglers bowed and bounced away.
ONCE MORE THERE WAS ONLY DARKNESS.
Reading & Investigation
Y5: Converting verbs using
prefixes and suffixes
Tumbled
Rattled
Twisted
What is the root word?
Why is there a suffix?
Reading & Investigation
Y5: Converting verbs using
prefixes and suffixes
BANG!
THREE JUGGLERSTumbled onto the stage to the pounding beat
Of a drum. Skittles flew, fast and furious,
BACK AND FORTH, UP AND OVER.
Tambourines rattled, loud and louder;
Skittles spun, high and higher; the jugglers
Twisted, fast and faster. THEN BANG
THE SKITTLES WENT UP…
But they didn’t come down!
EVERYBODY CHEERED AND CLAPPED.
The jugglers bowed and bounced away.
ONCE MORE THERE WAS ONLY DARKNESS.
Spun
Flew
What do you notice
about these?
A suffix is a group of letters
which are added to the end
of a word to make a new
word.
Read up to page 12, where
we see Leon’s face and
complete this table for
words with the suffix –ed.
Explicit Teaching
Converting verbs using
prefixes and suffixes-ed word
from the
text
Root Word Rule
Waited Wait Just add ed
Settled Settle Ends in e so just
add d
Clapped Clap Double the last
letter and add ed
Painted Paint Just add ed
Disappoint
ed
Disappoint Just add ed
Tumbled Tumble Ends in e so just
add d
turned turn Just add ed
A suffix is a group of letters which are added to the end of a word to make a new word. In the last example, the ed suffixes changesthe verb from present to past tense.
We can also add suffixes to change a word, like a noun or an adjective, to a different type of word, such as a verb.
Explicit Teaching
Converting verbs using
prefixes and suffixes
Suffix Meaning Examples
-en To
Soften,
darken, widen,
weaken,
strengthen
-ise/-ize To
Sympathise,
empathise,
synthesize
-ate To
Activate,
collaborate,
create
-ify, -fy To
Justify,
magnify,
amplify, satisfy
Read the examples of words that are formed with the –en, -ise, -ate and –ify/-fysuffix. What do you think the meaning is?
A suffix is a group of letters which are added to the end of a word to make a new word. In the last example, the ed suffixes changesthe verb from present to past tense.
We can also add suffixes to change a word, like a noun or an adjective, to a different type of word, such as a verb.
Explicit Teaching
Converting verbs using
prefixes and suffixesSuffix Meaning Examples
-en To become
Soften,
darken, widen,
weaken,
strengthen
-ise/-izeTo make or
become
Sympathise,
empathise,
synthesize
-ate To become
Activate,
collaborate,
create
-ify, -fyTo make or
become
Justify,
magnify,
amplify, satisfy
A prefix is a group of letters
which are added to the
beginning of a word. We
use prefixes to change the
meaning of words.
The most common verb
prefixes and their meaning
can be seen here. Did you
spot any in Leon?
Explicit Teaching
Converting verbs using
prefixes and suffixes
Prefix Meaning Examples
re- again or backrestructure, revisit, reappear, rebuild,
refinance
dis-reverses the meaning
of the verb
disappear, disallow, disarm,
disconnect, discontinue
over- too much overbook, oversleep, overwork
un-reverses the meaning
of the verbunbend, uncouple, unfasten
mis- badly or wrongly mislead, misinform, misidentify
out-more or better than
othersoutperform, outbid
co- together co-exist, co-operate, co-own
de- do the opposite of devalue, deselect
fore- earlier, before foreclose, foresee
inter- between interact, intermix, interface
pre- before pre-expose, prejudge, pretest
sub- under/below subcontract, subdivide
trans- across, over transform, transcribe, transplant
under- not enoughunderfund, undersell, undervalue,
underdevelop
Disappear
unexpected
So to recap:
Verbs are words that describe what people do, how
they feel and how things are in general.
We can make new verbs by adding prefixes and
suffixes to words we already know. Read these root
words and explore how the meaning of a word
changes when you add a suffix and/or prefix.
Discussion and
experimentation
Converting verbs using
prefixes and suffixes
Which is the noun?
Which is the Verb?
Which is the adjective?
Write them in sentences
Root Word +ful +ify
Beauty Beautiful Beautify
The circus tent really was a thing of beauty.
The cape that Abdul Kazam wore was beautiful.
Leon soon realised that magic was all that was needed to
beautify the world.
Teacher models choosing and writing root
words into sentences and emphasising the
prefix/suffix and how it alters the meaning.
The pupils then apply in their own writing.
