Original War Poem

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Jenny Evans Ms. Gardner English 10H (2) 2 December 2014 Laying Down a Carpet The planes hover overhead, Waiting, anticipating, Watching like a mother Looking after her children. They attend all battles, Cheering on the participants With explosive enthusiasm. They lay down a carpet, Covering the splinters Of annihilated hopes and dreams, That encompasses all. They are unprejudiced, And smother everyone In their breathtaking embrace. They call out into the darkness, Like a beacon of hope, “Accept us with open arms, So that we can take the pain away. Accept us with open arms, So that we can save you all.”

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Poem that relates the horrors and atrocities of war through a hyperbola

Transcript of Original War Poem

Jenny EvansMs. GardnerEnglish 10H (2)2 December 2014

Laying Down a Carpet

The planes hover overhead,Waiting, anticipating,Watching like a motherLooking after her children.They attend all battles,Cheering on the participantsWith explosive enthusiasm.They lay down a carpet,Covering the splinters Of annihilated hopes and dreams,That encompasses all.They are unprejudiced,And smother everyoneIn their breathtaking embrace.They call out into the darkness,Like a beacon of hope,Accept us with open arms,So that we can take the pain away.Accept us with open arms,So that we can save you all.