Q1 2015 Spring Journalism Agenda & Targets

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Journalism

Agenda & Targets

Spring 2015

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Class 1

Jan. 29, 2015

Agenda Targets

Class 1 • Jan. 29

• Stratt out ill (sorry folks)

• Intro The Compass Editors– Mick & Emily

• What you need for class

• Newseum video – “What’s News?”– http://www.newseumdigitalclassroom.org/digital-

classroom/video/what-is-news/default.aspx

– Fill out

• Learn what to bring to class.

• Explore what news is.

• Understand why news is often called the first draft of history.

• Learn how news is reported and accessed.

• Develop better understanding for how news is categorized.

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Need for class

• 2GB+ USB Thumb drive

• 1 ream plain paper (for laser printer)

• Binder for notes & handouts

• Pen Bk or Dk Blue Ink

• Access to Internet & TV

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What’s News Essential Questions

• What is news?

• How do we get news?

• What types of stories do we find in the news?

• How does the news affect our lives?

• What is the role of the press in our society?

• What is our role as news consumers?

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What’s News Pre-video discussion

Questions

1. What is news?

2. What stories are in the news today?

Video features

– Historically key events & people

– Once considered “news”

– Uses primary sources

– All of the images and clips actual news

While you watch, look for the events and people that you recognize from your lifetime.

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What’s News Pre-video discussion

Video features

– Historically key events & people

– Once considered “news”

– Uses primary sources

– All of the images and clips actual news

While you watch, look for the events and people that you recognize from your lifetime.

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What’s News Pre-video discussion

As you watch the video, keep these questions in mind:

1.What are some categories of events that can be considered news?

2.What makes a story newsworthy?

3.While you are watching the movie, identify four to five stories or people that you recognize.

4.Why do you think these stories are considered news?

5.What are some of the different ways in which news can be delivered? Slide

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What’s News Pre-video discussion

As you watch the video, listen for these quotations and consider their importance:• Philip Graham: “Journalism is the first rough draft of

history.” Note: this is my favorite journalism quote

• Winston Churchill: “A free press is the unsleeping guardian of every other right that free men prize; it is the most dangerous foe of tyranny.”

• Malcolm X: “You can’t separate peace from freedom because no one can be at peace unless he has his freedom.”

• John F. Kennedy: “Even though we disapprove, there isn’t any doubt. …We could not do the job at all without a very, very active press.”

• Thomas Jefferson: “Our liberty depends on freedom of the press and that cannot be limited without being lost.”

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Watch Video

• Newseum’s “What’s News” (8:11)

• Link: http://www.newseumdigitalclassroom.org/digital-

classroom/video/what-is-news/default.aspx

• Get and answers the “After Viewing” questions.

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What’s News Post Viewing Discussion

1. Are there events from this video that you recognize? Are there events in this video that you lived through?

2. How does the fact that they occurred during your lifetime change the way you remember or feel about these stories versus the historical events depicted?

3. Many of the key events in this video were represented by images. a.Discuss how photographs and other images are used

in reporting the news.

b.How do they make a different impression than the written word? Slide

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What’s News Post Viewing Discussion

1. Think about all the different ways the key events were presented in this video — news headlines, photographs, video clips, sound bytes from speeches and news broadcasts. a. How has news changed over time? b. Has the way we report the news affected what news is covered?c. What is your favorite way to get the news, and why? d. What do you think this says about you as a news consumer?

2. There were many types of news media that were seen in this video. In recent years, we have seen new types of media emerge that were not featured in this video. a. What are those types of media? b. How have they changed the face of the news and how it is

reportedc. Where do you get news? d. What about your parents? e. Where do you think you will get news in the future? Slide

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Class 2

Feb. 2, 2015

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Agenda Targets

Class 2 • Feb. 2, 2015

• Who am I

• Seating Chart

• Name Cards– First name big

– Second name small

– Be creative!

• What is journalism

• Ice Breaker Interviews if time

• Meet teacher

• Meet other students

• Find out about class

• Develop interviewing techniques by talking to new people.

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Class 3

Feb. 4, 2015

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Opener • Image A

Image B

Class ♯3 • 2/4/15

Take out a piece of paper and answer the

following questions.

1. What is often referred to as a “rough draft of history?”

2. Give 3 examples of what makes something newsworthy to you.

3. What is a name of a local newspaper?

4. Name two current event (news) items.

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Opener • Image A

Image B

Class ♯3 • 2/4/15

Take out a piece of paper and answer the

following questions.

1.What is often referred to as a “rough draft of history?”

– News

2.Give 3 examples of what makes something newsworthy to you.

3.What is a name of a local newspaper?

4.Name two current event (news) items.

1. Proximity2. Timeliness3. Prominence4. Consequence5. Change / Progress /

Action6. Concreteness7. Personality /

Human Interest

8. Rarity / Singularity (uniqueness)

9. Conflict

• University of Oregon student has been diagnosed with meningococcemia

• Vaccines, measles• Taiwan plane crash kills 48 and

injures 10• Jordan executes prisoners after ISIS

hostage burned alive• 7 dead, multiple injuries as train

strikes SUV in N.Y.

1. The Oregonian2. Portland Tribune 3. Clackamas County Review4. The Columbian5. The Statesman Journal6. The Gresham Outlook

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Agenda Targets

Class 3 • Feb. 4

• Opener

• Pretest

• Icebreaker “Interview” activity

• Class web page(s)– http://www.nclack.k12.or.us/Page/5742

• News writing basics– http://www.nclack.k12.or.us/Page/25354

• Understand why news is often called the first draft of history.

• Learn how news is reported and accessed.

• Develop better understanding for how news is categorized.

• Identify current events.

• Learn parts of basic news story.