Discussion and
experimentation Converting
verbs using prefixes and
suffixes
Underline the prefix or suffix in these words and write them in
sentences about Leon.
Misguided, Misunderstood, Outperform,
Visualise
Awaken, Fasten, Justify, Simplify, specialise
Leon was keen to __friend the boy before he left.
For some reason, Leon felt ___trust towards Abdul.
Leon couldn’t believe his eyes, the whole world had been ____formed.
Leon really didn’t want to short___ his time here.
Once Leon stepped into the place between he was ____joyed.
When writing
independently, the
children correctly apply
grammar that has been
taught. Evidence of verb
formation using prefix
and suffix when
appropriate and it has
an intended impact on
the reader.
Making controlled
choices
Making considered choices ensures that our writing reflects our intentions. This can only
be done properly if we fully understand the purpose of the structures and concepts..
Making controlled
choices
what effect
does this
phrase
have…?’
‘why has the
author chosen
to …?’
Leon darted into the box searching for
a place to hide.
Leon meandered into the box looking
for a place to settle
Which makes you
feel the most
sympathetic or
which builds
tension more?
Similar structures, but different language
and different effects on the reader. What is
the intention on the reader?
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Consolidating understanding of sentences and words within sentences: Playing with
word types for an intended reason such as nouns.
Most nouns can be either singular (only one) or plural (lots of them)
Tent Tents
You can have an adjective before them: The spooky tent.
A collective noun is a word that refers to a group: herd of elephants
Proper nouns begin with capital letters and name people, places, organisations and
unique things: Leon, Abdul Kazam
All other nouns are common nouns.
Concrete nouns are nouns that name people, place and things that can be
experienced through the five senses: Boy, circus, wand
Abstract Nouns name feelings, ideas and concepts Wonder, happiness.
Play I spy and jot down everything they can see. This is a list of nouns.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
What nouns can you see in this image?
Choose 3 concrete nouns (e.g. wand, curtain, doorway).
Now choose 3 abstract nouns that explain feelings of characters in the book (e.g. Excitement, kindness, hopefulness).
Now collate your nouns to form an interesting noun phrase
A doorway of disappointment.
A wand of kindness.
A banjo of excitement.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
noun
tent
MemoriesSetting up a tent in the living room
TypesCircus, camping,
wigwam, Den
RhymesWent, sent, bent,
lent, dent
Words that start with the same sound
Table, T-shirt, Ticket
WorldDumbo
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Angry
Brave
Cool
Deadly
Emerald
Frosty
Gorgeous
Helpless
Impressive
Cup
Table
Chair
Grass
Tree
Bus
Car
Bike
Computer
parrot
Pencil
Ruler
Desk
Bell
Tower
Forest
Lake
Banana
Carrot
Owl
NOUNS:ADJECTIVES: Jealous
Keen
Lazy
Moody
Naughty
Old
Pale
Quick
Red
Bad
Tall
Pairs-A game-choose six adjectives and six nouns. Write them on your
whiteboard, number them 1-6. Roll a dice and first choose an adj, then
repeat and choose a noun. Use your noun and adjective to make a
sentence. Your sentence has to make sense but can be silly.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
• Read the text aloud to the children• Ensure the children know the meaning of the vocabulary• Pull out the text and highlight the learning opportunities.• What do you notice about the words in red?
The boy went into the tent.
The curtains slowly parted.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
What happens if we change the nouns that we use?
Build a picture: change the noun(s) to make the writing more precise:
Example:
The man came into the school with a dog.
The policeman came into Laycock Primary School with a German Shepherd.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
How does this change the impact on the reader
The boy went into the tent.
The went into the .
The went into the .
went into the .
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
toddler Wigwam
Big Top
Marquee
mother
Leon
The curtains slowly parted.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Now what happens if we ensure the use of the verb is more precise?
The boy went into the tent.
The boy crept into the tent.
The boy darted into the tent.
The boy wandered into the tent.
• What does the phrase ‘at a whispered word’ suggest about Abdul Kazam, his character and the power he has?
• How has movement been created in this part of the story?
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Without adding anything additional, Make the reader:
• suspect that the main character is about to do something mischievous.
• feel a sense of foreboding for the main character.
• Feel sympathy towards the main character.
The boy went into the tent.
The thief crept into the tent.
The toddler wandered into the tent.
The gun shot victim staggered into the tent.
Adverbials tell us about time, place, manner and number. They answer these questions.
Where? When? How? Why? How often? How long? How much?
