Reflections in my Writing Before After
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Emma 'S e l f R e f l e c t I o n
Reflections in my WritingBefore
After Early on in the semester I had
trouble analyzing in my writing, I mainly summarized.
Organization was a major problem in my 2nd essay.
MLA? I didn't even use on my first essay, let alone properly use it.
Gathering complete ideas and connecting them to my thesis appropriately was a struggle until my Wall-e analysis.
With HELPFUL in-class discussions (analyzing Wall-e) my essay understanding of an analysis was much more clear.
After talking during in-class peer revisions I learned many different strong organizational structures, (i.e. time)
With OWL (online MLA source) I figured out how to correctly cite, and format a MLA paper.
Reflections on WordPressBefore After
Blogging was new to me, so I was illiterate at it.
Posting weekly posts wasn't the problem marking the category was.
In my blogs, because there was a 400 word minimum, I sometimes ended to soon, and other times was to repetitive trying to meet exactly 400 words.
Blogging has became something I enjoy doing.
I enjoy the simplicity of blogs; no pen or paper, just start typing, which I didn't before.
Writing about any topic discussed in-class, left me with many options and suppressed ideas I was able to openly address as time went on.
Lessons Learned..Cups can
be reused.Plastic
washable cups are beneficial as well.
Girls, go natural;
you save money
and the
environment. (hair
spray, hair color
etc) Cars can be bought
fuel efficient.
Instead of driving, ride
a bike.
Putting it all Together!In my writing I've
progressed: Sentence structure
Organization
Adding my own experiences into my essays (narrative, analytical, and persuasive pieces)
Learned to better analyze readings and movies
In my life I've progressed:
Reducing gas consumption
Stopped doing what was convenient for me; fountain drink cups at QT
Got rid of my bleached hair, and went back natural
Spread AWARENESS to those around me
How Wall-e Influenced Me Reduced my trash (got rid of plastic cups, forks; use dishes)
Bought a re-useable cup
Changed my thought of bigger is better
Helped me notice how precious the environment is to myself, and those around me