Record Consultation

8/3/2019 Record Consultation

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Timestamp

Time of

Consultation Consultant

Consultee's W&M

User ID

Consultee's

Academic Year Major Minor

################ 19:00:00 Carey, Sean kjfitzgerald Junior English

################ 20:00:00 Carey, Sean tlclister Senior Biology

################ 14:00:00 Winter, Carrie N/A Graduate Other

################ 13:00:00 Winter, Carrie kemaney Freshman Finance

################ 14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina jelee Freshman English

################ 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae yson Graduate Other

################ 19:00:00 Kim, Anna asburton Freshman Other

################ 20:00:00 Bryant, Graham hpark01 Junior Public Policy

################ 21:00:00 Hayes, Dana ychen02 Freshman Other

################ 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae cjin Freshman Undeclared

################ 16:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae mefisher Senior Biology

################ 14:00:00 Bryant, Graham dcbarnisin Sophomore English

################ 15:00:00 Bryant, Graham rlmcguire Junior English


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################ 16:00:00 Kreider, Aleina janoll Freshman Other

################ 19:00:00 Repper, Michelle kakrause Freshman Undeclared

################ 20:00:00 Repper, Michelle eomurphy Sophomore Undeclared

################ 19:00:00 Herries, Logan jzhang03 Freshman Undeclared

################ 20:00:00 Kim, Anna yliu13 Freshman Undeclared

################ 21:00:00 Kim, Anna srsaffarini Freshman Undeclared

################ 21:00:00 Sales, Megan mpsales Freshman Undeclared

################ 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae fchen Freshman Undeclared

################ 13:00:00 Sigmon, Cody stdavis Junior English Women's Studies

################ 14:00:00 Kim, Anna mdsmith Junior

International

Relations Economics

################ 15:00:00 Kreider, Aleina janoll Freshman Other

################ 14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina jzhang03 Freshman Undeclared

################ 16:00:00 Sigmon, Cody jcmaza Freshman Undeclared

################ 19:00:00 Hayes, Dana jbyun Freshman Undeclared


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################ 19:00:00 Herries, Logan iabush Freshman Undeclared

################ 20:00:00 Hayes, Dana welawrence Freshman Undeclared

################ 20:00:00 Carlomany, DJ jmhall01 Freshman Undeclared

################ 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh irduerr Freshman Biology

################ 13:00:00 Kim, Anna jihsu Freshman Global Studies

################ 13:00:00 Herries, Logan bestewart Senior Mathematics Classical Studies

################ 14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina ecshaffrey Freshman

Kinesiology &

Health Sciences

################ 14:00:00 Sigmon, Cody makendrick Freshman Marketing

################ 15:00:00 Kreider, Aleina krmaney Freshman Finance

################ 15:00:00 Sigmon, Cody N/A Graduate Undeclared

################ 19:00:00 Bell, Nicky jwschneider Sophomore

International

Relations

################ 20:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh ecshaffrey Freshman

Kinesiology &

Health Sciences Chemistry


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################ 20:00:00 Bell, Nicky yliu11 Sophomore Undeclared

################ 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh ysun02 Senior Psychology Anthropology

################ 13:00:00 Bell, Nicky kphughes Freshman Other

################ 14:00:00 Bell, Nicky klward Freshman Undeclared

################ 14:00:00 Weber, Danielle cjin Freshman Undeclared

################ 13:00:00 Weber, Danielle dagatton Junior English

################ 15:00:00 Bryant, Graham blbrown Graduate Anthropology

################ 15:00:00 Wallace, Eli memoore Junior Government

################ 13:00:00 Weber, Danielle sjschoenfeld Sophomore Finance


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################ 16:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh zmtrout Freshman Undeclared

################ 15:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh mkuzio Senior

Process

Management and

Consulting

################ 15:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh qyuan Freshman Undeclared

################ 16:00:00 Sigmon, Cody fchen Freshman Undeclared

################ 19:00:00 Sales, Megan zmtrout Freshman Undeclared Other

################ 19:00:00 Carey, Sean nwu Freshman Undeclared

################ 20:00:00 Carey, Sean kbthoma Sophomore Art History

################ 20:00:00 Kim, Anna plkeyster Sophomore Government

################ 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh dlee Freshman Undeclared

################ 20:00:00 Sales, Megan ewmaroist Sophomore Government

################ 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh hlez07 Sophomore Neuroscience

################ 20:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh janoll Sophomore Other

################ 13:00:00 Herries, Logan agbarden Freshman Biology

################ 13:00:00 Weber, Danielle jschneids13 Sophomore

International

Relations

################ 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli yson Graduate Other

################ 19:00:00 Sales, Megan zmtrout Freshman Undeclared

################ 19:00:00 Sales, Megan jjcarter Senior Neuroscience


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################ 21:00:00 Carlomany, DJ nmfriedman Freshman Undeclared

################ 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae dagatton Junior English

################ 13:00:00 Winter, Carrie lamarty Freshman Undeclared

################ 21:00:00Washington, Ashleigh kmgeorge Freshman Philosophy

################ 13:00:00 Herries, Logan gnfernandez Freshman Other

################ 16:00:00 Weber, Danielle cjwalsh Freshman History

################ 19:00:00 Repper, Michelle srdalessio Freshman Undeclared

################ 16:00:00 Weber, Danielle hruh Freshman Undeclared

################ 16:00:00 Kreider, Aleina pkmartin Freshman Undeclared

################ 14:00:00 Winter, Carrie awbushey Junior Psychology

################ 15:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh schelm Freshman Undeclared

################ 16:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh kmmcgovern Freshman Undeclared


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################ 16:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae rjvaughan Junior English Film Studies