They can also tell us about the degree of intensity: very slowly, really fast
What adverbs can you spot in Leon? Explore how they are used and how they aid the reader.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Around him the crowd waited impatiently for SOMETHING TO HAPPEN.
Adverbs
Gently, impatiently, silently, loudly, bravely, timidly, joyfully.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
•How many words are in this sentence?
•What type of word have I underlined?
•What is it doing in this sentence?
The boy began to float away Suddenly.
The boy began to Suddenly float away.
Suddenly, the boy began to float away.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
The barrel organ fell silent. No-one stirred. The tiny creaks of the mechanical toys cast their own spell. The solemn monkey took a stiff bow and the curtains closed. ‘Now,’ said Leon in the dark. Now it’s going to happen. An owl hooted. The curtains opened.
Leon and the Place between is rich in adverbial phrases. What would help this passage? Rewrite with adverbials.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
At last the barrel organ fell silent. No-one stirred. For a moment the tiny creaks of the mechanical toys cast their own spell. The solemn monkey took a stiff bow and the curtains closed to loud applause. Now said Leon edging forward in the dark. Now it’s going to happen. Outside in the night an owl hooted. With a swish the curtains opened.
Leon and the Place between is rich in adverbial phrases. What would help this passage? Rewrite with adverbials.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
LEON fell down, down, down until he tumbled onto a carpet.
“HELLO,” said a boy who was wearing blue pantalon trousers.
A relative clause can be used to give additional information about a noun.They are introduced by a relative pronoun like 'that', 'which', 'who', 'whose', 'where' and 'when'.
Here is an example of additional information about the noun, boy.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Leon climbed up the ladder.
Using a relative clause, we can tell the reader more about how Leon is feeling as he climbs.• Feeling anxious• Excited• Brave
Leon, who was trembling slightly, climbed up the ladder.
Leon
Showed no fear
Was Trembling
slightly
Eyes were wide open
climbed up the ladder.
Who Whose that which wherewhen
Eyes stared at the floor
.
In certain types of report writing where the agent is irrelevant: The substance was extracted from the pipes.
In narrative to hide the source of the action: The gun had been removed from the cabinet
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Passive Voice
When might we need to use passive voice?
Why might we need to use passive voice?
Newspaper Report, Narrative, Report Writing i.e. Science explanation.
Did you go into a magical place?
What did you see there?
A place was certainly
discovered.
A variety of things were witnessed.
Either the subject of a sentence is unknown or the direct object of the action is being emphasised. It can also
add an impersonal or factual feeling to texts.
How does this change the impact or effect on the reader?
At last a soft, blue glow lit the stage and the curtains twitched.
Leon could smell the magic.
The solemn monkey took a stiff bow.
Why is there very little passive voice in
this book? .
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Change these sentences into the passive voice.
Modal verbs are a special type of verb which enable us to express possible actions that may be within or beyond our control or which we may be required to do.
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
1. I can understand this2. I might have understood this if 3. I could understand this4. I will understand this5. I must understand this
What difference do these verbs make to the meaning of the
sentence?
They indicate how likely, necessary or
definite the action is as well as whether it can be done at all.
They should have... Then they could have... They certainly would have... And they might have even...
Shoulda…Woulda…Coulda
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
What does Cohesion mean?
What devices achieve this in writing?
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Sentences, consistent use of tense, pronoun choice, paragraphs, headings/sub-headings, Conjunctions, Adverbials, Synonyms/antonyms, punctuation.
Cohesion: effectively ‘gluing together’ a piece of writing by
Using conjunctions (often adverbials that signpost the movement of time), Ensuring consistency of tense throughout a piece of writing Using referential pronouns to avoid repetition.
Coherence: how the whole text hangs together
Includes order, sequence and structural features such as openings and closings.
The importance of cohesion and coherence
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
• use a range of devices to build cohesion (e.g. conjunctions, adverbials of time and place, pronouns, synonyms) within and across paragraphs
Conjunctions
Conjunctions link things or actions within sentences.
They are like glue- they help joins words, phrases and clauses.
By joining the parts of sentences together they can turn simple sentences into compound or complex sentences.
Conjunctions
Cohesive devices – across sentences and paragraphs
Subordinating conjunctions introduce a subordinate clause
Coordinating conjunctions – link words/phrases together as an
equal pair
Reading &
Investigation
Explicit
Teaching
Discussion and
experimentationMaking controlled
choices
Co- ordinating conjunctions
Co-ordinating conjunctions join clauses of equal weight.
So, each clause could be a stand alone sentence.
