Sensory Detail: The Cave
Transcript of Sensory Detail: The Cave
What do I see? • The cave
was pitch black. As dark as the night sky without any stars.
• Crystal clear water.
• Sticky, silky cobwebs.
• Dark green squishy, slimy mould.
• Dark brown narrow cave walls.
• Small glimpse of light.
• A long, orange, venomous snake.
What do I hear?• The soft
squeak of a mouse.
• Slow, repetitive, water droplets. It sounds like a wet rainy day.
• Endless echo of my voice calling hello.
• The sound of crumbling rocks breaking off the cave walls.• Crunching
leaves under my feet.
• The faint slithering of a snake
What do I Smell?
• I can smell the terrible stench of the mould.
• I smelled the salty water in the damp cave.
• The surroundings smelled damp and old with age.
• The mould on the cave walls smelled like a swamp
What do I Feel?• I feel eight
hairy legs crawling on my neck.
• I can feel the smooth scales of a snake wrapping around my ankles.
• Ice-cold water.
• Goosebumps all over my body from the crisp cold breeze.
• I feel the uneven, rough, bumpy, sharp, spiky, jagged edges of the cave walls