################ 19:00:00 Wallace, Eli kbdemaria Freshman Undeclared

################ 20:00:00 Bryant, Graham laura.lee Graduate Marketing

################ 20:00:00 Hayes, Dana dacoradzzi Junior Other

################ 21:00:00 Bryant, Graham cpmacdonnel Sophomore Undeclared

################ 21:00:00 Hayes, Dana kcmaney Freshman Finance

################ 13:00:00 Herries, Logan bmcoviello Freshman History

################ 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli gbgardner Freshman Undeclared

################ 14:00:00 Bryant, Graham kcbenner Freshman

International

Relations

################ 19:00:00 Kim, Anna zkang Sophomore Accounting

################ 15:00:00 Bryant, Graham rlscheetz01 Freshman Undeclared

################ 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli dytassara Freshman English

################ 14:00:00 Bryant, Graham aedaughtrey Freshman English

################ 13:00:00 Herries, Logan pwsweeter Freshman Biology


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################ 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae kmmcgovern Freshman Undeclared

################ 13:00:00 Bell, Nicky fchen Freshman Undeclared

################ 15:00:00 Weber, Danielle paradich Sophomore Biology

################ 20:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh eaorzechauski Senior Biology

################ 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh aosarpong Senior Government

################ 21:00:00 Hayes, Dana srdalessio Freshman Undeclared

################ 21:00:00 Bryant, Graham srbrecker Freshman

International

Relations

################ 15:00:00 Bryant, Graham zrdimauro Sophomore English

################ 19:00:00 Herries, Logan yguo01 Graduate Other

################ 16:00:00 Weber, Danielle N/A Graduate Other

################ 16:00:00 Kreider, Aleina yson Graduate Other

################ 19:00:00 Repper, Michelle zkang Senior Accounting

################ 19:00:00 Herries, Logan cvweaver Freshman Undeclared

################ 20:00:00 Kim, Anna mglundeen Freshman Undeclared

################ 21:00:00 Sales, Megan hlim Senior Neuroscience

################ 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae cdpapas Freshman Government


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################ 13:00:00 Sigmon, Cody kmmcgovern Freshman Undeclared

################ 14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina mbgoldman Graduate Other

################ 14:00:00 Kim, Anna jelee Freshman English Hispanic Studies

################ 15:00:00 Kreider, Aleina bbtobo Junior Biology

################ 16:00:00 Wallace, Eli vasaras Freshman Undeclared

################ 16:00:00 Sigmon, Cody pasarup Senior Sociology Women's Studies

################ 19:00:00 Hayes, Dana gnfernandez Freshman Undeclared

################ 19:00:00 Herries, Logan srdalessio Freshman Undeclared

################ 20:00:00 Carlomany, DJ jrlewitz Junior American Studies

################ 20:00:00 Carlomany, DJ scgilliand Sophomore Biology Mathematics

################ 20:00:00 Hayes, Dana jzhang03 Freshman Undeclared

################ 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh cpmacdonnell Junior Biology Marine Science

################ 13:00:00 Kreider, Aleina mttesfahuneyn Freshman Undeclared

################ 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh hbach Sophomore Neuroscience

################ 20:00:00 Carey, Sean lamarty Freshman Other

################ 19:00:00 Carey, Sean hlim Senior Neuroscience

################ 13:00:00 Sales, Megan blbrown Graduate Africana Studies

################ 19:00:00 Sales, Megan ysun02 Senior Psychology

################ 13:00:00 Herries, Logan ecshaffrey Freshman

Kinesiology &



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################ 14:00:00 Sigmon, Cody

Khouloud

Khammassi Graduate Other

################ 15:00:00 Wallace, Eli yson Graduate Other

################ 21:00:00 Kim, Anna ylinis Freshman

International

Relations Economics

################ 21:00:00 Sales, Megan hlim Senior Neuroscience################ 19:00:00 Bryant, Graham lmmacdonald01 Freshman Undeclared

################ 16:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh kmmcgovern Freshman Undeclared

################ 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae yson Graduate Other

################ 16:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae rlmcdermott Freshman Other

################ 20:00:00 Carlomany, DJ zadawi Freshman Undeclared

################ 19:00:00 Bell, Nicky makendrick Freshman Finance

################ 19:00:00 Herries, Logan pmlyon Freshman Undeclared

################ 15:00:00 Kreider, Aleina tdespina Junior Anthropology

################ 16:00:00 Sigmon, Cody kcbenner Freshman

International

Relations

################ 16:00:00 Kreider, Aleina kbthoma Sophomore English

################ 15:00:00 Wallace, Eli kmatsuda Freshman Biology

################ 19:00:00 Bell, Nicky mefillo Freshman Undeclared

################ 20:00:00 Bell, Nicky sbgennari Sophomore Biology

################ 14:00:00 Weber, Danielle nshollingswort Freshman Undeclared

################ 13:00:00 Weber, Danielle kbhopkins Freshman Undeclared

################ 13:00:00 Bell, Nicky fchen Freshman Undeclared

################ 19:00:00 Sales, Megan ysun02 Senior Psychology

################ 21:00:00 Sales, Megan jzzhang Freshman Undeclared

################ 20:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh zkang Senior Accounting

################ 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh ejstraka Freshman Undeclared

################ 13:00:00 Weber, Danielle kmmgovern Freshman Undeclared


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################ 13:00:00 Bell, Nicky klhill01 Senior English

################ 13:00:00 Herries, Logan gnfernandez Freshman Finance

################ 15:00:00 Sigmon, Cody alfoster Freshman

International

Relations################ 19:00:00 Sales, Megan rmahgerefteh Junior Finance

################ 21:00:00 Kim, Anna srsaffarini Freshman Undeclared

################ 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh glschneider Freshman Chemistry

################ 14:00:00 Weber, Danielle dposborn Junior Neuroscience Philosophy