We tend to use and but or so
It will rain in the morning it will rain in the afternoon
and
When we use these conjunctions and so but or to join two main clauses, we make a compound sentence.It was late and I ran homeI felt ill so I went to bedI like playing computer games or I like going to the park.
A compound sentence has more than one action going on. It contains two simple sentences, joined by a co-ordinating conjunction, such as: and, but, or, nor, yet, so, for, neither
The door shut and
Leon could smell the magic.
Painted animals paraded into the ark and a flying machine lurched through the air
Subordinating conjunctions
Subordinate conjunctions introduce a subordinate clause.
We tend to use when, if, although, because, after, until etc.
The use of a comma is optional if the main clause begins the sentence.
We will light the fire it gets darkwhen
Subordinating conjunctions
If the subordinate clause begins the sentence, the end of the clause is signalled by a comma.
We will light the fire
it gets dark,When
A complex sentence has a main clause and a subordinate clause.
As pupils begin to use complex sentences it helps them to express ideas more economically and to show the inter relationship between ideas. Their writing moves on from the relentless and…and…and….and then….
A complex sentence is a simple sentence plus a subordinate clause which adds extra information.
The subordinate clause cannot stand on its own as a sentence, as it doesn’t make sense without the main clause.
When the door shut, Leon could smell the magic.
Can add complexity and sophistication to ideas in your writing; allows you to interweave ideas or express the relationship between ideas
Join it
after but as As soon as
Because while before although
whenever when so immediately
• The teacher smiled…
• The wolf looked up.
• He ran after the girl
The skittles went up ____ they didn’t come down.
The handle began to turn ___ there was no hand upon it.
He threw his arms into the air ____ the magic began.
He stepped up to the stage ____ climbed into the box.
And but
The sentence
Children are taught that a sentence is ‘a group of words that go together to make sense’. Within that sentence, there are smaller
chunks of sense.
Sentence
Sentences are made up of clauses
Phrases are made up of words
Phrases dogbigA
Clauses are made up of phrases
Clauses made the thief Jump.
dog barkedbig loudly and made the thief Jump.A
Words
dog barkedbig made thief
Is a group of words that creates a unit of meaning Is separated from other sentences by punctuation Starts with a capital letter and ends with a full stop, question or exclamation
mark or ellipsis Consists on one of more clauses, one of which will be the main clause Is built around a verb Can be a single word but is usually several words or more that make sense
together.
What are the different types of sentences taught at KS1?
A sentence…
KS1ExclamationCommandStatementQuestion
CompoundComplex
Command: Hold on tightly to the train.Question: Where are you going to end up?Statement: The boy was holding onto the train.Exclamation: How completely terrified the boy must have been!What a disastrous day it had turned out to be!
Use images and short burst writing to play around with sentence types.
A sentence…Match these examples of sentences with the description
Description Example
A. Add a prepositional clause to explain where the action is happening.
1. Little Max ran upstairs to his bedroom because mum told him off.
B. Use an adverb to describe how the action was per-formed.
2. As soon as he got the chance, Little Max stormed angrily upstairs, slammed the door and flew onto his bed, because mum told him off.
C. Use a fronted adverbial to de-scribe where, when or how the action was performed.
3. Little Max ran upstairs to his bedroom.
D. Add in an independent clause. 4. Little Max ran angrily upstairs to his bedroom be-cause mum told him off.
E. Rule of three for action. 5. As soon as he got the chance, Little Max stormed angrily upstairs to his bedroom because mum told him off.
F. Extend sentence using subordination (e.g. when, if, that or because).
6. As soon as he got the chance, Little Max stormed angrily upstairs, slammed the door and flew onto his bed; mum told him off for causing mischief around the house.
A sentence…Match these examples of sentences with the description
Description Example
Add a prepositional clause to explain where the action is happening.
Little Max ran upstairs to his bedroom.
Extend sentence using subordination (e.g. when, if, that or because).
Little Max ran upstairs to his bedroom because mum told him off.
Use an adverb to describe how the action was per-formed.
Little Max ran angrily upstairs to his bedroom be-cause mum told him off.
Use a fronted adverbial to de-scribe where, when or how the action was performed.
As soon as he got the chance, Little Max stormed angrily upstairs to his bedroom because mum told him off.
Rule of three for action. As soon as he got the chance, Little Max stormed angrily upstairs, slammed the door and flew onto his bed, because mum told him off.
Add in an independent clause. As soon as he got the chance, Little Max stormed angrily upstairs, slammed the door and flew onto his bed; mum told him off for causing mischief around the house.
