Resume Review: Peer 1

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Resume Review: Peer 1 Fom: Gustavo Tajada Pereda Preliminary Research Used great key words in to resume to allow employer to quickly scan and look for what they are interested in. Name and Contact Information Did a nice job of putting contact information in the very top. Included all the necessary contact information email, phone, and address. Objective Definitely emphasizes the reader what will be given rather then what would like to get. Education True, gives school, major, and date of graduation. True, provides great additional information that shows you are well qualified for the job. Provides academic awards for all years in education. True, Used heading Awards and Honors. Work Experience Provided all detail about past work experience, responsibilities, and knowledge that could highlight to other possible employment. Activities Provided volunteer experience as a teacher assistant that provides as a extracurricular activity provided for the community. Interests

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Technical CommunicationENGL-2116-090Fall 2015

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Resume Review: Peer 1Fom: Gustavo Tajada Pereda

Preliminary Research Used great key words in to resume to allow employer to quickly scan and

look for what they are interested in.

Name and Contact Information

Did a nice job of putting contact information in the very top. Included all the necessary contact information email, phone, and address.

Objective

Definitely emphasizes the reader what will be given rather then what would like to get.

Education

True, gives school, major, and date of graduation.True, provides great additional information that shows you are well qualified

for the job. Provides academic awards for all years in education.True, Used heading Awards and Honors.

Work Experience

Provided all detail about past work experience, responsibilities, and knowledge that could highlight to other possible employment.

Activities

Provided volunteer experience as a teacher assistant that provides as a extracurricular activity provided for the community.

Interests

Interests not included, although doesn’t effect overall resume appearance and effectiveness.

References

No references included. That is all that really missing, just need up to three references that are not family related.

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Prose

Uses great strong verbs, I would recommend to maybe look back at objective and maybe reword it. Used good spelling, grammer, and punctuaction.

Visual Design

Looks neat and great would try to condense just a little. Used heading and layouts to make resume look neat and nice.

Ethics

Avoided any misleading information, overall listed great experience and accomplishments from job titles.