• Communicate current knowledge of journalism.Slide

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Pretest

• Go to class website

• Go to Tests & Quizzes page

• Click on http://socrative.com/

• Choose student

• Enter Room Number

• Sign in – Last name, first

name

http://socrative.com/

Room: 296186

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Socrative Student Logon

296186

Sign in usingLast name, first name

Example: Stratton, Lorraine

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Journalism Basics

• http://www.nclack.k12.or.us/Page/25354

1. Principles of Journalism

2. Basic reporting, news writing, journalistic style

A reporter's jobI. Interviews

II. Writing

A. Write in third person

B. Write without bias

C. The Story

1) Shape

2) Components & Order

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Class 4

Feb. 6, 2015

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Opener • Image A

Image B

Class ♯3 • 2/4/15

Take out a piece of paper and answer the

following questions.

1. Name two local news outlets other than The Oregonian.

2. What type of journalism story interests you the most?

3. Name two current event items.

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Agenda Targets

Class 4 • Feb. 6

• Opener

• Seating Chart

• Discuss – News outlets

– Newsworthiness

• Class web page(s)– http://www.nclack.k12.or.us/Page/5742

– Location, content

Homework

• News writing basics– http://www.nclack.k12.or.us/Page/25354

– Finish reading

• Examining a News Story

• Understand why news is often called the first draft of history.

• Learn how news is reported and accessed.

• Develop better understanding for how news is categorized.

• Identify current events.

• Learn parts of basic news story.

• Communicate current knowledge of journalism.Slide

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Class 5

Feb. 10, 2015

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Opener •

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Class ♯5 • 2/10/15

Take out a piece of paper and answer the

following questions.

1. What is the shape of a typical/traditional news story?

2. Why is this the shape?

3. Name two current event items.

The Oregonian

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Portland Tribune

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Statesman Journal

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KATU

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KOIN

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KGW

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KPTV

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Agenda Targets

Class 5 • Feb. 10

• Opener

• Pretest discussion

• Icebreaker “Interview” activity

• News writing basics– http://www.nclack.k12.or.us/Page/25

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– Go over “Examining a News Story”

• Understand why news is often called the first draft of history.

• Learn how news is reported and accessed.

• Develop better understanding for how news is categorized.

• Identify current events.

• Learn parts of basic news story.

• Communicate current knowledge of journalism.Slide

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Class 6

Feb. 12, 2015

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Opener •

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Class ♯6 • 2/12/15

Take out a piece of paper and answer the

following questions.

1. What is the shape of a typical news story?

2. What is a cutoff test?

3. Why are news stories constructed with the most important facts first and the least important information toward the bottom of a story?

4. Name two current events and state why they are important.

International News Source

Agenda Targets

Class 6 • Feb. 12

• Opener– Composition book

• News writing basics– http://www.nclack.k12.or.us/Page/25

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• See next slide

• Understand why news is often called the first draft of history.

• Learn how news is reported and accessed.

• Develop better understanding for how news is categorized.

• Identify current events.

• Learn parts of basic news story.

• Communicate current knowledge of journalism.Slide

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Journalism Basics

“Examining a News Story” Assignment• Ledes

– Length (<30 words)– What are they; who,

what

• Nut Graf– Length (<50-75 words)– What are they; 5W’s+H

not in lede

• Rest of ¶– Length

• <75 words• 100 words is a long ¶ in

journalism

• Journalistic writing short & concise

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Class 7

Feb. 17, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯7 • 2/17/15

Take out a piece of paper and answer the

following questions.

1. What is the basic news style called?

2. What is an attribution?

3. What is the point of view news stories are written from?

4. Name two current events and state why they are important.

Agenda Targets

Class 7 • Feb. 17

• Opener– Composition book for

openers

• News writing basics

– News Style

• Stylebook– AP

– Ours

• Codes

• Attribution

• Understand why news is often called the first draft of history.

• Learn how news is reported and accessed.

• Develop better understanding for how news is categorized.

• Identify current events.

• Learn parts of basic news story.

• Communicate current knowledge of journalism.Slide

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Journalism Basics

“Examining a News Story” Assignment• Ledes

– Length (<30 words)– What are they; who,

what

• Nut Graf– Length (<50-75 words)– What are they; 5W’s+H

not in lede

• Rest of ¶– Length

• <75 words• 100 words is a long ¶ in

journalism

• Journalistic writing short & concise

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Stylebooks• Purpose: keep writing

consistent• We use modified OJEA

Stylebook• Codes• Webpage

http://www.nclack.k12.or.us/Page/5755

• C10, C14, C24• D1, D2, D4• E10, E36• F1, F2• G1, G2, G3, G6• Attribution Style

– “Quote,” First Last, Id, said.

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Attribution Style

Direct Quote

First Reference• “We have had a long history of community involvement in

the industry,” Claudia Steinberg, TriMet chief of the service department, said. “There are citizen and employer groups, businesses, and representatives from all areas of the city getting together to help draft designs and get the job done.”

Second Reference • “A lot had to go into this. We had to think about who are we

serving, where are the most traveled places, what is the ridership potential and what will the costs and schedules look like,” Steinberg said.

Indirect Quote

First Reference

• TriMet has had a long history of community involvement in the industry, Claudia Steinberg, TriMet chief of the community service department, said. There are citizen and employer groups, businesses and representatives from all locations helping draft designs and get the job done.

Second Reference

• A lot went into this. We had to consider who are we serving, where are the most traveled places, what is the ridership potential and what will the costs and schedules look like Steinberg said.

Paraphrase

First Reference

• TriMet has a lengthy history of involving the community, Claudia Steinberg, TriMet chief of the community service department, said. There are variety of groups helping with the creation of the Milwaukie light rail line.

