Persuasive Writing: Documentary Review

Why? Huh? Why are we writing a movie review in commercial arts / horticuture /

environmental tech?Writing is important. Trust us. Speaking coherently is important. Trust us. The more clearly you can explain yourself, the better everyone understands you. Who doesn’t want to be understood? Whenever we can get you to WRITE, we will welcome the opportunity. With texting and email replacing traditional handwriting for many, even typing a paper seems out of style. It’s not. Trust us.

How is an ant guy supposed to teach me about motivation?Determining what and who motivates you will help make you a more well rounded individual.

Why? Huh? Why Lord of the Ants? Because E.O. Wilson is an inspiration to not only me, but to

thousands of people. It is not so much that he studies ants, it’s his passion and how he goes about it that is intriguing. It’s about where his passion has led him in life. Simply being true to ones own convictions can free you up in life.

Assignment

Write a 3 - 5 paragraph critical review of the documentary Lord Of The Ants.

Write at least a 3 paragraph essay about what or who motivates you in your life.

Prewriting Step One Audience Purpose Tone

Audience Everyone. Documentary lovers Anyone.

Purpose To evaluate the documentary and

to persuade your audience that your evaluation is valid and they should either see or avoid the documentary.

Tone Formal

(Please, no contractions)

Point of View

First Person Narrative or

Third Person Narrative

Prewriting Step Two View the documentary and take

notes. Be specific, recording scenes,

quotations, and detailed examples as you watch. Rewatch what you need to validate your point

Prewriting Step Three Evaluate the documentary

according to the five standard criteria. (Use the chart I give you in class.)

                                                                                  

Prewriting Step Four State your point clearly. It

should include: Your overall opinion An attempt to persuade readers

to either see or avoid the documentary.

Prewriting Step Five Gather and organize support that proves

your point, using one of the following methods of organization: Lead In (a one sentence *hook* to intrigue your

readers You give a brief description of the overall story the

film tells Back up your main opinion with specifics. Conclusion

Writing the First Draft Lead In (a one sentence *hook* to intrigue

your readers You give a brief description of the overall

story the film tells The body of your review backs up your

main opinion with specifics. Conclusion

               

Lead In A one sentence *hook* to intrigue your

readers into wanting to know more.

What film am I describing?

Four paranormal experts attempt to rid Manhattan of its supernatural ghost problems.

Body You give a brief description of the overall

story the film tells Use transitions between body paragraphs. Be sure to provide enough specific

evidence for each criterion-based reason.

Conclusion Restate your opinion. Urge readers to either see or

avoid the documentary. Bring your essay to a close

with a thought-provoking statement.