################ 16:00:00 Wallace, Eli vasaras Freshman Undeclared

################ 19:00:00 Wallace, Eli jbyun FreshmanInternationalRelations

################ 16:00:00 Wallace, Eli kcfish Junior

Asian and Middle

Eastern Studies

################ 13:00:00 Sales, Megan blbrown Graduate Africana Studies

################ 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli sacaudill Senior Global Studies

################ 15:00:00 Bryant, Graham cmsaunders Sophomore Psychology

################ 15:00:00 Wallace, Eli yesong Graduate Other

################ 13:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh hbaek Sophomore Neuroscience

################ 19:00:00 Herries, Logan cerapkins Freshman Undeclared

################ 16:00:00 Wallace, Eli zkang Junior Accounting

################ 14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina bjernst Freshman Undeclared

################ 15:00:00 Kreider, Aleina acdesando Freshman Art History

################ 14:00:00 Kim, Anna qyuan Freshman Undeclared

################ 19:00:00 Herries, Logan tchoi01 Freshman Undeclared

################ 19:00:00 Sales, Megan srdalessio Freshman Undeclared


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################ 20:00:00 Carey, Sean djcasino Junior Psychology

################ 21:00:00 Sales, Megan etlambergs Freshman Undeclared

################ 21:00:00 Carlomany, DJ 930548831 Freshman Undeclared

11/1/2011 13:21:16 13:00:00 Winter, Carrie yliu11 Sophomore Undeclared

11/1/2011 14:29:49 14:00:00 Winter, Carrie ywang11 Freshman Undeclared

11/1/2011 15:13:05 14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina yguo01 Graduate Other

11/1/2011 16:34:24 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae mbgoldman Graduate Other


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11/1/2011 16:36:25 16:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae sacaudill Senior

Asian and Middle

Eastern Studies

11/1/2011 16:55:22 16:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh jabracaglia Sophomore Finance

11/1/2011 19:46:43 19:00:00 Wallace, Eli rjchoi Freshman Accounting

11/1/2011 19:49:51 19:00:00 Carey, Sean abng Freshman Undeclared

11/1/2011 20:05:38 20:00:00 Wallace, Eli yson Graduate Other

11/1/2011 20:44:18 20:00:00 Hayes, Dana jshim Senior Economics

11/1/2011 20:57:57 20:00:00 Bryant, Graham cpmacdonnell Sophomore Biology Marine Science

11/1/2011 21:46:06 21:00:00 Bryant, Graham camarion Freshman Undeclared

11/2/2011 13:21:17 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae ycow Graduate Accounting


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11/2/2011 13:52:34 13:00:00 Herries, Logan mkuzio Senior Other

11/2/2011 14:46:35 14:00:00 Bryant, Graham dytassara Freshman Anthropology

11/2/2011 14:48:02 15:00:00 Wallace, Eli bdconstable Freshman Undeclared

11/2/2011 16:11:29 15:00:00 Bryant, Graham sfguerard Freshman Undeclared

11/2/2011 16:54:32 16:00:00 Weber, Danielle sbellakbira Freshman Biology

11/2/2011 19:56:06 19:00:00 Herries, Logan laura.lee Graduate Other

11/2/2011 20:18:03 20:00:00 Repper, Michelle kmfrazer Freshman Public Policy

11/3/2011 12:55:47 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli (blank) Graduate Other

11/3/2011 12:58:41 16:00:00 Sigmon, Cody skim15 Freshman Undeclared

11/3/2011 13:03:20 19:00:00 Herries, Logan tmobemeier Freshman Economics

11/3/2011 13:06:03 20:00:00 Hayes, Dana jbyun Freshman

International

Relations

11/3/2011 13:07:11 19:00:00 Hayes, Dana gbgardner Freshman Undeclared

11/3/2011 13:09:39 21:00:00 Kim, Anna tmoinzadeh Sophomore

International

Relations

11/3/2011 13:11:34 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh bdconstable Freshman Undeclared

11/3/2011 13:12:49 15:00:00 Weber, Danielle ktlorenzen Freshman Undeclared

11/3/2011 13:14:25 14:00:00 Bryant, Graham njhall Graduate Other

11/3/2011 13:25:57 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli rlscheetz01 Freshman Undeclared

11/3/2011 13:27:35 14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina mzshearin Graduate Education


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11/3/2011 13:46:34 13:00:00 Sigmon, Cody totaddeo Sophomore Undeclared

11/3/2011 14:42:30 16:00:00 Kreider, Aleina yson Graduate Education

11/3/2011 14:45:53 14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina yguo01 Graduate Other

11/3/2011 14:49:21 14:00:00 Kim, Anna

[email protected].

edu Freshman Undeclared

11/3/2011 14:51:48 21:00:00 Kim, Anna ysun02 Senior Psychology Anthropology

11/3/2011 16:54:40 15:00:00 Wallace, Eli blbrown Graduate Anthropology

11/3/2011 17:00:34 16:00:00 Sigmon, Cody tjsalmon Sophomore Undeclared

11/3/2011 20:04:18 19:00:00 Herries, Logan ashoy Freshman Undeclared

11/3/2011 20:55:50 20:00:00 Carlomany, DJ ashay Freshman Undeclared

11/3/2011 20:58:17 20:00:00 Hayes, Dana jzhang03 Freshman Undeclared

11/4/2011 13:39:57 13:00:00 Sales, Megan tmrusso Freshman Government

11/4/2011 14:02:45 13:00:00 Herries, Logan ysun02 Senior Psychology


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11/4/2011 14:32:30 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli slbyarlay Sophomore Biology

11/4/2011 14:48:35 14:00:00 Sigmon, Cody sjiang Junior Economics

11/4/2011 15:48:59 15:00:00 Sigmon, Cody tmoinzaden Sophomore

International

Relations

11/6/2011 20:59:54 19:00:00 Herries, Logan ywang01 Freshman Undeclared

11/6/2011 22:31:35 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh dytassara Freshman Anthropology