Second Reference

• Consideration had to be given to how people will potentially use the light rail spur. Costs and schedules also had to be taken into account Steinberg said.

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First Reference • TriMet has had a long history of “community

involvement in the industry,” Claudia Steinberg, TriMet chief of the community service department, said. Groups are comprised of “citizen and employer groups, businesses and representatives” from through out the region helping to facilitate the creation of the Milwaukie light rail line.

Second Reference • “A lot went into this,” Steinberg said.

Consideration for “who are we serving,” where they are traveling, “the ridership potential” and what the costs and schedules will look like.

Class 8

Feb. 19, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯8 • 2/19/15

Take out your composition book and answer the following questions.

1. What is the purpose of a stylebook?

2. What is an attribution?

3. Which word does a journalists use when giving attribution?

4. Which type of quote uses the writer’s words & the source’s words in quotation marks?

5. Name two current events and state why they are important.

Agenda Targets

Class 8 • Feb. 19

• Opener– Composition book for

openers

• News writing basics

– Ledes & Leads

• Short <30 words (35 is long)

• Contains

– Who & What

– May have other 5W’s

– $$$ usually

• Identify current events

• Understand importance of ledes.

• Learn what is included in a lede.

• Learn the steps in which ledes are written.

• Begin to identify facts to use in a lede.

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Lede Rules• Short paragraph, generally one sentence

• Less than 30 words (35 is too many)

• Should first verb should express the main "what" of the story and should be placed among the lede's first seven words.

• The lede's first verb — the same one that expresses the main "what" of the story — should be active voice, not passive voice.

• If there's a "who" involved in the story, the lede should give some indication of who the "who" is.

• The lede should summarize the "why" and "how" of the story, but only if there's room.

• If what's in the lede needs to be attributed, place the attribution at the end of the lede.

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Writing a News Lede: Steps

1. Find the most important (key) thought (fact).

2. Number the order of thoughts from most important to least.

3. Include the what and who into the lede.

4. Include any significant amounts into lede. Remember people want to know about money.

5. Place the most important facts first while writing.

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Ledes & Nut Grafs Unit Due Dates

Due Date Worksheet

2/23 end of class Selecting Facts for Ledes —PDFForm

2/25 beginning of class

Ledes Worksheet (Must be typed, attach webpage printout)

2/25 end of class Fairy Tales Do Come True

2/27 beginning of class

Leads: Using What? Who? (Must be typed)

2/27 end of class Leads: Using When? Where? Why? And Who? (Must be typed)

3/3 Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 1 (Must be typed)

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Class 9

Feb. 23, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯9 • 2/23/15

Take out your composition book and

answer the following questions.

1. What is an attribution?

2. Which word does a journalists use when giving attribution?

3. What is the purpose of a lede?

4. Name two current events and state why they are important.

Agenda Targets

Class 9 • Feb. 23

• Opener– Composition book for

openers

• Lede Writing

– Identifying key facts for ledes

– Fairy Tales do Come True Ledes

• Identify current events

• Understand importance of ledes.

• Learn what is included in a lede.

• Learn the steps in which ledes are written.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede.

• Learn how to use a PDF form.

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Ledes & Nut Grafs Unit Due Dates

Due Date Worksheet

2/23 end of class Selecting Facts for Ledes —PDFForm

2/25 beginning of class

Ledes Worksheet (Must be typed, attach webpage printout)

2/25 end of class Fairy Tales Do Come True

2/27 beginning of class

Leads: Using What? Who? (Must be typed)

2/27 end of class Leads: Using When? Where? Why? And Who? (Must be typed)

3/3 Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 1 (Must be typed)

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Handing in Typed Assignments

• Use Minion Pro Medium

14 pts. font.• Must have header with

– Page number (insert Page X of Y, rt. justified)

– Name– Slug (assignment name)– Date– Period

• Must be double spaced• Must leave room at top of

first page for comments.

Name

Slug (assignment name)

Date

Period

Page 1 of 1

Start assignment/story here. Use Minion Pro Medium size 14 font . Be sure to double

space story copy. Write paragraphs in block from putting an extra return between each

paragraph.

Remember to use short and concise sentiments. Use colorful quotes with proper

attributes. Don’t forget all attributions are in past tense. The very best attribution term to

use is the word said. Attributions should come after information. Every opinion must be

attributed. When you introduce a new source change to a new p aragraph.

Write clear transitions connecting quotes and adding to the story flow. Think as

transitions as road signs pointing the way for readers to follow .

Start copy ⅓ of way down page to allow for comments to be

written in by editors and/or advisor.

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Writing Problems — Style ErrorsD1 — First reference, identify respondent by a person’s title, class or

position. Use only one identification in sports.

D4 — Full name first reference, last name there after.

D5 —When necessary to mention people w/ same last names in same story, distinguish between the two by using full names throughout. Use pronouns or other identification when appropriate. Some exceptions.

E10 — No comma after conjunctions in a series.

F1 — Avoid starting sentences with figures. If absolutely necessary write out number.

F2 — Zero through nine written out, 10+ written as figures.

G1 — All statements of opinion or fact not generally available or known must be attributed to someone Opinions without attribution. Opinions can be in quotes, but not in writing (writer’s opinion).

G2 — Omit the word “that” when its absence will not affect the reader’s understanding of the statement.

G3 — Use third person pronouns, except in direct quotes.

• Avoid all other use of; you, we, us, I, etc.

• Except in an occasional special feature or column.

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Class 10

Feb. 25, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯10 • 2/25/15

Take out your composition book and

answer the following questions.

