Rosalie Lin 2010,3,24

TCSL Cheer Squad: Alice's Adventures in Wonderland

You are the best!

The students did not hand in their assignment (first press clip and first journal) as follows:Alisa, Nancy, Joy, Tom, Elly, Annie, Alice, Sandy, Younker, Nicole, Elaine, Lizzie, Sharon and Vera.Ann and Sandy, I only have your journals.

Group 11.Moses2.Olivia3.Tom4.Ann5.Erin6.Molly7.Lizzie8. Eve

Group 21.Amy2.Irene Chao3.Elly4.Sandy Wu5.Linda Huang6.Abo7.Sharon

Group 31.Ara2.Linda Lin3.Annie4.Younker5.Nicole6.Jamie7.Vera

Group 41.Linsey2.Alisa3.Nicky4.Ivy5.Ruby6.May7.Patty

Group 51.Irene Kim2.Nancy3.Yuki4.Lara5.Jessica6.Jamie7.Eugene

Group 61.Dorothy2.Joy3.Alice4.Sandy hsiung5.Anna6.Elaine7.Kay8.Ivy

Homework: p.63 and 64Preview: p.65~69

Aargh! used to express fear, anger, or some other strong emotion.

$19.95nineteen dollars and ninety five centsCassida 3300 Counterfeit Bill Detector for MoneyQ: What happens when the money is fake?

Counterfeit money detection using the JM-100 counterfeit currency detector

Q: Can you use this detector to test Korean money?

Counterfeit Markers for Dollar Bills Don't Work?

Please check your grammar again!Please check your spelling.Please clip them together!Please write down your name and student number!Please leave a space for your classmate!Please notice what I’ve wrote to you on syllabus! Don’t hand in the one that you’ve handed in to another teacher.

1. mark date, day, and weather2. mark new words on your new word list (with

red lines)

3. mark the source “Clipping from A12 of South China Morning Post, 18rd October 2007”

4. one press clip and one comment5. underline the best sentences (with yellow

high-light lines) and copy them 6. mark new words on your new word list (with

red lines)

Prewriting: Step 1: Choose a topicStep 2: Gather ideasStep 3: Decide which ideas you want to use and where to use them

Drafting:Step 4: Write your paragraph or essay

Reviewing and revising:Step 5: Check what you have written

Rewriting:Step 6: May need to explain something

more clearly Add more details Change your organizationStep 5 and 6 may be repeated many times.

Brainstorming is a way of gathering ideas about a topic.

Making a list:

Freewriting:

Try to draw a mapping with your group members. Don’t be a loafer. Everyone needs to contribute!

A paragraph is a group of sentences about a single topic.The sentences explain the writers’ main idea about the topic.A paragraph is often between 5 and 10 sentences long.The first sentence of a paragraph is usually indented a few spaces.

just

topic

main idea help explain main idea