11/6/2011 22:45:25 21:00:00 Sales, Megan jcmaza Freshman Undeclared

11/7/2011 14:02:46 16:00:00 Kreider, Aleina bkoo Sophomore Undeclared11/7/2011 14:05:21 21:00:00 Kim, Anna sjplunkett Sophomore Public Policy

11/7/2011 14:12:25 21:00:00 Sales, Megan cmhennessey Freshman Undeclared

11/7/2011 14:17:23 13:00:00 Winter, Carrie jagilbertson Freshman Undeclared

11/7/2011 14:21:27 20:00:00 Herries, Logan emembrey Sophomore English

11/7/2011 14:25:41 20:00:00 Repper, Michelle wevandenberg Freshman History

11/7/2011 14:27:43 19:00:00 Herries, Logan jzhang03 Freshman Undeclared

11/7/2011 14:28:49 19:00:00 Repper, Michelle ychen02 Freshman Undeclared

11/7/2011 14:31:06 16:00:00 Weber, Danielle aoharrow Freshman Undeclared

11/7/2011 14:31:59 15:00:00 Weber, Danielle kefalvey Freshman

International

Relations

11/7/2011 15:42:15 14:00:00 Weber, Danielle ramueller Sophomore Government Hispanic Studies

11/7/2011 16:46:12 15:00:00 Wallace, Eli mgabro Junior English Philosophy

11/7/2011 16:48:13 15:00:00 Bryant, Graham jabridgeford Freshman History


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11/7/2011 17:50:10 16:00:00 Bryant, Graham ejstraka Freshman Undeclared

11/7/2011 20:41:18 19:00:00 Sales, Megan agborden Freshman Biology

11/7/2011 20:57:14 19:00:00 Carey, [email protected] Sophomore Undeclared

11/7/2011 22:00:33 20:00:00 Carey, Sean

[email protected].

edu Freshman Undeclared

11/7/2011 23:06:17 21:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh lzhou Junior Psychology

11/8/2011 16:02:31 14:00:00 Winter, Carrie yguo01 Graduate Other

11/8/2011 16:03:40 13:00:00 Winter, Carrie jelee Freshman Undeclared

11/8/2011 16:07:41 14:00:00 Kreider, Aleina jsboayue Junior Psychology

11/8/2011 16:39:22 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae kmmcgovern Freshman Undeclared

11/8/2011 17:47:57 16:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae yguo01 Graduate Other

11/8/2011 17:51:20 16:00:00

Washington,

Ashleigh arbeaupre Graduate Anthropology

11/8/2011 18:32:00 17:00:00 Carey, Sean blbrown Graduate Other

11/8/2011 20:48:01 19:00:00 Wallace, Eli rawilliams02 Freshman Undeclared

11/8/2011 21:02:26 19:00:00 Kim, Anna jjcarter Senior Neuroscience

11/8/2011 21:24:28 20:00:00 Bryant, Graham ecshaffrey Freshman

Kinesiology &



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11/8/2011 21:54:50 20:00:00 Hayes, Dana ywang11 Freshman Undeclared

11/8/2011 22:07:35 15:00:00 Bryant, Graham cjholmes Freshman Neuroscience

11/8/2011 22:08:19 15:00:00 Bryant, Graham cjholmes Freshman Neuroscience

11/8/2011 22:08:35 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli jbyun Freshman

International

Relations

11/8/2011 22:09:26 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae srsaffarini Freshman Undeclared

11/8/2011 22:10:33 13:00:00 Herries, Logan lmsinger Freshman Biology

11/8/2011 22:15:07 21:00:00 Bryant, Graham knhull Freshman Undeclared

11/8/2011 22:16:54 21:00:00 Hayes, Dana sbfarkas Freshman English

11/8/2011 22:18:05 20:00:00 Hayes, Dana dckent Freshman Undeclared

11/8/2011 22:18:48 20:00:00 Bryant, Graham cvweaver Freshman Undeclared

11/8/2011 22:36:10 21:00:00 Hayes, Dana dagatton Junior English

11/9/2011 14:29:10 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae ramarty Sophomore

International

Relations

11/9/2011 14:32:48 13:00:00 Lovell, Ani-Rae ramarty Sophomore

International

Relations

11/9/2011 14:48:05 13:00:00 Herries, Logan lahall Freshman Undeclared

11/9/2011 15:34:35 14:00:00 Wallace, Eli kjainsworth Sophomore English Sociology

11/9/2011 15:35:40 14:00:00 Bryant, Graham kcsanders Freshman Undeclared


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Second Major

Nature of

Consultation

Last Name of

Professor

Subject of

Assignment

What was worked

on during this

consultation?

General

Comments on

Consultation?

Consultee's W&M

User ID

Writing Donnor Education

Paper Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence Style

Writing N/A Other

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Voice

Skype - Oral Baake Other

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

skype consultation,

don't have her user

ID

Oral Polaski Religious Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

Writing Meyers English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Formatting,

Citations, How often

to quote

Writing Cross Education

Grammar/Mechanic

s, How to

Paraphrase

She came in with a

lot of questions

about paraphrasing,and I showed her

some resources and

went through

examples with her.

We also worked on

some mechanics of

her writing--small

grammatical

mistakes.

Writing

Macdonald and

Owens Geology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization,Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Rennagel Public Policy

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

ESOL, worked

heavily on articles

and clarity.

Writing Peterson English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization,

Citations

Needed lots of help

pulling out a thesis

from her essay,

though there was

definitely one there.


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Formatting

While her

arguments were

generally clear, she

is a ESOL student

who needed help

with a lot of little

things, plurals,

grammar, etc.

Writing Donnor Education

Paper Organization,

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

It was a group paper

that she brought in

for the group. weworked on cutting it

down and some

sentence structure

stuff.