1. Which of the 5Ws+H is best to put in a lede?

2. What is the purpose of a lede?

3. Name two current events and state why they are important.

Agenda Targets

Class 9 • Feb. 25

• Opener– Composition book for

openers

• Lede Writing

– Identifying key facts for ledes

– Fairy Tales do Come True Ledes

• Identify current events

• Learn what is included in a lede.

• Learn the steps in which ledes are written.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede.

• Learn how to use a PDF form.

• Learn how to create a header in Word.

• Learn how to format story for class. Slide

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Ledes & Nut Grafs Unit Due Dates

Due Date Worksheet

2/23 end of class Selecting Facts for Ledes —PDFForm

2/25 beginning of class

Ledes Worksheet (Must be typed, attach webpage printout)

2/25 end of class Fairy Tales Do Come True

2/27 beginning of class

Leads: Using What? Who? (Must be typed)

2/27 end of class Leads: Using When? Where? Why? And Who? (Must be typed)

3/3 Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 1 (Must be typed)

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Handing in Typed Assignments

• Use Minion Pro Medium

14 pts. font.• Must have header with

– Page number (insert Page X of Y, rt. justified)

– Name– Slug (assignment name)– Date– Period

• Must be double spaced• Must leave room at top of

first page for comments.

Name

Slug (assignment name)

Date

Period

Page 1 of 1

Start assignment/story here. Use Minion Pro Medium size 14 font . Be sure to double

space story copy. Write paragraphs in block from putting an extra return between each

paragraph.

Remember to use short and concise sentiments. Use colorful quotes with proper

attributes. Don’t forget all attributions are in past tense. The very best attribution term to

use is the word said. Attributions should come after information. Every opinion must be

attributed. When you introduce a new source change to a new p aragraph.

Write clear transitions connecting quotes and adding to the story flow. Think as

transitions as road signs pointing the way for readers to follow .

Start copy ⅓ of way down page to allow for comments to be

written in by editors and/or advisor.

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Class 10

Feb. 25, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯11 • 2/27/15

Take out your composition book and

answer the following questions.

1. Which of the 5Ws+H is best to put in a lede?

2. What is the second paragraph of a story called?

3. What is a news aggregator?

4. Name two current events and state why they are important.

Agenda Targets

Class 9 • Feb. 25

• Opener– Composition book for

openers

• Lede Writing

– Identifying key facts for ledes

– Fairy Tales do Come True Ledes

• Identify current events

• Learn what a news aggregator is.

• Learn what is included in a lede.

• Learn the steps in which ledesare written.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede.

• Learn how to create a header in Word.

• Learn how to format story for class.

• Create/write a lede.Slide

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Ledes & Nut Grafs Unit Due Dates

Due Date Worksheet

2/23 end of class Selecting Facts for Ledes —PDFForm

2/25 beginning of class

Ledes Worksheet (Must be typed, attach webpage printout)

2/27 beginning of class

Fairy Tales Do Come True

2/27 end of class Leads: Using What? Who? (Must be typed)

2/27 end of class Leads: Using When? Where? Why? And Who? (Must be typed)

3/3 Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 1 (Must be typed) Slide 71

Handing in Typed Assignments

• Use Minion Pro Medium

14 pts. font.• Must have header with

– Page number (insert Page X of Y, rt. justified)

– Name– Slug (assignment name)– Date– Period

• Must be double spaced• Must leave room at top of

first page for comments.

Name

Slug (assignment name)

Date

Period

Page 1 of 1

Start assignment/story here. Use Minion Pro Medium size 14 font . Be sure to double

space story copy. Write paragraphs in block from putting an extra return between each

paragraph.

Remember to use short and concise sentiments. Use colorful quotes with proper

attributes. Don’t forget all attributions are in past tense. The very best attribution term to

use is the word said. Attributions should come after information. Every opinion must be

attributed. When you introduce a new source change to a new p aragraph.

Write clear transitions connecting quotes and adding to the story flow. Think as

transitions as road signs pointing the way for readers to follow .

Start copy ⅓ of way down page to allow for comments to be

written in by editors and/or advisor.

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Class 12

March 3, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯12 • 3/3/15

Take out your composition book and

answer the following questions.

1. How many words are there in a lede?

2. Which of the basic 5W+H is best to use in a lede?

3. Why is a summary lede used in the majority news stories?

4. Name two current events and state why they are important.

Agenda Targets

Class 12 • March 3

• Opener– Composition book for

openers

• Lede Writing– Fairy Tales do Come

True Ledes• Example

– Leads: Using What? Who? (Must be typed) • Now homework

– Leads: Using When? Where? Why? And Who? • Now next class

• Identify current events

• Learn what a news aggregator is.

• Learn what is included in a lede.

• Learn the steps in which ledesare written.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede.

• Learn how to create a header in Word.

• Learn how to format story for class.

• Create/write a lede.Slide

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Fairy Tales do Come True Ledes ExampleThe Elves and the ShoemakerJo was a shoemaker who lived with his wife Margaret. They were very poor. One day, there was no more leather left. Jo had no more material to make shoes. Hungry and miserable, they went to bed.When they woke up the next day, Jo and Margaret found a shining pair of beautiful shoes. They wondered where these shoes had come from. A man, who was passing by, saw the shining shoes and bought them at a good price. Jo was very happy. Margaret and Jo had a hearty meal that night. The next morning, when Jo went to his work shed, he saw another pair of new shiny shoes. He told his wife the good news. Margaret was surprised and happy but very puzzled. The two decided to keep a watch that night to find out who was being so kind to them.In the middle of the night, when everybody else was asleep, Jo and Margaret waited secretly in the working shed. At midnight, they saw two elves! The elves were deep in their work, making shoes for them. By morning, they had made many new shoes. Jo and Margaret were filled with gratitude. When they saw the elves had nothing to wear they decided to make new, warm clothes for them as winter was approaching. They kept their gift in the work shed the next night and hid behind the door. At midnight, the elves came again and saw the beautiful, tiny clothes. The elves were so happy with their new clothes that they sang and danced all night. They now knew that Jo the shoemaker and his wife no longer needed their help, and

went away to help someone else in need.

