7/30/2019 Peers Assessment

1/11

WWW

Colour scheme is modern and sleek

Band name font is colourful and stands out

Zebra head conveys weirdness and relates to

Animal.

EBI

Something else on the panels, maybe a different

coloured zebra, like a light blue one.

Make the left panels writing smaller

Record label and small print needed.

WWW

Colour scheme carries across both products

Stars and date look clean and crisp

Simple and effective, the spacing between each section is good

EBI

NME and clash were the logos

Zebra head included?

7/30/2019 Peers Assessment

2/11

EBI

The barcode needs to be

on the back of the digipak.

EBI

The font

could be a

bit bolder.

WWW

I like the colour scheme, you could try editing the photos to look similar to the peachy

coloured background

WWW

The splatter is interesting and

creative

9 LEVEL 4

7/30/2019 Peers Assessment

3/11

WWW

-The colours in the title stand out really well

-the band image is good and fits in well with the colour

scheme

-Layout of back cover is really good as it displays the song

names well and clearly, simply and neatly.

EBI

-There was more colour or images on the top panels

-the t in the isn't lined up very well I don't think

-More colour in places

LEVEL4 9/10

WWW

-Bold band name stands out and grabs attention.

-Reviews are appropriate and fit in with the style and genre

-I like the font as it coveys the genre well

EBI

There was more continuity between the two pieces for example the same font used.

The logos of magazines were smaller

There was a central image maybe in the background or between band ti tle and reviews

LEVEL 3 7or 8/10

7/30/2019 Peers Assessment

4/11

WWW

Bright colour scheme works well

Flowers on back look good

3 panel image is great quality and looks interesting

EBI

Fonts were improved, look drawn

Bottom left panel looks odd with the wall

Gold font doesn't look nice

WWW

Colours work well

Fonts look good

It fits well with the album itself

EBI

A different image instead of the album cover

Border of the picture doesn't look good

Fonts don't stand out enough

7/30/2019 Peers Assessment

5/11

WWW

The tracks stand out well and fit into the messy genre

well.

EBI

There was something more going on in

these black pages.

EBI

The font would

look good in white

maybe

EBI

Needs an image in this space

WWW

Black and white colour

scheme works well.

8

WWW

- Interesting and different Presents idea.

-Blunt and bold, clear information

-Stars are the correct size, use of album cover in the poster shows exactly what the album looks like.

EBI

-Change the fonts a bit?

-Make the band name stand out a bit more

-If on your cover the album is called Zzzonked, it should say that that is the name of it on the poster.

9

7/30/2019 Peers Assessment

6/11

WWW

The panorama shot,

Colour scheme (orange white and black)

I like the arrangement of the back panel, track list looks good

EBI

Front needs something else, a bit plain and boring

A more extravagant font?

Panorama needs to be less segmented (it seems as if it is too split up)

WWW

Font fits with the album

Artist name stands out

EBI

I don't get the picture in the corner?

Way too simple, boring to look , needs an actual image

Maybe use the album cover as the picture instead of the current one?

7/30/2019 Peers Assessment

7/11

WWW

Black and white looks good throughout

Giant M is bold and grabs attention

Grainy background relates to trashy aspect of the bands style

EBI

Had some bright colours to bring it off the page

Band name on cover wasn't downwards

Left panel, font needs shrinking and add more thankyous

WWW

Its similar to album cover, so creates an overall image

Giant M stands out

EBI

Again, a bright colour could be used in moderation to bring it off the page

Magazines names were their logos

Font was shrunk, add record label and websites.

7/30/2019 Peers Assessment

8/11

WWW

Fonts stand out well against the black

Triangles are used well

Colour scheme is good

EBI

Triangle wasn't blurry

I don't understand the front cover that much

Add a record label

WWW

Triangle relates to album well

Its simple and gets the point across

Date and album name use good font, clear and clean

EBI

Triangle wasn't blurred

NME was its logo

Maybe one more review?

7/30/2019 Peers Assessment

9/11

WWW

Clean backgrounds

Good image that spans across all three panels

Font represents genre well

EBI

Picture was cut out better

The bottom left panel needs to be different, looks out of place

Make a more interesting background for the cover

WWW

Shot relates to the album

Font fits in well

Bottom text persuades reader

EBI

Stars needed shrinking down

Post-it not doesn't fit in well

Picture needs to be better quality

7/30/2019 Peers Assessment

10/11

WWWArms with writing convey the indie genre and style.

WWW Appropriate reviews, sizing's are all correct

WWWColour scheme is good, connotations of urban

EBIWriting was more central on the arms

EBI - Maybe a splash of colour

EBIInclude a noticeable sparrows logo or font to create a sense of

image.

WWW - Colour scheme is effective

WWW Fonts are blunt and stand out

WWWIF you can get a proper own image it would be really effective

EBI More going on in the top panels. More pictures

of band

EBI Maybe make the sparrows logo included on

the left panel in a smaller size.

EBIAdd a slight bit of colour onto it to make it

stand out more.

7/30/2019 Peers Assessment

11/11

WWW

Colours all match, looks modern

Font relates to band name

Star/space background also relates to band

EBI

The white background was silver like the poster

Something was happening in the middle panel

Perhaps some thankyous on left panel.

WWW

Looks modern and spacey, so fits with the band name/style

Triangle relates to album cover

Fonts used are really sleek and look professional

EBI

Used the magazine logos

Nothing else