About Shark Fin Soup

Self Assessment – writing targetsTarget Mark Comment

Write with appropriate structure and organization.

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It was pretty hard but I made it!

Use quality openings

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Middle.

Use paragraphs effectively

1 2 3 4 5

I used paragraphs.

Write with detail 1 2 3 4 5

I included a lot of detail.

Set out arguments and draw them to a conclusion effectively

1 2 3 4 5

I had loads of arguments.

Self Assessment – Speech Rubric

Self Assessment – Questionnaire 1. In what way(s) do you think you could have

improved the delivery of your speech? I could have practiced more because I didn’t practice very

much but otherwise it was pretty good.

2. After watching everyone’s speech, what were some things that stood out in your mind?

I noticed that everyone did much better and louder than the china speech.

3. How did you prepare for the speech?I was prepared pretty well though it was hard to practice so

my mum helped me a bit.

Self Assessment - Questionnaire4. What were two things that you think were

‘fantastic’ about your speech?What I think was great about my speech was that I spoke louder and

clearer than I thought I would

5. How do you feel about giving speeches?I feel really nervous about giving out speeches although it’s not

complicated to practice.

Peer Assessment

Peer Assessment

From Mr. Stanhope