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Fairy Tales do Come True Ledes Example:The Elves and the Shoemaker

Jo was a shoemaker who lived with his wife Margaret. They were very poor. One day, there was no more leather left. Jo had no more material to make shoes. Hungry and miserable, they went to bed.

When they woke up the next day, Jo and Margaret found a shining pair of beautiful shoes. They wondered where these shoes had come from. A man, who was passing by, saw the shining shoes and bought them at a good price. Jo was very happy. Margaret and Jo had a hearty meal that night.

The next morning, when Jo went to his work shed, he saw another pair of new shiny shoes. He told his wife the good news. Margaret was surprised and happy but very puzzled. The two decided to keep a watch that night to find out who was being so kind to them.

In the middle of the night, when everybody else was asleep, Jo and Margaret waited secretly in the working shed. At midnight, they saw two elves! The elves were deep in their work, making shoes for them. By morning, they had made many new shoes. Jo and Margaret were filled with gratitude.

When they saw the elves had nothing to wear they decided to make new, warm clothes for them as winter was approaching. They kept their gift in the work shed the next night and hid behind the door. At midnight, the elves came again and saw the beautiful, tiny clothes.

The elves were so happy with their new clothes that they sang and danced all night. They now knew that Jo the shoemaker and his wife no longer needed their help, and went away

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Day 1

Day 2

Day 3

Fairy Tales do Come True Ledes Example:The Elves and the Shoemaker

Version I

A series of break-ins have occurred in local business resulting in unexpected windfall for owners. (14 words)

Version II

A series of break-ins transpired in local business resulting in surprising windfall. (14 words)

Version III

In an unexpected breaking and entering twist local business owners thank culprits for their work. (15 words)

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Jo was a shoemaker who lived with his wife Margaret. They were very poor. One day, there was no more leather left. Jo had no more material to make shoes. Hungry and miserable, they went to bed.

When they woke up the next day, Jo and Margaret found a shining pair of beautiful shoes. They wondered where these shoes had come from. A man, who was passing by, saw the shining shoes and bought them at a good price. Jo was very happy. Margaret and Jo had a hearty meal that night.

The next morning, when Jo went to his work shed, he saw another pair of new shiny shoes. He told his wife the good news. Margaret was surprised and happy but very puzzled. The two decided to keep a watch that night to find out who was being so kind to them.

In the middle of the night, when everybody else was asleep, Jo and Margaret waited secretly in the working shed. At midnight, they saw two elves! The elves were deep in their work, making shoes for them. By morning, they had made many new shoes. Jo and Margaret were filled with gratitude.

When they saw the elves had nothing to wear they decided to make new, warm clothes for them as winter was approaching. They kept their gift in the work shed the next night and hid behind the door. At midnight, the elves came again and saw the beautiful, tiny clothes.

The elves were so happy with their new clothes that they sang and danced all night. They now knew that Jo the shoemaker and his wife no longer needed their help, and went away to help

someone else in need.

Fairy Tales do Come True Ledes Example:The Elves and the Shoemaker

Nut Graf

Two mornings this week business owners Jo and Margaret Shoemaker opened their work shed to find the last scrapes of raw materials left on a workbench missing replaced by pairs of newly crafted shoes.

The following night the Shoemakers saw the culprits responsible, a pair of poorly dressed elves, “deep in their work, making shoes” J. Shoemaker said.

In an unexpected breaking and entering twist the Shoemakers decided to sew new clothing for the break-in culprits as a thank-you for their work M. Shoemaker said.

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The Elves and the ShoemakerJo was a shoemaker who lived with his wife Margaret. They were very poor. One day, there was no more leather left. Jo had no more material to make shoes. Hungry and miserable, they went to bed.

When they woke up the next day, Jo and Margaret found a shining pair of beautiful shoes. They wondered where these shoes had come from. A man, who was passing by, saw the shining shoes and bought them at a good price. Jo was very happy. Margaret and Jo had a hearty meal that night.

The next morning, when Jo went to his work shed, he saw another pair of new shiny shoes. He told his wife the good news. Margaret was surprised and happy but very puzzled. The two decided to keep a watch that night to find out who was being so kind to them.

In the middle of the night, when everybody else was asleep, Jo and Margaret waited secretly in the working shed. At midnight, they saw two elves! The elves were deep in their work, making shoes for them. By morning, they had made many new shoes. Jo and Margaret were filled with gratitude.

When they saw the elves had nothing to wear they decided to make new, warm clothes for them as winter was approaching. They kept their gift in the work shed the next night and hid behind the door. At midnight, the elves came again and saw the beautiful, tiny clothes.

The elves were so happy with their new clothes that they sang and danced all night. They now knew that Jo the shoemaker and his wife no longer needed their help, and went away to

help someone else in need.

Ledes & Nut Grafs Unit Due Dates

Due Date Worksheet

2/23 end of class Selecting Facts for Ledes —PDFForm

2/25 beginning of class

Ledes Worksheet (Must be typed, attach webpage printout)

2/27 beginning of class

Fairy Tales Do Come True

3/5 Homeworkof class (lockdown)

Leads: Using What? Who? (Must be typed)

3/5 beginning of class

Leads: Using When? Where? Why? And Who? (Must be typed)

3/5 end of class Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 1 (Must be typed)

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Writing Problems — Style ErrorsD1 — First reference, identify respondent by a person’s title, class or

position. Use only one identification in sports.

D4 — Full name first reference, last name there after.

