School Picnic Post Writing Task
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School picnic post writing task
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Therewasnt (pl.) peoplewent to thesea
swam. (st.)
Therewerent peopleswimming in thesea.
All the games is (pl. & T.) class union to think
(vc).
All the gameswere thought/designed by the
class union.
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We playedthe class union designed class
activities (vc).
We played theactivities designed by the
class union.
They wereso enjoying (st.) in these activities.
They enjoyed themselves in these activities.
Thereweremany fun things happened at
that time.
Many fun things happened at that time.
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I played funny, exciting andhappy on that day.
(Add a noun)
30. I played funny and exciting games on that
day.
Everyone was enjoying. (add a pronoun)
6. Everyonewasenjoying himself.
The sun above the beach, made thesands
(un) looked like glowing. (st.)
7. Thesun made thesand glow.
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I went to sleep on the beachand below
(prep.)-under/in the sun.
After played (inf)>playing games, my
friends and I went to Pizza Hut.
When other people wanted to throw to
(prep.) at me, I couldnt run to other place
places (pl.) fast quickly(adv) so I was lost.
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11. I played and eating (T.) snacks withher, is (T)tasty.
I played andhad snacks withher, it wastasty.
16. It was tired to play in the morning so Islept in (P.) the white sand.
It was tiring to play in the morning so I slepton the white sand.
17. Luckily I found it in thefinal (WW) but it is(T.)already time out(WW).
.in theend/ finally/ at last but it was timeto leave now.
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14. Only mademe feel pity, that was (St) I lost
my sandals, so I needed to buy a new one
(WW).
The only thing that I feel pity about was . A
new pair.
15. We slept on the coach because weplayed
very tired (St).
Wewere tired after playing.
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21. Time passed quickly because wehad free on
the
coach
. (Change the verb) 21. Wewere free
25. We arrivedto (P.) The (A.) Repulse Bay.
25. Arrived at Repulse Bay
This picnic was happily (Adj) and interesting.
29. This picnic was interesting.
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18. The games were all interesting andenjoyed
it. (Add a pro.)
Weenjoyed it
19. Yearly school picnic on 19th November. (Add
a pronoun and a verb)
Our yearly school picnic was on 19th Nov.
20. I havelong been looking forward to school
picnic. (St.)
I have been looking forward to school picnicfora long time.
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22. Some classmates listened to music, talked
and took photos. (St.)
23. I hoped I could went there next time. (T.)
I hopeI can go
24. At last one hour (St.) , I play (T.) football
with my best friend.
During the last hour, I played football with
my best friend.
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26. I had fallen sleep (WW) for a few times
on the bus.
Fallen asleep
27. On 19th November is (T) our school picnic.
(St.) 19th Nov was
28. The school picnic was amazed andmade
me unforgettable. (Adj)
Wasamazing and unforgettable
