7/21/2019 Revision Plan

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• Revised cover page not to include running header and to center the title, author’s name

and institution on the page;• Generated abstract;• Edited thesis statement in first paragraph• ummari!ed paragraphs and omitted some facts• "he information on some paragraphs ma#es the essa$ be read li#e an informative essa$

rather than a researched position essa$;• Edited paragraphs to be half page long since it %as t%o page long;• tated positions in the essa$ b$ %riting topic sentences and other sentences among the

paragraphs identif$ing the different stances about the topic& "herefore, the positions,

including m$ stance, are not hard to locate on the essa$;• Included different phrases for introducing 'uotations, e(plaining 'uotations, introducing

standard vie%s, introducing an ongoing debate, capturing authorial action, naming the

na$sa$ers, and ma#ing concessions %hile still standing m$ ground;• )ro#en up all paragraphs since each of them %ere one page long;• Re%orded sentences&