D5 —When necessary to mention people w/ same last names in same story, distinguish between the two by using full names throughout. Use pronouns or other identification when appropriate. Some exceptions.

E10 — No comma after conjunctions in a series.

F1 — Avoid starting sentences with figures. If absolutely necessary write out number.

F2 — Zero through nine written out, 10+ written as figures.

G1 — All statements of opinion or fact not generally available or known must be attributed to someone Opinions without attribution. Opinions can be in quotes, but not in writing (writer’s opinion).

G2 — Omit the word “that” when its absence will not affect the reader’s understanding of the statement.

G3 — Use third person pronouns, except in direct quotes.

• Avoid all other use of; you, we, us, I, etc.

• Except in an occasional special feature or column.

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Class 13

March 5, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯13 • 3/5/15

Take out your composition book

and answer the following questions.

1. Write a summary lede using “What” as the style using Facts A.

Note: You are writing story for The Compass, student news website.

2. Name two current events and state why they are important.

a. One local CE

b. one World CE.

Facts A

1. SSC lock down 3 hours

2. Car stolen from CarMax

3. Woman had automatic weapon

4. Last seen headed walking down Johnson Rd.

5. Crashed car into power pole at intersection of OR Hwy 224 & Johnson Rd.

6. Power out at SSC hampered lockdown communications

7. Source Milwaukie police & Sgt. Nathan Thompson, Clackamas County Sheriff's Office spokesman

Agenda Targets

Class 13 • March 5

• Opener– Composition book for

openers

• Lede Writing– Leads: Using What?

Who? (Must be typed) Turn in now, beginning class

– Leads: Using When? Where? Why? And How? Turn in end of class

• Identify current events

• Learn what a news aggregator is.

• Learn what is included in a lede.

• Learn the steps in which ledesare written.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede.

• Learn how to create a header in Word.

• Learn how to format story for class.

• Create/write a lede.Slide

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Ledes & Nut Grafs Unit Due Dates

Due Date Worksheet

2/23 end of class Selecting Facts for Ledes —PDFForm

2/25 beginning of class

Ledes Worksheet (Must be typed, attach webpage printout)

2/27 beginning of class

Fairy Tales Do Come True

3/5 Homeworkof class (lockdown)

Leads: Using What? Who? (Must be typed)

3/5 beginning of class

Leads: Using When? Where? Why? And Who? (Must be typed)

3/9 end of class Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 1 (Must be typed)

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Class 14

March 9, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯14 • 3/9/15

Take out your composition book

and answer the following questions.

1. Write a summary lede using “What” as the style Facts A.

Note: You are writing story for The Compass, student news website.

2. Name two current events and state why they are important.

a. One local CE

b. one World CE.

Facts A

• OR employment rate drop to 6.3

• July 2008 last time this low

• Source The Oregon

Employment Department

• Announced Tuesday

• Rate for January 2015

• Dec. 2014 rate 6.7

• Oregon jobs base expanded by

est. 7,600 jobs

• PDX jobless rate 6.5 Dec. 2014

• Oregon jobless level higher than

national avg. 5.7

Agenda Targets

Class 14 • March 9

• Opener– Composition book for

openers

• Nut Graf Writing

– Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 1 (Must be typed)

• Identify current events

• Learn differences between ledes & nut grafs.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede & nut graf.

• Create/write a lede & nut graf.

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What Nut Grafs Do

• The nut graf tells the reader what the writer is up to.

• It delivers a promise of the story’s content and message.

• It’s called the nut graf because, like a nut, it contains the “kernel,” or essential theme, of the story.

— Chip Scanian, Poynter.org

—Leigh Ann Otte

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What Nut Grafs Are

• It's the paragraph telling what the story’s about, so people know why to keep reading—and whether they want to. It’s usually the second paragraph.

• It can, however, be combined with the lede, come a bit later or be longer.

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Nut Graf

• The nut graf is where the story’s angle is developed.

• Every story is described from some kind of view point.

• This viewpoint is called the angle.

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Nut Graf Purposes

• The nut graf has several purposes:

• It justifies the story by telling readers why they should care.

• It provides a transition from the lead and explains the lead and its connection to the rest of the story.

• It often tells readers why the story is timely.

• It often includes supporting material that helps readers see why the story is important.

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Class 15

March 11, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯15 • 3/11/15

Take out your composition book

and answer the following questions.

1. Write a summary lede using “Who” as the style for Facts A.

Note: You are writing story for The Compass, student news website.

2. Name two current events and state why they are important.

a. One local CE

b. one World CE.

Facts A

1. Lengthy battle with prostate cancer, family said.

2. Age 74

3. Former University of Oregon president 15 years

4. Oregon attorney general 1981-1991

5. Dave Frohnmayer

6. Died Monday night

KGW (NBC)

EUGENE, Ore. – The former University of Oregon president and Oregon attorney general Dave Frohnmayer passed away Monday night after a lengthy battle with prostate cancer, according to his family.

Frohnmayer was 74.

OregonLive

Dave Frohnmayer, who served as both a top elected official and the longtime president of the University of Oregon, has died at the age of 74.

The former Oregon attorney general and 1990 Republican nominee for governor had battled prostate cancer for the last 5½ years and recently underwent a round of chemotherapy, said former aide Marla Rae. She said he died quietly in his sleep Monday night at his home in Eugene.

KATU (ABC)

EUGENE, Ore. – Dave Frohnmayer, a dedicated servant to the state of Oregon, died overnight Monday, family members confirmed Tuesday morning.

He was 74 years old.

He battled prostate cancer for 5 1/2 years, his family said in a statement.

KPTV (FOX)

By The Associated Press

Dave Frohnmayer, a widely respected leader in Oregon politics and academics, has died at 74.