Writing Wheatley English

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Walk-in, had little

time to go in depth

Psychology Writing Donnor English

Formatting,

Citations

Group paper,

focused on APA 5th

edition and

citations.


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Writing Alexandra Religious Studies

Paper Organization,

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

No major for

Business? Tried to

put her down as a

business major, but

it looks like that's

not in the drop-

down.


Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s She was sweet.

Writing Dessier Government

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

She's a really good

writer- we shouldask her to work

here!

Writing Manna Public Policy

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Dessler Government

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization,

ParagraphOrganization,

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s


Thesis

brainstorming, pre-

writing

Writing Japanese Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization,

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

We worked on

wording changes.

We wrote a thesis

and topic sentences

for her paper, she is

planning on coming

back in when she

write the whole

paper.

Writing Braxton English

Paper Organization,


Formatting

Worked on shaving

down academic

quotations andreplacing it with

original material.

Writing Brazys Government

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Alexandra Religious Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing DiNitto Japanese Studies

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Elaboration,

Explanation

Writing Sher Biology

Paper Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Outlining

Developed a logical

progression of ideas

for a paper outlineon malaria

eradication via

genetic engineering

of mosquitoes.

Writing Kennedy Other

Grammar/Mechanics, Formatting,

Citations

Working on a paper

for the St. Andrew's

duel degree

seminar that

Kennedy had

already edited.

Mostly trying tointerpret her

comments.


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Writing Japanese Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Citations

Writing

Owens and

MacDonald Geology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization,

Sentence Style

Primarily worked on

incorporating a

thesis into a book

review.

Writing Charles

Kinesiology &

Health Sciences

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization,Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Mahn English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization

Writing Cherles

Kinesiology &

Health Sciences

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization,


Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing

Personal

Statement/Applicati

on resume

-helped her write a

resume

Chemistry Writing Ashworth English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Music Writing Ashworth English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence Style

Opened his eyes to

the art of specificity.

Economics Writing Polaski Religious Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence Style,

Transitions

Writing N/A

Personal

Statement/Applicati

on

Paper Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence Style

Worked on

maintaining

objectivity and

staying on topic

within a paragraph.


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence Style,Grammar/Mechanic

s

Commentary paper

for Public Policy.

Receptive to

changes but

attached to his

writing, particularly

rhetorical devices

that are sometime

too much. Long

consultation for a

short paper, like to

discuss his writing

as you go through it.

Said he was having

some trouble with

academic

confidence,hopefully this

helped.

Writing Ashworth English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Grammar/Mechanic

s


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Oral King

Theatre, Speech

and Dance

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Worked on an

outline for a speech.

Not clear to me why

she wanted to come

in, because she

already knew what

she wanted to put in

the speech, very

vaguely asked me

to help her create

the outline. I mostlyjust asked "what do

you want to say

next?" and she

would answer.

Writing N/A Other

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Personal statement

for grad school

Art Writing Manna Public Policy

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Worked on a short

response paper for

public policy.

Focused on

elaborating

arguments and

tightening language.

Some issues with

repetition as well.

Seemed flustered

when I asked her to

come up with

alternative language

on the spot.

Writing Graham Sociology

Sentence/Speaking

Style,Grammar/Mechanic

s, Citations

Worked on a 2pp.

paper for Social

Problems. Just a

summary, so not

much to work with

re: argumentation,

but we focused on

some style andwording

improvements.


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

We worked on

connecting each

paragraph back to

her thesis, and

adjusting a few

sentences for

grammatical clarity.

Writing English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

We worked on a

paper about

Wasteland by T.S.

Eliot. We worked on

the consistency and

clarity of her thesis.

Writing Wesis Anthropology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization

Worked heavily on

structure and

organization as well

as overall argument

Writing Stow Government

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence/SpeakingStyle


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Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization

Writing Quark Sociology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

Writing Macdonald Geology

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Grammar/Mechanic

s


Thesis andArgument Clarity,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

She was veryconcerned about

her language, but it

was pretty solid

overall. Not that

much to correct.


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Formatting

needed help with

organization of

paper

Writing Kaziewicz English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanics

He said I was "much

better than his lastconsultant".

YEAHHHHH! He

obviously came in

only looking for a

grammar check,

and sort of resisted

me talking about

conceptual things,

but once he saw the

errors in his

organization and

thesis he was more

open tosuggestions.

English Writing Peterson English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization

Clarified the

assignment and her

thesis

Writing Baltes Government

Paragraph

Organization plkeyster

Writing Tierney Government

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization

Writing Palmer

Theatre, Speech

and Dance

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization,

Formatting,

Citations

Writing Amy Q Sociology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization

Writing alexandra Religious Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, fluency

Writing Glaser Biology

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Formatting

Writing Konefal

International

Relations

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

planning

Writing Dipaloa Education

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

English expression


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

language

Writing Other

Thesis and

Argument Clarity


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Writing Van Juizen English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization

Writing Hart English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Transitions, Topic

Sentences

Her argumentation

is very strong. She

just needed help

with making sure

her ideas flowed

coherently. We

talked about sometips for writing clear

transition sentences

and topic

sentences. We

made sure her

argument was clear

and supported her

thesis.

Writing Owens

Theatre, Speech

and Dance

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

Psychology Writing Donnor Education "Cohesion," "flow"

I entered this and itdoesn't actually

have a consultant

listed at the top--I

just had to guess. -

AK

Marketing Writing Taylor

Environmental

Studies

Paragraph

Organization,

Citations,

"Transitions"

We need a major

slot for

Environmental

Policy.

Also, we don't get

the correct date on

this form when

people don't enter

the forms

themselves the

same day they had

the consultation.

We need to address

this somehow.

