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Mary Thompson (Max)
Professor Malcolm Campbell
English 1103
February 4th, 2015
We Are Not Anti-Man, We Are Feminists
Introduction and Overview
The feminist movement through the 20th and 21st century has brought many
rights to women such as voting and the fight for equal wage. Since feminism
surfaced, men have taken it as an anti-man campaign. I intended to explain what
feminism really is, what feminists are currently fighting for, and explain why this is
not a campaign to undermine men. I intend to examine what the word feminism
means in today’s society and how it influences young girls today. My goal is to show
that feminists aren’t anti-man; they are simply fighting for the equal rights.
Active feminist Emma Watson said, “Apparently I am among the ranks of
women whose expressions are seen as too strong, too aggressive, isolating, anti-men
and, unattractive.” Her article for the introduction of HerforShe campaign article
beautifully says what I believe many young women are thinking. She elegantly lays
out what society thinks of strong women who fight for equal rights and bravely
confesses “no country in the world can yet say they have achieved gender equality.”
While trying to appeal to men, Watson explains that men should also be allowed
individual rights such as being able to express their feelings without being called
weak. This article fully captures what I intend to capture in my Inquiry Project.
My research so far has consisted of mainly articles: Time Magazine, New York
Time, and UN Women being among the many. I feel that articles really capture the
different points of view on this controversial issue and encompass the real thinking
of society today and how feminism affects all of us. I have also talked to both my
male and female friends about this topic. I have learned that when you bring up the
word feminism, males usually role their eyes and stop the conversation there. Most
men don’t realize the way women feel in society today having lesser rights, most
women don’t either. I have seen that when you bring up this problem, young men
assume you are annoying and controlling. One even went as far as saying that “men
have more rights because they are more competent than women in a lot of things.”
Since when were tasks split up between the sexes? Shouldn’t they be based on
individual skills? I would be interested to see these “roles” in society switched. Even
my female friends try not to pay attention to the problem in our society because
they are afraid it will make them seem unlikable to guys.
This topic has many different twists and turns. Most people don’t understand
that in some countries, women aren’t allowed to speak men other than their
husband without being shot. They don’t understand the frustration we feel when
hired for the same job as a man but at a lesser wage. Women are not weak, women
are not fragile; women are strong, brave, and are the same species as man. Genitals
should not decide whether we have the right to wear pants, or show our faces. It
should not decide if we are hired for a job nor should it decide what we are capable
of.
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Initial Inquiry Question
My initial question at the beginning of this project was what is feminism.
According to the Cambridge dictionary it is defined as “an organized effort to give
women the same economic, social, and political rights as men.” The next question
few questions were slightly more complicated. I wondered what specifically were
the rights still being fought for today. I also wondered why the word feminism had
now changed turned to a negative slang word used to describe an “overly confident
and aggressive woman.” What was being done to change the meaning of this word?
What are the different sides of this argument and why do not all women consider
themselves feminists? Do not all women want the same rights as men? Do all men
not women to have the same rights? What was the current mind set of young adults
today when presented the topic of feminism?
My Interest Topic
What originally sparked my interest in this topic is something that happened
to me a few weeks ago. I had watched The Wolf of Wall Street and a friend of mine
asked why I didn’t like it. I replied by saying that it was vulgar and depicted women
as incompetent and only as objects, not as people. He responded by rolling his eye
and mumbling, “fucking feminists.” At that moment I realized that I was a feminist. I
was a feminist because I didn’t believe it was right to have women depicted as
simply object for men to amuse themselves with. Women are individuals with rights,
rights that should be equal to men. After reading Emma Watson’s speech about the
HeforShe campaign I became more determined to research this topic and learn what
about the current feminist movement. Her speech inspired me to not let my gender
define me; it inspired me to change the meaning of this world in today’s society. I
would like to learn more about what a feminist really means.
Next Steps
I plan to continue to research my topic using the library database and the
Internet to find more articles. I hope to narrow my topic to a specific part of the
feminist movement through this research and find what I believe to be the most
important part of this controversial and complex topic. I hope to find some peer-
reviewed sources to help give my subject scholarly support and evidence to the
questions I posed earlier. I will continue to use major newspapers and websites
such as UN Women and The New York Times.
Max,
This definitely sounds like it will be an interesting topic to read about. While
writing the paper don’t forget to stay unbiased towards men. The last thing you
want is for men to read this and feel like they are being attacked. At one point in the
paper you stated the definition from a dictionary, remember Malcolm said that was
a no no. Include examples of countries and how these countries make women
inferior. Also maybe talk about the particular reason, if there is one that seems
evident that women may be seen as objects in movies. I would discuss why men
might see feminists as anti-man. And do genitals really determine whether or not we
can wear pants?
-Zack