A statement from his family says Frohnmayer died Monday night after what it called "a quiet battle" for five years against prostate cancer.

Frohnmayer, a Republican, was a former attorney general, president of the University of Oregon and candidate for governor.

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Image B

Agenda Targets

Class 15 • March 11

• Opener– Composition book for

openers

• Nut Graf Writing– Collect Writing Ledes

& Nut Grafs Exercise 1

– Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 2 (Must be typed)

– Due next class

• Grades & rewrites

• Identify current events

• Learn differences between ledes & nut grafs.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede & nut graf.

• Create/write a lede & nut graf.

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Ledes & Nut Grafs Unit Due Dates

Due Date Worksheet

2/23 end of class Selecting Facts for Ledes —PDF Form2/25 beginning of class

Ledes Worksheet (Must be typed, attach webpage printout)

2/27 start of class Fairy Tales Do Come True

3/5 Homeworkof class (lockdown)

Leads: Using What? Who? (Must be typed)

3/5 start of class Leads: Using When? Where? Why? And Who? (Must be typed)

3/9 end of class Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 1 (typed)

3/11 Collect: Lede & Nut Graf Exercise 1Assign: Lede & Nut Graf Exercise 2

3/13 end of class Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 2 (typed)

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Class 16

March 13, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯16 • 3/13/15

Take out your composition book

and answer the following questions.

1. Write a summary lede using “What” as the style Facts A.

Note: You are writing story for The Compass, student news website.

2. Name two current events and state why they are important.

a. One local CE

b. one World CE.

Facts A

1. OR employment rate drop to

6.3

2. July 2008 last time this low

3. Source The Oregon

Employment Department

4. Announced Tuesday

5. Rate for January 2015

6. Dec. 2014 rate 6.7

7. Oregon jobs base expanded

by est. 7,600 jobs

8. PDX jobless rate 6.5 Dec. 2014

9. Oregon jobless level higher

than national avg. 5.7

Last Class Opener Notes• OR employment rate drop to

6.3

• July 2008 last time this low

• Source The Oregon Employment Department

• Announced Tuesday

• Rate for January 2015

• Dec. 2014 rate 6.7

• Oregon jobs base expanded by est. 7,600 jobs

• PDX jobless rate 6.5 Dec. 2014

• Oregon jobless level higher than national avg. 5.7

OREGON ANDTHE ECONOMY

Oregon unemployment rate drops to

6.3 percent, lowest level since July

2008

Questions surface over 'equal pay for

equal work' bills in Salem

Oregon lawmakers take up bills

aimed at closing the gender wage

gap

Oregon economy closes out 2014 by

expanding faster than normal, report

says

Looking for a job in Oregon? Try the

Stella Palmer talks with Timberline's Ralph Pesznecker at the Maximum Connection Job and Car eer Fair held at the World

Forestry Center in Portland Sept. 25, 2014. Palmer said she came back because of an impr oved job market. (Randy L.

Rasmussen/The Oregonian)

By Molly Young | The Oregonian/OregonLive

Email the author | Follow on Twitter

on March 03, 2015 at 10:00 AM

Oregon's unemployment rate fell in January to its lowest point in six-plus years, as

employers again added to their payrolls.

The Employment Department said Tuesday that the statewide jobless level dropped to 6.3

percent in the first month of 2015, compared to 6.7 percent during the final

month of 2014. The measure is now at its lowest level since July 2008, shortly

before the Great Recession.

At the same time, Oregon's jobs base expanded by an estimated 7,600 jobs, according to

the state. Its new hiring report is the first to encompass 2015.

State economists partially credited January's hiring influx the spring-like weather.

"January weather was unusually mild, which allowed many outdoor industries,

particularly construction, to keep more workers on the job than they might usually at this

time of year," the report said.

Contractors gained 1,400 jobs that month, after adjusting for seasonal factors. But it was

Oregon unemployment rate drops to 6.3 percent, lowest level since July 2008

Oregon unemployment rate drops to 6.3 percent, lowestlevel since July 2008

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Last Class Opener NotesOregon's unemployment rate fell in January to its lowest point in six-plus years, as employers again added to their payrolls.

The Employment Department said Tuesday that the statewide jobless level dropped to 6.3 percent in the first month of 2015, compared to 6.7 percent during the finalmonth of 2014. The measure is now at its lowest level since July 2008, shortly before the Great Recession.

At the same time, Oregon's jobs base expanded by an estimated 7,600 jobs, according to the state. Its new hiring report is the first to encompass 2015.

State economists partially credited January's hiring influx the spring-like weather. "January weather was unusually mild, which allowed many outdoor industries, particularly construction, to keep more workers on the job than they might usually at this time of year," the report said.

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What

Agenda Targets

Class 16 • March 13

• Opener– Composition book for

openers

• Nut Graf Writing

– Collect end of period

– Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 2 (Must be typed)

• Grades & rewrites

• Identify current events

• Learn differences between ledes & nut grafs.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede & nut graf.

• Create/write a lede & nut graf.

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Class 17

March 17, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯17 • 3/17/15

Take out your composition book and answer the following questions.

1. Write a summary lede using “What” as the style Facts A.

Note: You are writing story for The Compass, student news website.

2. Name two current events and state why they are important.

a. One local CE

b. one World CE.

Facts A

1. Windstorm knocks out power.

2. Monday Per. 3 trees blow down at MHS

3. Power lines down across 23rd st., Milwaukie

4. 2 students trapped in car crushed by tree on 23rd parking lot.

5. Wires down across road.

6. Fire crews rescued with jaws of life Fire Chief said.

7. Crews so busy can’t restore power until Thursday afternoon PGE said.

8. 8 cars damaged

9. Mark Pinder, Princpal, said school canceled for rest of week for students, teachers work on Friday.

10. Students are banned from cars according to school rules.

Open Lede Examples1. Windstorm knocks out power.

