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Must say, a captivating content with quite a decent coverage! Your presentation skills with simplicity of expression is very impressive! However, not sure whether highlighting was needed or not. You may consult other experts for this. Further, you could have worked more on analytical front. For example, you could have discussed socio-cultural differences in the use of Internet in different countries as a tool between government vs. people. Glaring example would be differences in influence of internet in mobilizing and motivating the crowd in U.S. (e.g. Occupy Wall Street movement, Snowden revelations, Anonymous movement etc.), middle east (Jasmine revolution, ongoing protests in Egypt which eventually overthrown Morsi, Syrian revolution etc.) and south-east Asian countries e.g. India, Pakistan and Bangladesh, where rarely do we see such an organized movement with a sustained motivation. This way, you could have added some fresh appeal to your content. Rest, introduction was good but conclusion could have been more appealing. Alignment Competence - Good! Context Competence - Good! Content Competence - Good! Language Competence - Very Good! Introduction Competence - Good! Structure-Presentation Competence - Excellent! Conclusion Competence - Average Total Marks - 130/250 AMIT SHEKHAR

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