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Descriptive Essays
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Pretend you are a real estate agent and you must write a description of the piece of land above. Currently, you have the following information: This 1000 acre mostly wooded lot is for sale. Near the mountains. Some cleared land. Asking $100,000.
Make this more appealing to your clients.
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What is Description?Information presented that appeals to the
five senses.Lets others know what the experience of the
author wasNurse: What the burn looked likeArt: How the artist used line and colorChemistry: what a reaction looked or smelled
like
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How?Start with Research
Your experiencesSomething you learned about
List the senses involvedFind fantastic words for those sensesBe sure to use those words in your essay
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Why?Description is what the reader will rememberMakes something more or less appealingCreates the emotional response
Remember people are motivated by what they feel
We learn about what we care about. Make your reader care.
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Deciding on the Topic
First- Do you want to write about something you know about? Or something you want to learn about?
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Something you know aboutPros ConsYou should be familiar
with this alreadyYour background is solidYou may know where to
find researchPaper is likely to seem
“expert”“Easier”
Not much new to learnMay be hard to find
research that supports what you “know”
May be hard not to let your own feelings dominate
Easy to not explain enough
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Something NewPros ConsLearn something
interestingIdeas will be guided by
your research instead of “feelings”
More research (but this might be good)
You may not learn enough to seem like an “expert”
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ResearchRegardless of known or new, you must have
solid researchMinimum of 2 database resources
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Choose the Vantage PointWho is the narrator?What relationship does he/she have with the
subject?Why does this matter enough to explain?
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Choose the AudienceWho is listening?How much background do they have?Where are they from?Where will they read this?Why would they read it?
Whatever you choose- keep the audience consistent
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Organize the EssaySpatial Order
Make the journey sensible (inside out; top to bottom; focal point outward)
Stay consistentChronological
Beginning to end or end to beginningMost to least or Least to most
A Graphic Organizer or Outline is advisable
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The Rough DraftRead all of your informationThinkConsider your organizationDecide on the Controlling Idea or thesisFollowing your organization- write
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ConnotationFor each of the following give 5 words with
essentially the same meaningSmall childWomanCarWealthyFarmer
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Revision before Peer or Class EditingClear focusSentence varietyUse connotation to your advantageAction VerbsSensory wordsFix Grammar and Spelling errors
You want this to be as perfect as you can before others help you. Bring your best to the plate!
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Submit your best Rough DraftSubmit to turnitin.com
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Peer/ Class EditingConstructive CommentsHelp everybody get an AHints for what would helpTake it seriouslyDo not take it personally- they are just words-
your ideas are not the problem- we are only trying to make you more effective
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Final DraftNot a “neat” copy versus the “sloppy” copyLook at all of the comments from everybody.
Are there themes? Fix the common problems.
Errors in logistics, organization, or facts hold much more weight than grammar mistakes or typos
Perfect the wordingClean up mechanical errors
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FeedbackRead the feedbackRecognize the errorsNotice the strengthsWhat to improve
I will look for this in particular in the following paper.
It is the next step to being a better writer