2. Monday Per. 3 trees blow down at MHS

3. Power lines down across 23rd st., Milwaukie

4. 2 students trapped in car crushed by tree on 23rd parking lot.

5. Wires down across road.

6. Fire crews rescued with jaws of life Fire Chief said.

7. Crews so busy can’t restore power until Thursday afternoon PGE said.

8. 8 cars damaged

9. Mark Pinder, Princpal, said school canceled for rest of week for students, teachers work on Friday.

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Opener Ledes ExamplesLedes

• Spring Break came early for MHS students after

windstorm fells trees and power lines on cars trapping

two students and forcing school officials to close school.

(23)

• Fallen trees and power lines trapped two students and

caused power outage at MHS Monday during Period 3.

(18)

• Spring break came early for MHS students after fallen

trees crushed eight cars trapping two students and down

power lines caused power outage at MHS Monday

afternoon. (27)

Opener Lede & Nut Graf Examples

Lede

• Spring break came early for MHS students after fallen trees crushed eight cars trapping two students and down power lines caused power outage at MHS Monday afternoon. (27)

Nut Graf

• Students with minor injuries were removed from cars by fire rescue using the Jaws of Life®. The cars were parked in the 23rd street parking lot in front of the school during third period when the wind gusts blew down the trees and power. (44)

• School officials closed MHS for the rest of the week after PGE said they could not restore power until Thursday. Spring Break was due to start on Friday for students. Teachers will still need to report on Friday. (38)

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Agenda Targets

Class 17 • March 17

• Opener– Composition book for

openers

• Nut Graf Writing

– Collect end of period

– Writing Ledes & Nut Grafs Exercise 2 (Must be typed)

• Grades & rewrites

• Identify current events

• Learn differences between ledes & nut grafs.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede & nut graf.

• Create/write a lede & nut graf.

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Writing Ledes & Nut Graf Ex. 1 Notes

1. Death from falla. City College freshmanb. City College Madison Hall is a dormitoryc. Fourth-floor window

2. Hiring Workersa. Big story more applicants than jobs 2,000 > 300b. Think about how many seeking employmentc. No longer taking applications

3. School Openinga. Dates

1. C11 Months longer than 5 letters abbreviate when followed by date — Aug. 24 or Sept. 2

2. Never abbreviate days of the week.3. Capitalize K in K-12 it stands for kindergarten

Class 18

March 19, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯18 • 3/19/15

Take out your composition book and answer the following questions.

1. How many words in a lede?

2. What is the length of a standard paragraph in journalistic writing?

3. Name two kinds of quotes.

Note: You are writing story for The Compass, student news website.

4. Name two current events and state why they are important.

a. One local CE

b. one World CE.

Quotes

ARE THE

STORY

Agenda Targets

Class 18 • March 19

• Opener– Collect Composition Book for

openers

• Quiz – Ledes & Nut Grafs– Week after Spring

Break

• Workday– Work on any

assignment not turned in

– Rewrite returned work as needed

• Grades

• Identify current events

• Learn differences between ledes & nut grafs.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede & nut graf.

• Create/write a lede & nut graf.

• Work on journalistic editing skills.

• Revise writing to better fit journalistic style.

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Class 20

April 2, 2015

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Opener • Class ♯20 • 4/02/15

Take out your composition book and answer the following

questions.

1. What is the correct attribution term

2. Name two elements of the 9 elements of news.

Note: You are writing story for The Compass, student news website.

4. Name two current events and state why they are important.

a. One local CE

b. one World CE.

Agenda Targets

Class 20 • April 2

• Opener– Collect Composition Book

for openers

• Quarter Test

– Ledes & Nut Grafs

– Journalism Basics

• Workday

• Identify current events

• Learn differences between ledes & nut grafs.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede & nut graf.

• Create/write a lede & nut graf.

• Work on journalistic editing skills.

• Revise writing to better fit journalistic style.

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Quarter Test

• Go to class website

• Go to Tests & Quizzes page

• Click on http://socrative.com/

• Choose student

• Enter Room Number

• Sign in – Last name, first

name

http://socrative.com/

Room: 296186

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Socrative Student Logon

296186

Sign in usingLast name, first name

Example: Stratton, Lorraine

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Class 21

April 6, 2015

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Opener • Image A

Image B

Class ♯21 • 4/06/15

Take out your composition book and

answer the following questions.

1. What is bias?

2. What makes a source an authority?

Note: You are writing story for The Compass, student news website.

4. Name two current events and state why they are important.

a. One local CE

b. one World CE.

Agenda Targets

Class 21 • March 19

• Opener

• Quarter Test

– Write Ledes & Nut Grafs

• Workday

• Identify current events

• Learn differences between ledes & nut grafs.

• Identify facts and the order in which to use them in a lede & nut graf.

• Create/write a lede & nut graf.

• Work on journalistic editing skills.

• Revise writing to better fit journalistic style.

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Class 22

April 8, 2015

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Opener •

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Class ♯22 • 4/08/15

Take out your composition book and answer

the following questions.

1. What is bias?

2. Define authority in regards to journalism sources.

4. Name two current events and state why they are important.

a. One local CE

b. one national CE.

Agenda Targets

Class 22 • April 8

• Opener

• Sources Worksheet– Use class Sources Webpage

– Type answers

– Return directions to front table when done

• Check Synergy

– Everything graded turned in Monday except Lede & Nut Graf Test

• Identify current events

• Learn about sources

• Understand ethics surrounding use of sources

• Understand journalism ethics codes

• Know what constitutes an authority when using a source

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