Government Writing Polaski Other

Paper/Speech

Organization,


Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Defur Other

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Writing Defur Other

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Formatting,

"Flow"

Writing Ely Classical Studies

Grammar/Mechanic

s, How to write an

"Explanation Paper"

I have no idea what

"explanation paper"

means. Is this like,

a term? We worked

mostly on just

making sure the

writing style was not

too colloquial.

Writing Wolf Women's Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization

Writing Wiggins English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Rewrite of an

already graded

paper

Writing Alexander English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization

Planning before

paper was written


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Writing Dawson English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization

We mainly

discussed his thesis

and how to organize

a comparison paper

thematically. It was

a re-write, so he

needed some ideas

on restructuring.

Writing English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

early conceptions of

the paper

Argh. I did poorly on

this consultation,

because he had

way too many ideas

and not any

direction. Usually

people respond

better to my

suggestions. Oops.

Writing Stower Marketing

Sentence/Speaking


s

ESOL, worked

heavily withgrammar and

mechanics

Literary and Cultural

Studies Writing Zuber


Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization, Type

of paper

Converting an

informative paper to

a close reading.

Strong writing, just

looking for an

understanding of

'close reading.'

Writing N/A

Personal

Statement/Applicati

on

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Planning and

prewriting

scholarship essays

Economics Writing Polaski Religious Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

Working from a

proposal and thesis

for a 12-14 page

research paper for

freshman seminar.

Writing English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

ParagraphOrganization


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Formatting

I taught him how to

double space in

word. Apparently

he's always been

skipping a line,

manually in single

space. Who does

that?

Writing Froitzheim Government

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Caught a few

common errors,

worked on content

Writing N/A

Personal

Statement/Applicati

on

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Moyer Anthropology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,Sentence/Speaking

Style 9/28/2011

Anthropology Writing Root


Studies Not listed 9/28/2011

Writing Kelien English Poetry paraphrase

Really odd

assignment.

September 28


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,Formatting,

Citations 9/28/2011


26/54


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization 9/28/2011

Writing Schechter History

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Grammar/Mechanic

s 9/26/2011

Writing Murphy Biology Planning/Prewriting

We discussed the

different argumentsshe could write for

her paper.

Writing Raphael Religious Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Planning/Prewriting 9/26/2011

Writing N/A

Personal

Statement/Applicati

on Planning/Prewriting 9/26/2011

Writing Defar Education

Thesis and

Argument Clarity 9/27/2011

Economics Writing Schaepe Sociology

Paper/SpeechOrganization,

Planning/Prewriting 9/27/2011

Writing van Dijkhousten English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization 9/26/2011

Oral Jennifer Other

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Law brief from the

law school

September 27

Skype - Writing Baake Other

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Khouloud and I

discussed how to

make her writing

style best express

the ideas in her

argument.

Writing Dr. Cross Education


Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Citations

We don't have a

Gifted Ed major or

even just an general

Education major,

which would behelpful to have in

our list because

often School of Ed

grad students come

in.

Writing N/A

Personal

Statement/Applicati

on

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Formatting

Really interesting

application!

Writing English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization

Writing Kaziewiez English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Worked mostly on

expanding upon

general statements

and looked for tense

consistency.

Oral Coleman Neuroscience

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

wanted to make

sure paper hadproper grammar

and flow.

Writing Mann English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

His writing and

argument was clear

and good, so we

worked on making

some sentences,

particularly topic

sentences stronger.


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Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Her paper was

verbose, so we

worked on cutting

and condensation.

Writing Not given Education

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style, Formatting

Writing DiNitto

Asian and Middle

Eastern Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

discussed mostlywhat a book review

entails, and whether

her essay really

fulfilled all the

criteria for a good

book review.

Psychology Writing Murphy Biology

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Planning/Prewriting

Writing Harris

Kinesiology &

Health Sciences

Sentence/Speaking

Style, Citations

She really didn'tneed much help at

all. But I showed her

Purdue OWL, which

was an exciting

foray into the world

of technology.

Writing Ozyegin Sociology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization

Worked on the

thesis, making sure

that it reflected the

scope of the paper.

Writing Taylor

Environmental

Science

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Citations

5 page paper for

environmental

freshman seminar.

Mostly responding

to teacher's

comments on first

draft.

Writing Public Policy

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanics, Citations

Public Policy Writing Schlabach American Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization

Writing Murphy Biology Planning/Prewriting

Writing DiNitto East Asian Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization,

Planning/Prewriting

Made an outline for

a book review.

Writing N/A Other

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Two essays for

NOAA scholarship

Writing Schlabach Africana Studies

Paragraph

Organization,

Citations

Writing Other Grammar/Mechanics, overall flow

-summer researchfinal paper

Writing Owens

Theatre, Speech

and Dance

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization

Writing Coleman Neuroscience

Grammar/Mechanic

s, overall flow

Writing Bragdan Linguistics

Paper/Speech

Organization

wanted to make

sure organization

was logical.

Writing N/A Other advice for writingGRZ?

Writing Ashworth English Planning/Prewriting


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Skype - Writing Baake Other

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style, Formatting

Mostly just helped

her make her thesis

sound a little more

native


Paper/Speech

Organization


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Neuroscience

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Angelane Other Conclusion


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization


Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Bennett English

Paper/Speech

Organization

Writing Kambis Other

Paper/Speech

Organization

Music Writing Ashworth English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Worked on a short

paper for freshmen

seminar. Focused

on expanding on

arguments to make

them stronger and

avoiding ambiguity.

Also a couple of

instances of

repeating ideas in

the same

paragraph.

Writing English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Formatting

Writing N/A

Personal

Statement/Applicati

on

Economics Writing Froitzheim Government



Writing Castillo Women's Studies

Writing Fowler

Environmental

Science

Writing Davis Philosophy

Writing Palmer

Theatre, Speech

and Dance


Writing N/A Other

Writing Other

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

wanted to make

sure his cover letter

for the School of

Education was to-

the-point and

effective.