Year 1
to 6
Sentence Doctor Copy a page of text from a book. Leave
occasional verbs, pronouns or prepositions out, but don’t leave
a space. Read through with the children sentence by sentence,
stopping where they think there’s a word missed out. The
children could write possible words on their dry-wipe boards
and then you could discuss the best of the alternatives.
Leon could the magic.
fell down, down until he tumbled onto a carpet.
Leon could smell the.
Leon fell down, down until tumbled onto a carpet.
Leon fell down, down until he tumbled onto a.
Sentence √ Non-Sentence
Sentence, non-sentence post box activity: Provide sentences
and non-sentences on strips. A child takes a strip and holds it up
and the children read it and decide whether it goes in the
sentences or non-sentences post box.
Leon could the magic.Leon fell down, down until he tumbled onto a carpet.
At last the barrel organ fell silent.
Leon fell down, down until tumbled a carpet.
At last barrel organ fell silent.
Leon could smell the magic.
Jumbled sentences: use magnetic words or words on card to
create sentences:
Leon fell down, down until he tumbled onto a carpet.
Jumble up the words and challenge pupils to order the words
back into the original sentence:
Leon down onto fell a until
he tumbled down carpet.
Check it makes sense.
Discuss whether we can re order the words so it still makes
sense:
Onto a carpet, Leon fell down, down he tumbled.
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Punctuation is all about awareness of these grammatical chunks. To
split up texts into sentences, indicating clearly where each major
chunk of meaning begins and ends, we use capital letters and full
stops. Within the sentence, we use a variety of punctuation marks
to show breaks between phrases, clauses and, sometimes, words.
Slow children crossing.
Slow, children crossing.
Leon walked on his head a little higher than usual.
Using commas, explore different meanings for this sentence
Abdul Kazam stared down his nose a little longer than
before.
Abdul Kazam, stared down his nose, a little longer than
before.
Abdul Kazam stared down his nose, a little longer than
before.
Abdul Kazam stared, down his nose a little longer than
before.
Difference between hyphen and a dash
A hyphen and a dash can be used in the same way.Agree or disagree?
Difference between hyphen and a dash
A red eyed crocodile
snapped at a running
boy’s head.
A red-eyed crocodile
snapped at a running
boy’s head.
Hyphens (clarify meaning in words)
Colons and semi colons
What do you notice about this list?
Why are semi colons used?
Is the comma used in the same way in this example?
The man got into the car.
Consolidate and revise grammar through short burst writing
opportunities
The boy went into the tent
When did it take place? – e.g. At midnight?
How did he ‘sneak’? – e.g. impatiently?
Where was he? – e.g. Far away?
1.Change the noun
2.Change the verb
3.Add an expanded noun phrase
4.Add a prepositional phrase
5.Add a fronted adverbial
6.Now change the sentence order to add impact
Consider using the following punctuation . ? ! ,
The slim, thin, slender boy went into the tent.
The youthful boy was young.
The magical magician was magic.
We can always improve our sentences when
we add more information.
Agree or Disagree?
• Children can have the misconception that certain grammatical features have
intrinsic merit. For example: “adding adjectives in makes it more descriptive”,
“avoid simple sentences because they look basic”, or “use complex sentences
because they make the writing look fancier”.
• Sometimes, a simple, but powerful sentence has much more impact than a
longer, more complex sentence.
• Improving writing isn’t about adding lots of adjectives, verbs or adverbs but
about achieving the effect that the writer wants.
Collaborative writing
Create a rhetorical question which includes a modal verb.
Create a command using powerful language.
Describe how the magician moves using a powerful verb.
Describe the magician in a sentence that begins with two
adjectives.
Starting a sentence with an adverb, describe how the magician
looks out at the crowd gathering.
Add a subordinate clause to this sentence to make it more
descriptive.
Excitedly, the magician gazes out with wide eyes.
His stage, which is a magical space, can feel like it is
out of this world.
Hopeful and proud, he is keen to spread his joy.
In what way would you approach this most mysterious
man?
The man of power strides around his stage of wonder.
Believe in magic.
Further Reading:
National Curriculum Glossary: https://assets.publishing.service.gov.uk/government/uploads/system/uploads/attachment_data/file/244216/English_Glossary.pdf
National Curriculum Grammar appendix: https://assets.publishing.service.gov.uk/government/uploads/system/uploads/attachment_data/file/335190/English_Appendix_2_-_Vocabulary_grammar_and_punctuation.pdf
University of Exeter writing resources for teachers: http://socialsciences.exeter.ac.uk/education/research/centres/writing/grammar-teacher-resources/grammaraschoice/grammarsubjectknowledge/