Revision for Writing
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Revision for Writing
Identity and Belonging Practise AT
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Identity is...
• Define identity in three words
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Identity
• Complex • Fluid • Unique
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Complex
• Identity is complex because it can be objective and subjective. Many factors combine to make up a person’s identity. For example: race, culture, nationality, ethnicity, experiences, family, location, historic time and place, thoughts, feelings, beliefs, biology etc...etc...
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Fluid
• Identity is fluid because it is always changing. As we grow physically, our identity and self image changes; as we grow emotionally, out identity changes; as we reflect on our life experiences, our identity changes. We can consciously choose to change who we are by behaving and thinking differently. We can purposely change our looks. The way we see ourselves and the way others see us can always change.
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Unique
• We might share aspects of our identity – for example, we may all identify as Australian, but our identity is what sets us apart from everybody else
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Belonging is...
• Define belonging in three words
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Belonging
• Comfortable• Secure• Elusive
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Comfortable
• Belonging is feeling comfortable where you are and who you are with. It is feeling as though you fit; that feeling that things are ‘right’ or that you are ‘where you are meant to be’.
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Secure
• Belonging provides a sense of security; a sense that you are not alone and that you are safe. Feeling as though you belong helps you to feel confident.
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Elusive
• A sense of belonging is something many people search for their whole lives but may never find.
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Synonyms & Antonyms
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Identity & Belonging
• What is the relationship??
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Unpack your prompt
• Rewrite the prompt in your own words
• Do you agree, partially agree or disagree?
• Explain in a couple of sentences why
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Planning
• Discuss your answers with your group
• You should now have a variety of ideas surrounding your prompt
• Discuss which texts you can relate to your prompt – jot down how they link to your ideas
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Writing your introduction
• Sentence 1: Reword the prompt
• Sentence 2: Summarise some arguments for the prompt– Some people believe that...– There is evidence to suggest...– It can be argued....– One the one hand...
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Writing your introduction
• Sentence 3: Summarise some arguments against the prompt– However, others feel....– Nevertheless, it can also be that....– There is also evidence to suggest....– On the other hand....
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Writing your introduction
• Sentence 4: Your thesis statement/contentionTells the reader what you are going to discuss in your writing
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Body Paragraphs
• Idea: what is the key idea of your paragraph? This becomes your topic sentence
• Supporting points: the development of your paragraph – you will need 2 – 4 points. These are your examples and explanations
• Concluding sentence: links the idea back to the prompt.
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Smoothly incorporatingEVIDENCE and EXAMPLES
• An example of___________can be found in___________when___________
• _________ offers a telling example of _______ with the depiction of_______
• Despite this, _________ shows us that _______ is not always the case when _______
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Smoothly incorporatingEVIDENCE and EXAMPLES
• _________ opens up new ways of thinking about _______ through __________
• Yet as ______ demonstrates, _______ is not always straightforward
• This idea is explored by ________ in ________ reflecting the belief that_________ because____________
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Concluding
• Rephrase the prompt (differently from your introduction)
• Recap the main ideas you have discussed
• Give your point of view
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The beginning of the end
• On balance, it is clear... (reword contention)
• (reword contention) This is evident in... (summary of main ideas)
• As we have seen... (reword contention)