AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback

Student Name: STANGHELLINI CarloBlog: http://carlostanghelliniasmedia.blogspot.com/

Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on blog

1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis

There is a lot of describing what we see but there is some analysis and some attempt to link affect on audience. Terminology used correctly, though more could have been written on mise-en-scene. Analysis of Citizen Kane is the strongest – clear and precise with good use of connotations. Back to the Future is also good in parts.

Yes

2. Genre AnalysisBrief but goo detail on genre with key themes, codes and conventions identified. Good use of images.

Yes

3. Target AudienceResearch has been done on typical TA with some use of statistical data used as evidence. Nice use of avatar to represent TA.

Yes

4. ScriptCompleted and formatted correctly. Good effective genre piece.

Yes

6. StoryboardGood and clear storyboard that shows some variety of shots and movement. Easy to follow. Tech detail included.

Yes

7. ShotlistVery detailed - includes shot type, location, sound, equipment and description.

Yes

8. Layouts – floor planClear plan for different settings. Detail on actor and camera movement.

Yes

9. LocationsNice detail on choice of location and how it will be used in production. Images included. You have managed to get some very striking rooms to film.

Yes

10.CostumesImages and detail on how costume reflects character and hint at narrative.

Yes

11.PropsGood detail on props and how they will be used in key scenes. Images included.

Yes

12.ActorsVery good detail on choice of actor, images included.

Yes

13.EquipmentImages and reasons for choice of equipment.

Yes

14.Production scheduleLots of good detail on shooting and editing to assist with production though could have had pre-production information.

Yes

Teachers comments

Carlo has fully completed his pre production for his course working at a proficient level. More detail needed on audience and genre. Work well presented.

All posts have been added to a good level with key features identified.

Mark out of 20: 13Teacher name: M Drummond Date: January 2016

Student action plan for improvement

Final mark out of 20: 15 Date: March 2016