Writing N/A Other

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Personal statement

for a Masters in

Finance program


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Planning/Prewriting


Thesis and


Organization

We worked on the

consistency of her

thesis and how to

create a conclusion

that organicallyflows from the rest

of her paper.


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Psychology Writing Savage English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Worked on a paper

for Shakespeare.

Focused on adding

analysis to quotes

and furthering

arguments.

Other Writing Taylor

Environmental

Science


Writing Blossom Finance


Writing Arehart History

Writing Saporito Sociology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/SpeechOrganization

We worked on the

consistency of her

thesis throughout

her paper and the

clarity of herargument.

Writing Harris

Kinesiology &

Health Sciences


Religious Studies Writing Jerome Religious Studies

Writing Bragdan Linguistics

Writing Kitamura History


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization

Clarifying the

overall argument


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing N/A Other

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Schtecter Global Studies

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Joanne

Personal

Statement/Applicati

on

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Hinkle Other

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Prokhorov

Russian and Post-

Soviet Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

Writing Geology

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Davis English

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Grammar/Mechanic

s


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization

wanted to see how

he could properly

organize compare &contrast, structure

of argument, and

strength of

argument.


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Philosophy Writing Costa PhilosophyThesis andArgument Clarity

He showed up super

late and then

wanted time by

himself to read over

his notes so we

really only had 10 or

so minutes to work.

He didn't seem very

confident in his

writing or in his

understanding ofthe text.

Writing English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

wrote body

paragraphs before

writing thesis. we

were able to

formulate an actual

thesis by outlining

together.

Writing Froitzheim Government Planning/Prewriting

Writing N/A

PersonalStatement/Applicati

on

Sentence/Speaking


s

Writing Wu Art History

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Jennifer Other

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Figurative

Language

We don't have a

"Law" option under

major, which would

obviously be useful

for law students.

Not that we get that

many of those, but

still. We also don't

have a "Law" option

under "Subject of

Assignment".

This consultationwas actually really

rewarding. I got to

teach her how to

use thesaurus.com

as a resource,

explained what

"connotation"

means, and got to

talk about strategies

for creative writing

as opposed to

academic writing.

Writing Barber Education

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

She came in with a

reflection and a

review of an article.

We worked on

varying her

sentence structure.

She is a grad

student in Higher

Education

Administration. I

gave her sometechniques for

changing the

structure of her

sentences.


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Writing Wilcox Chinese Languageand Culture

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanics

We made sure she

addressed each

element of her

thesis. We also

worked down

making her

sentences and word

choice more clear.

Since we finished

early, she asked for

some advice onanother paper - in

the government

department. We

discussed

techniques for

analyzing an

argument rather

than summarizing

one and being more

direct rather than

eloquent ingovernment writing.

Economics Writing N/A Other

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Research proposal

for Monroe Scholars

program

Writing Palmer

Theatre, Speech

and Dance

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

one of the harder

consultations I've

had lately-- she'll sit

there and just totally

reject your prodding

to get her to write

for herself. why.

why why why.

Writing Clemens Government

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Formatting,

Citations

His first paper--he

seemed very

nervous.


Sentence/Speaking

Style

International

Relations Writing N/A Other

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Discussing a

personal statement

for grad school

applications. Almost

entirely worked on

grammar and some

ideas/priorities for

adding/cutting

details.

Writing N/A

Personal

Statement/Applicati

on

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

NOAA Scholarship,

polished his essay

structure


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Heavily worked on

the introduction and

argument.

Writing Foster Accounting

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Planning/Prewriting

We talked about

what a research

paper needs to

have - thesis,

citations, etc. We

talked about how to

cite sources as well

and what resources

online are useful for

these things.


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Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Citations

English Writing Root, Regina Hispanic Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

Focused on

argument

development and

reasoning.


Thesis and


Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Writing Kaziewicz English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity

Focused on the

thesis and argument

development. Very

nice paper.

Writing Root Hispanic Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

We worked on

Sara's thesis and

how it connected to

the rest of the

paper. She had

many ideas, but her

thesis was not

specific enough to

touch on these

points. We worked

to unify her thesis

and improve

common grammar

problems.


Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Clemens Public Policy Citations Just citations.

Writing Diapola Education

Grammar/Mechanic

s


Grammar/Mechanic

sInternational

Relations Writing Schechter History

Paper/Speech

Organization


Grammar/Mechanic

s


Paper/Speech

Organization,

Citations

Other Writing Schechter History

Paper/Speech

Organization


Thesis and

Argument Clarity

Writing Preston

Theatre, Speech

and Dance

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Writing Barber Education Citations

Writing Moyer Other

Paragraph

Organization,

Grammar/Mechanics

Writing Barber Education

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Citations


33/54

Writing Schnectar Global Studies

Grammar/Mechanic

s

A strange

assignment where

he was to create a

dialogue between

famous religious

philosophers. A lot

of focus was put on

grammar, but it was

overall a totally fine

consultation.

Writing Bass Education

Paper/SpeechOrganization,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Birkly Other

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Shen Biology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

especially focused

on wordiness and

structure/organizatio

n

Writing

Personal

Statement/Applicati

on

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

worked on diction

mostly

Writing Wesiss Anthropology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Fiorini` History

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,


Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Talked about proper

analytic structure in

a paper.

Writing Biology

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s


Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Grammar/Mechanic

s, Analyzing an

argumentative

paper

Writing a peer

review of another

class member's

paper. Mostly

discussing his

organization and

grammar and how

to critique that.


Thesis and

Argument Clarity

his paper wasamazing. that is all.

i felt bad because i

had nothing to say

except "maybe add

a transitory word

here but otherwise

this paragraph is

perfection."

Writing

Personal

Statement/Application

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanics


34/54

Writing Minear English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization

Psychology Writing N/A

Personal

Statement/Application

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

ParagraphOrganization

Had lots of

grammar issues, but

the argument

needed much more

work so it was not

focused upon.

Tried to show how

one sells oneself onan application.


Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

A rather cool

creative

assignment: a

dialogue between

different

non/religious

philosophers.

Writing Art

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanics

English Writing N/A

Personal

Statement/Applicati

on

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Interesting

Boren Scholarship

personal statement

Writing Biology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization

making sure

everything was as

concise as possible,

and that the "dry"

sections were still

clear to the reader.

Writing English

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s



Paragraph

Organization

Writing Glaser Biology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

CitationsWriting Melfi English


Thesis and

Argument Clarity




Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Sentence/Speaking

Style


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Writing McGlennon Government

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

We worked on the

clarity of the

expression of her

ideas, focusing

mostly on sentence

structure.

Writing Wiggins English

Thesis and


Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Government Writing Clemens Government

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,


Worked on

developing

arguments and

shorteningsentences


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Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Citations,

Planning/Prewriting

Completely

restarting a paper,

working from ideas.

Outlined a new

paper.

Writing Biology

Paper/Speech

Organization

wanted to work on

paper organization,

grammar, and

instances of

redundancy.

Writing Mansour Other

Sentence/Speaking


s, Formatting,

Citations

Writing Clemens Government

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization

Writing Story Psychology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech


Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Writing Berkly Other

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Grammar/Mechanic

s


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization

Writing Ball Psychology

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Writing Riofino Hispanic Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,Planning/Prewriting

We talked a lot

about her ideas and

formulated them

into a coherent

argument andthesis.

Writing Berkly Other

Sentence/Speaking

Style,

Grammar/Mechanic

s

She is an ESL law

student. She came

in with a short

memo and wanted

help with very

specific phrasing

issues.

Writing Weiss Anthropology

Thesis and

Argument Clarity Take home Exam

Writing Wesiss Anthropology

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization

Writing Riofrio Hispanic Studies

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Africana Studies Writing Jhidley Africana Studies

Grammar/Mechanic

s

Looked over first

section of hishonors thesis for

AFST. Mostly

discussed grammar,

and what a literatary

review entails.

Oral Ashworth English

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Planning/Prewriting

Working on a 35

min presentation -

outlining


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Writing Xin Art History

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization

Restructured her

paper by reordering

paragraphs,

developing a thesis,

and looking at

sentence

flow/fluidity.

Music Writing Galambushe Religious Studies

Music Writing Galambushe Religious Studies


Paper/Speech

Organization



Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style book review

Oral Ashworth English

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

History Writing Meyers English


Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Planning/Prewriting


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Paragraph

Organization

Writing Pease English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Working on a blog

post for expository

writing. Mostly

talking about voice

and argument.


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

He had really great

analysis, so he just

needed help addelements that

clarified his

argument--topic

sentences, a more

direct thesis. He

also needed help

breaking up

sentences that were

a little unclear

because they had

so many clauses.


Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paper/Speech


Style

He had really great

analysis, so he just

needed help add

elements that

clarified his

argument--topic

sentences, a more

direct thesis. He

also needed help

breaking up

sentences that were

a little unclearbecause they had

so many clauses.

Writing Geology

Paragraph

Organization,

Sentence/Speaking

Style

Writing Begley English

Thesis and

Argument Clarity,

Paragraph

Organization,


Writing Meyer Anthropology Planning/Prewriting

Prepping for a term

paper


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Date of

Consultation

(YYYY/MM/DD) Major


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10/27/2011

10/26/2011

10/26/20119/27/2011

9/27/2011

9/27/2011

9/27/2011

10/17/2011

10/30/2011

10/30/2011

9/23/2011

9/26/2011

9/26/2011

9/26/2011

9/25/2011

9/25/2011

9/26/2011

9/26/2011

9/26/2011

9/26/2011

10/30/2011

10/30/2011

10/30/2011

10/31/2011


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10/31/2011

9/23/2011

9/23/20119/25/2011

9/25/2011

9/25/2011

10/31/2011

9/27/2011

10/19/2011

10/20/2011

10/28/2011

10/28/2011

10/31/2011

10/31/2011

9/23/2011

9/22/2011

9/22/2011

9/22/2011

9/22/2011

9/22/2011

9/14/2011

10/31/2011


48/54

10/31/2011

10/31/2011

10/31/2011

11/1/2011

11/1/2011

11/1/2011

11/1/2011


49/54

11/1/2011

11/1/2011

11/1/2011

11/1/2011

10/30/2011

11/1/2011

11/1/2011

11/1/2011

11/2/2011


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11/2/2011

11/2/2011

11/2/2011

11/2/2011

11/2/2011

11/2/2011

11/2/2011

9/21/2011

9/22/2011

9/22/2011

9/22/2011

9/22/2011

9/22/2011

9/26/2011

9/14/2011

9/14/2011

9/14/2011

9/22/2011


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11/2/2011

11/2/2011

11/3/2011

11/3/2011

11/2/2011

11/3/2011

11/3/2011

11/3/2011

11/3/2011

11/3/2011

11/4/2011

11/4/2011


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11/4/2011

11/4/2011

11/4/2011

11/6/2011

11/6/2011

11/6/2011

9/21/2011

9/21/2011

9/21/2011

9/27/2011

9/21/2011

9/21/2011

9/21/2011

9/21/2011

9/21/2011

9/21/2011

11/7/2011

11/7/2011

11/7/2011


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11/7/2011

11/7/2011

11/7/2011

11/7/2011

11/7/2011

11/8/2011

11/8/2011

3/11/2011

11/8/2011

11/8/2011

11/8/2011

11/8/2011

11/8/2011

11/8/2011

11/8/2011


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11/8/2011

9/21/20119/21/2011

9/21/2011

9/21/2011

9/21/2011

9/20/2011

9/20/2011

9/20/2011

9/20/2011

11/8/2011

11/9/2011

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